Approved Tech Cloudburner's Original Lightsaber

[Cloudburner]

Image Source: Photomanipulation of Darth_Sidious's lightsabers
Development Thread: Founded in Nickel One at the time of the Battle Of Roche.
Manufacturer: Unknown.
Model: N/A
Intent: To create a weapon for Cloudburner and those who choose to carry on the legacy.
Affiliation: Cloudburner
Modularity: No
Production: Production: Unique
Classification: Lightsaber
Size: One and Two-Handed
Material: Typical Lightsaber components (Lightsaber Crystal, Handle etc.)
Length: Inactive: 12cm, Active: 149cm.
Weight: 0.8 Kilograms
Special Features:
- Has the Sunburner Family Logo on the bottom of the handle.

Spoiler

- Glows brighter in the dark.
Description:
When Cloudburner was an evil corrupt Republic Ranger in the Battle Of Roche, he acquired a Lightsaber within the ruins. It "called" to him, and he kept it. Now he is a Jedi, he can finally put the lightsaber to use. It's origins are unknown by anybody.

 

[Rusty]

RESEARCH REVIEW
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Star Wars Canon:
Pending initial review
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Starwars Chaos:
Pending initial review
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WITHOUT DEV THREADS
Pending initial review
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WITH DEV THREADS
Pending Initial review
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SUGGESTIONS
Pending Inital review

 

[Rusty]

Hi, my name is Rusty and I'll be your friendly neighborhood Factory judge.

Alright, so your concept is sound, but there's one glaring problem.

It actually was the force's gift to Cloudburner. It was blessed by the Force and crafted by the Force specially for Cloudburner.

In a word, no. Cloudburner is free to think that all he likes, but the Force cannot gift someone a lightsaber. If you change it to say that he thinks it was the Force's gift to him and that he thinks it was blessed by the Force, that's one thing. But no one can speak for the Force, and since we can't rightly ask it, there's no way to say that it either gave Cloudburner the lightsaber or blessed it for him.

[member="Cloudburner"]

 

[Cloudburner]

Edited. Let me know if I need to put a little more detail into it [member="Rusty"]

 

[Rusty]

- Is stronger within Cloudburner's grasp than other characters.

Any particular reason why it would be stronger? There are cases to be made for that, but it has to be backed up by something. Maybe a crystal he's particularly in tune with or something.

@Cloudburner

 

[Cloudburner]

Any particular reason why it would be stronger? There are cases to be made for that, but it has to be backed up by something. Maybe a crystal he's particularly in tune with or something.

@Cloudburner

It's kind of like a trait. It's partly due to the crystal, but mostly, it's due to the connection with the saber. I'm thinking about developing it into future family members.

 

[Cloudburner]

On second thought, I removed that. Tell me if I need to edit any further [member="Rusty"]

 

[Rusty]

Looks good, thanks.

Pending Approval

[member="Spencer Varanin"]

 

[Allyson Locke]

Approved.