Approved Starship Dalek E-Class Picket Carrier

[Onrai]

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Intent: To update the Dalek-class Assault Frigate to the proper specifications so Subach may sell the units it has purchased.
Development Thread: N/A
Manufacturer: Seinar Fleet Systems(originally), Subach-Innes(refit)
Model: Dalek-class
Affiliation: Independent
Modularity: Yes(fighter complement)
Production: Mass-Produced
Material: Durasteel
Description: Formerly a cruiser, now reclassified as a frigate, all the Dalek hulls purchased by Subach-Innes were decreased to the maximum frigate size, thanks to the trimming down of the engine exhaust vents. The result is a slower carrier that, while admittedly carrying less fighters and small craft, has superior anti-fighter capabilities. While considerably inferior to the Corusca-II, it does have the advantage of being much cheaper. With none left in the Imperial inventory, Daleks can be found in independent planetary space forces, often as main carriers providing fighter cover for heavier Adara or Peragus-class corvettes or other anti-warship vessels. It has little anti-warship punch, however, meaning that Daleks must rely on bombers or warship fire support to deal with threats such as those.
Classification: Carrier Frigate
Role: Picket Carrier
Height: 135m
Width: 220m
Length: 400m
Power Core Generator/Reactor: Solar Ionization Reactor
Hyperdrive Rating: Class 2
Minimum Crew: 400
Optimal Crew: 1500
Armaments: 20 point defense laser batteries, 4 turbolasers
Hangar: 48 fighters/bombers, 4 gunships, and 8 dropships
Non-Combative Attachments: Sensors, shields
Passenger Capacity: 1000
Cargo Capacity: 4000 metric tons
Consumables: 1.5 years
Sublight Speed and Maneuverability: Class 5

 

[Domino]

Link the other ships mentioned in your description.
@[member="Circe Savan"]

 

[Onrai]

http://starwarsrp.net/topic/17681-corusca-ii-class-picket-carrier/ is the Corusca II.

http://starwarsrp.net/topic/658-dalek-class-imperial-assault-frigate/ is the original Dalek hull.

 

[Domino]

Depending on how many units you've purchased this might need another production level.
Beef up the description some and maybe consider changing the flack to point defense like the original had.
@[member="Circe Savan"]

 

[Onrai]

Edited, @[member="Domino"].

 

[Domino]

Spotted a few more things, your opening statement "Formerly a cruiser classified as a frigate..." means grammatically that it is now neither of these classifications. You could say "Formerly a cruiser, but now classified as a frigate,"
Model is the class name, not ship type and classification would be Carrier Frigate. Lets people know at a glance what load-out you have.
@[member="Circe Savan"]

 

[Onrai]

haven't had anyone have an issue with it as such before, but alright. Edited.

@[member="Domino"]

 

[Domino]

Approved pending secondary!

 

[Lief]

*really wants you to edit the name of it but knows I'm being picky*

Approved.