Critique Wanted!

[Tathra Khaeus]

Hey guys, I'm a little lost as to what to do with Tathra at the moment. I'd really appreciate, some critisism from my fellow writers. Some ideas as to where to go with the character and perhaps what to focus on to improve my writing and the character.

Thanks.

 

[Darth Immortus]

You should figure out what inspired you to create your character in the first place and go from there. It's a question only you can answer.