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Approved Tech Silens Cursor Armor (Teresa Shan's Light armor)

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———Blackened Valkyrie———
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OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION
Intent: to develop a new outfit to suit the needs of teresa sham and to aid her abilities as a sith Assassin.
Image Source: http://i.imgur.com/eCCGUYW.jpg
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Canon Link:
http://swtor.wikia.com/wiki/Terentatek
http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Shell_spider_silk
http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Songsteel
http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Aurodium/Legends
Restricted Missions: N/A
Primary Source: N/A
PRODUCTION INFORMATION
Manufacturer: [member=”Teresa Shan”], [member="Darth Banshee"]
Model: Silens Cursor Armor
Affiliation: [member="Teresa Shan”]
Modularity: accessories
Production: Unique
Material:
Spider silk
Songsteel
Aurodium
Alchemised Terentatek Leather
Meditation crystals
TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS

Classification: Light armor

Weight: 4.37kg

Quality: 6

SPECIAL FEATURES


Bags -
There are a range of different sizes bags around the belt made from the terentatek leather.

Waterproof Hood -
The Hood unlike the rest of the outfit is waterproof. No one likes wet hair. To hide the Hood it can be tucked and zipped behind the collar.

Saber clips -
A clips to hang lightsabers from.

Meditation crystals -
Carefully held in place on the aurodium band there is six meditation crystals. While it looks apart of the design there is purpose for them. They help Teresa stay attuned to the force allowing her to draw upon it much easier due to her slow progress learning the force.

Strengths:
Saber resistant -
The pauldrons and breastplate are resistant to lightsabers due to the songsteel. Although it covers very little it could serve to save the life of the wearer.

blaster pistol and vibrosword resistance -
Due to the spider silk that covers most of the outfit it has a moderate resistance to blaster pistols and vibroswords.

Silent -
Due to the alchemy of the boots they give off almost no noise when walking or running. This allows the wearer to sneak up on in expecting victim's. Although it doesn't prevent the sound of twigs for example of snapping and giving out it's sound.

Force resistance -
The alchemised Terentatek leather that is under the silk offers a good resistance to force powers. The alchemy involved helps increase it's resistance.

Weaknesses:
Not protected areas -
The armor has several places that offer no coverage. Meaning the Upper back, waists, left upper arm, top center chest, head and neck, are all vulnerable to any kind of attacks.

Slugthrowers -
The armor offers no protection what so ever against any type of slugthrowers.

Elements -
The armor offers no protection against heat or cold making it a poor choice of clothing to go to planets like hoth. It also offers no protection against abilities like pyrokinesis or cryokinesis.

Force light -
The parts of armor that has been alchemised can be destroyed by force light.

DESCRIPTION

Due to Teresa’s recent change she has become in need of some new outfits other than the same robes she wears daily. Amongst the many outfits she now owns her light armor is one of the most important pieces she has now. It was crafted for her with the help of her master Sabrina Kurtass (aka [member="Darth Banshee"]). To suit Teresa’s abilities the outfit is rather light and flexible. This makes movement much easier with less restrictions. The armour is made with a variety of materials. The breastplate and pauldrons are made from the light metal songsteel that has been dipped in aurodium to give it a shining golden finish. The offer protection against lightsabers but offer very little coverage.

The spider silk and leather make up the majority of the outfit. Although it does not cover all areas. Due to the recent experiment Teresa had been subjected to the outfit is mostly backless only covering the the lower back and the very top around the back of the neck where a clip is. There is also gaps along the ist to just under the arms. There is three straps that keep the lower back up tight. The upper left arm is also exposed but there is a band made of pure aurodium and meditation crystals . Finally the last two exposed areas are the center of the upper chest and face. The most unique thing about this armor is the fact the boots give off almost no sound due to alchemy. This means Teresa can run, walk and land silently. The only way noise can be made is by object on the floor like broken glass or the infamous twigs. By no means is this an outfit designed to protect Teresa in a firefight.
 
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Teresa Shan said:
Weight: 2.67kg
Even if you consider songsteel to be an ultralight material, 2.67kg is roughly the same as a leather bike jacket. (source) If you want to wear a full body armor made of metal and leather, exposed portions or not, it's going to be at least 4 kgs or greater. You also need to account for the meditation crystals you have inlaid into the band.



Teresa Shan said:
Quality: 9
Your armor provides resistance to the force and boosts your ability to focus on drawing on the force. You also have your armor quality at nine, and this is an extremely lightweight piece of armor. Either make the armor heavier (than lightweight), reduce the quality, or reduce the amount of protection from the force it provides.



Teresa Shan said:
By no means is this an outfit designed to protect Teresa in a firefight.
Your armor quality is 9, which entirely negates any plausibility behind this statement. Either make this statement true by lowering the quality or amend your description.



Teresa Shan said:
Due to the alchemy of the boots they give off almost no noise when walking or running. This allows the wearer to sneak up on in expecting victim's. Although it doesn't prevent the sound of twigs for example of snapping and giving out it's sound.
Do you have a chaos canon or canonical example of this being done?
 
———Blackened Valkyrie———
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[member="Irina Volkov"]

I've bumped up the weight to 4.27kg

Lowered quality by 3

Also I don't have a canon or chaos Ccnon example for the boots. I was told it's completely possible to do as personally I'm not sure how the whole alchemy works. So I'm open to tweaking it to meet the needs.
 
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