Approved Tech Darth Vanitas' lightsaber

[Nazzu]

OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION

• Intent: To act as Vanitas' personal saberstaff.
• Image Source: Baako.
• Permissions: (Please link any Marketplace purchase approvals or other permissions to use other Writer’s submissions as part of the submission)
• Primary Source: https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Double-bladed_lightsaber/Legends

PRODUCTION INFORMATION

• Manufacturer: https://www.starwarsrp.net/threads/syna.133917/
• Affiliation: https://www.starwarsrp.net/threads/syna.133917/
• Model: N/A
• Modularity: No.
• Production: Unique.
• Material: Durasteel, Some electrum lining, A krayt dragon pearl to power it, along with 3 synthetic (red) kyber crystals on either side of the handle, to power the dual (Even triple?) phase nature of the double bladed lightsaber. Along with Cortosis lining around the area the pearl is in, Leather has been wrapped around where she holds the saber, for an easier time doing so, along with the other basic lightsaber components.
  

PHYSICAL SPECIFICATIONS

• Classification: Saberstaff
  Size: Average
• Weight: Heavy
• Color: The saber is red with a black core (thanks to the krayt dragon pearl), the actual metal is gunmetal black and gray, and of course the electrum is golden.

SPECIAL FEATURES

• Being a double bladed lightsaber (saberstaff) is a tad special in its own right, not to mention the krayt dragon pearl powering it, another special feature of the weapon is the three red synthetic kyber crystals on either side of the hilt, allowing it to extend further than most typical dual phase lightsabers, it is recommended the user keeps the length and time extended to a minimum, due to the amount of power that would be funneling through, though it is already longer than most sabers due to the fact two kyber crystals are almost always assisting the krayt dragon in supplying power to the weapon.

STRENGTHS

• It's a lightsaber, it can cut through most things
• The 6 Kyber crystals and one Krayt dragon pearl, make the dual phase functionality of the weapon more extreme than most others, able to stretch out up to two feet longer than its origin.

WEAKNESSES

• Standard, water, and lightsaber resistant materials.

DESCRIPTION
This was a gift from Synas loyal companion, Baako. The main pride of it being the electrum, and the krayt dragon pearl in the center in which Baako fought to earn himself. Of course, Syna had to help him in the actual construction, and retrieving of other materials, along with some help with the Kyber crystals, but otherwise, it's all him, and she cherishes it. It is pretty much her pride and joy at the moment. Especially considering its expensive materials and nature.

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[Runi Verin]

Nazzu

Hey there. Welcome to the site! Nice to see you jumping in feet first and already tackling the Factory. I'm afraid there's a few issues that'll need to be addressed first, but I'll try and guide you through the process as painless as possible.

• Manufacturer: Syna
• Affiliation: Syna.

Please can you hyperlink Syna's biography in these two sections.

• Classification: Saberstaff
• Weight: Heavy

You're missing the size rating that needs to be found between Classification and Weight.

• Color:

Empty field? We don't require this, but since you've added it, I'm guessing you missed filling it in.

Resistances:

• Energy (And other Blaster type weapons): How much protection does the material provide against this type of damage? Extreme
• Kinetic: How much protection does the material provide against this type of damage? High
• Lightsabers: How much protection does the material provide against this type of damage? Extreme
• Other: How much protection does the material provide against other types of damage? (Examples: Sonic, EMP/ION, Elemental. You must disclose each specific type that applies to this submission with its own rating.)Nothing out of the usual for a saber, i suppose.

We don't require any of this information either. I believe you've perhaps confused the Melee Weapon Template with the Armor Template.

SPECIAL FEATURES

• The double-bladed lightsaber—also called a Saberstaff, Lightsaber Lance, Doublesaber, Dualsaber, or Lightstaff, was a specialized type of lightsaber that consisted of a single hilt with a beam emitter at both ends, resulting in a weapon that was wielded in a similar manner to a traditional quarterstaff. Indeed, the design was likely influenced by the Zabrak quarterstaff, or zhaboka.[1]
  
  The double-bladed lightsaber was first invented by Dark Lords of the Old Sith Empire. However, many weapons of its design later came into the possession of the Sith's ancient adversary, the Jedi.

This is all going to be needed to be written in your own words as this is a direct rip from the Wookieepedia entry for Double-Bladed Lightsaber. Such plagiarism is against both the factory and board rules.

Please tag me when you've amended the above and I'll give it another review or approve accordingly.

 

[Nazzu]

Hello! I couldn't figure out how to tag you so i'm going to simply reply and let you know that i re-did it, if you could tell me how to tag for future reference that would be great .

Darth Vanitas' lightsaber.

Intent: To act as Vanitas' personal saberstaff. Image Source: My Fiancee drew it for me. Permissions: (Please link any Marketplace purchase approvals or other permissions to use other Writer’s submissions as part of the submission) Primary Source...

www.starwarsrp.net

 

[Runi Verin]

Nazzu

As stated in Delsin Shaw 's message (here), please amend the above submission rather than create a new one from scratch. Edit button can be found at the bottom of each post.

As to how to tag someone, you siimply need to write @ followed by their name ( e.g. Runi Verin ) and a list should automatically appear and populate. Example gif can be found under the cut.

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[Nazzu]

Runi Verin i've done as you asked.

 

[Runi Verin]

Approved.