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Approved Tech Dark Valkyrie Armor

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———Blackened Valkyrie———
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OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION
  • Intent: A personal armor for Teresa Pelles | Darth Pellax
  • Image Source: X
  • Canon Link: N/A
  • Permissions: X
  • Primary Source: X
PRODUCTION INFORMATION
TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS
  • Classification: Battle Armor
  • Weight: Very Light
  • Resistances:
    • Energy: Extreme
    • Kinetic: Very High
    • Lightsabers: Extreme
    • Force: Extreme
    • Elemental: Very High
    • EMP/ION: None
    • Disruptor: None
    • Acid: Low
    • Sonic: Very Low
    • Radiation: Very Low
SPECIAL FEATURES
  • Chest
    • Sith Runes - Magical glyphs that ward against the Light Side of the Force, most notably offensive abilities cast by those aligned with the Light.
  • Arms
    • Sith Runes - Magical glyphs that ward against the Light Side of the Force, most notably offensive abilities cast by those aligned with the Light.
    • Nightsister Enchantments
      • Touch of the Kiin’Dray - A Nightsister enchantment that imbues the wearer with the ability to apply a binding force to their hands to hold an individual or weapon in an near unbreakable grip.
  • Legs
    • Sith Runes - Magical glyphs that ward against the Light Side of the Force, most notably offensive abilities cast by those aligned with the Light.
    • Nightsister Enchantments
      • Speed of the Toocha - A Nightsister enchantment that imbues the wearer with short bursts of blindingly fast speed, allowing them to make energised leaps to cover remarkable distances.
  • Meditation crystals - These six deep red meditation crystals have been embedded around the armor, while it looks decorative, they were salvaged from her old armor that no longer fits. These crystals help maintain a high level of focus while wearing the gear.
  • Red Dantari crystal - This particular crystle is housed in the belt buckle that wraps around the waist of the armor. “Dantari crystals allowed the user a better focus on recovering spent Force energies, occasionally recycling the fierce, wild energy of combat to the wielder to fuel their Force power.”
  • Terentatek Hide - This hide which is connected to the back of the Plate armor offers a high resistance against force based attacks of all kinds. Like the Crystals, it was salvaged from her last set of armor.
STRENGTHS
  • This is Light for Battle armor - Each piece of the armor and even the bodyglove has sith runes hidden on the underside. This work of alchemy and Sith sorcery imbues the armor with lightness. In effect the armor feels barely noticeable when worn and does not hinder flight. The other runes which are visible offer other effects.
  • Stone Wall - Being battle armor, the design concept was to offer the best protection against the most common types of weapons.
  • Shiny stones - The many crystals embedded into the armor aid if higher levels of focus and recovering spent force so that it can allow the wearer to push for longer in force based battle.
WEAKNESSES
  • Dangerous Disruptors and Sonic soundwaves - While the armor does protect against most common damage, it does not protect against the uncommon. Disruptors and Sonic based weapons will deal their full damage to the wearer.
  • Weak points - The armor offers two good targets to an enemy. The face and wings. Due to mobility the wings cannot be armoured up and the head does not have a helmet, only a hood.
  • Energy sapper - Force-nullification items and creatures can massively impact the Battle armor by temporarily cancelling out the benefits.
DESCRIPTION
After undergoing a genetic makeover in the Genesis Pool, Teresa's old armor she had for a long time no longer fit the much taller, more ample and muscular frame. Using one of the three requests that the woman got as a condition for having her genetic makeup used after the transformation, the two ended up working on this armor.

The first part of the design of the armor was to ensure there were no more uncovered parts of exposed skin which offered zero protection. The challenging part was ensuring the back was well protected but did not interfere with Teresa’s wings. Rather than leaving a large gap, the middle of the back can be folded up the middle then strapped down when on.

Not all of this armor is new however, many parts was salvaged from her old armor, like the meditation Crystals, and hide that is now used for underneath the plates. However Teresa was not able to offer much more help beyond that. She spoke her idea’s and worked with Carnifex for the design as well as some parts, but the craftsmanship is ultimately the hands of Kaine Zambrano.

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HPI AI; Terraris Command
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Teresa Pelles | Darth Pellax Teresa Pelles | Darth Pellax

Nicely made, and I fond of the art, however I found some problems:
  • First, you cannot use Carnifex as manufacturer without Jesse's permission, so please ask him, or delete his name from the list.
  • Please use the Terentatek's Wookieepedia's link, we cannot accept links from the swtor's wikia.
  • Please link the Sith Runes under the Materials.
  • "unbreakable grip" ; there are no unbreakable things exist, please modify the wording to "nearly unbreakable" or to something similar.
  • And you forget to add to the Weaknesses, what happen with the Armour under Force suppression/Force Nullification effects. Please edit this.
 
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