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Approved Starship CJSG01 Light Cruiser "The Valkyrie"

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OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION
PRODUCTION INFORMATION
TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS
  • Classification: Frigate (Anaxes War College Classification.)
  • Role: Jedi Training Vessel, Light Escort Frigate, Reconnaissance Vessel, Heavy Systems Patrol Vessel, Dedicated Communications Vessel, Fleet Support Vessel, etc.
  • Length: 350 Metres.
  • Width: 195 Metres.
  • Height: 75 Metres.
  • Armament:Average Rating.
    • [4] Quad Turbolaser Cannon Turrets [Automated, Fast-Track Mountings, and Fire-Linked.]
    • [10] Dual Barbette Turbolaser Turrets [Fire-linked, Fast-track Mountings, Stutter-fire Capable.]
    • [10] Dual Barbette Ion Cannon Turrets [Fire-linked, Fast-track Mountings.]
    • [12] Quad Heavy Laser Cannon Turrets. [Automated, Fast-Track Mountings, and Fire-Linked.]
    • [2] Turreted Flexible Warhead Launchers [Variable Payloads**]
    • [15] Automated Barbette Rotary Point Defense Cannons [Automated, Fast-Track Mountings, and Fire-Linked.]
    • [15] Automated Barbette Quad Point Defense Warhead Launchers [Fire-linked, Fast-track Mountings.]
    • [15] Nanomissile Blister Pods, with Seeking Anti-missile Interception Protocols. (Thirty Nanomissiles per Blister.)
    • [15] Automated Barbette Antimissile Octets [Automated, Fast-Track Mountings, and Fire-Linked.]
  • Defences: Average Rating.
  • Hangar Space: Very High Rating (4 Squadrons)
  • Hangar Allocations:
  • Maneuverability Rating: 60 DPF - High Rating.
  • Speed Rating: High Rating.
  • MGLT: 90 MGLT
  • Maximum Atmospheric Speed: 1,125 Km/H
  • Primary Hyperdrive Rating: Class 1.0
  • Secondary Hyperdrive Rating: Class 8.0
  • Engine Unit(s): Frigate - Class Ion Engines - Eight Drive Units.
  • Secondary Propulsion Method: Integrated Repulsorlift Engines.
  • Primary Power Plant: Frigate - Class Hypermatter Reactor.
  • Secondary Power Plant: Solar Ionization Conversion Module(s) with Retractable Agrinium Collection Arrays.
  • Passengers:
    • Twenty Soldiers - Shipboard Security Complement
    • One Hundred Soldiers - Planetary Defense Company.
  • Crew Complement (Optimal): Fifty Officers and Enlisted Personnel, and Integrated Droid Brains.
  • Crew Complement (Skeletal): Twenty Officers and Enlisted Personnel, and Integrated Droid Brains.
  • Escape Craft: Six Escape Pods and Eight Ejectable Lifeboats
  • Cargo Capacity: 5,000 Metric Tonnes
  • Consumables: Seven Months.
STANDARD FEATURES
  • Standard [Frigate-Class, Military-Grade] Sensor Systems and Targeting Systems.
  • Standard [Frigate-Class, Military-Grade] Avionics Package.
  • Standard [Frigate-Class, Military-Grade] Navigation System.
    • Dedicated Precision MicroJump Computer.
  • Standard [Frigate-Class, Military-Grade] Life Support System.
    • (Automated Barrack Deck(s,) Integrated Training Centres, Mess Halls, Meditation Chambers, Recreational Decks, Etc.)
  • Standard [Frigate-Class, Military-Grade] Damage and Hazard Control Systems.
  • Standard [Frigate-Class, Military-Grade] Tractor and Pressor Beam Emitters.
  • Standard [Frigate-Class, Military-Grade] Anti-Ion Emission Tracker (Anti-Hyperspace Tracking.)
  • Advanced [Frigate-Class, Military-Grade] Communication Systems, with Encrypted Military Keys.
  • Standard [Frigate-Class, Military-Grade] Shift and Relativistic Shielding.
  • Standard [Frigate-Class, Military - Grade] Anti-Concussion Force Fields.
  • Standard [Frigate-Class, Military - Grade] Animated Metal Sealant, with Automated Repair Drones.
ADVANCED SYSTEMS
Strengths
  • Highly Automated, with Animated Metal Sealant, Automated Repair Drones, and Minor Regenerative Properties.
  • Advanced Countermeasure, and Communication Systems.
  • Reinforced Defensive Capabilities on External Emplacements.
  • Advanced Communication Systems - Capable of Punching through Conventional Jamming.
  • Increased Hangar Capacity.
Weaknesses
  • Automated and Slaved Systems; Utterly Crippled if Disabled.
  • Limited EMP and Ion Resistance; Proximity Dependent.
  • Limited Firing Arc's - Ventral and Dorsal Section; Engine Blocks (Capital-Grade Weapons.)
  • Turreted Warhead Launchers; Direct Connection to Internal Payload(s.)
  • Exposed Primary Engine Block(s.)
DESCRIPTION
With the expansion of the Jakku Jedi Enclave, and the need for it to remain hidden and secret; Jedi Master Vexander Graves saw the need to have support vessel with enough capacity and equipment to provide support to the underground Enclave while keeping such support in a safe distance from the facilities in the planet while providing also an alternative training option offworld.

After some thought and travels to The Jedi Temple in Coruscant, Vexander contacted the Republic Engineering Corporation to commision and modify a REC-LC01 "Negotiator" to meet the specific needs and specifications from the Jedi himself.

Serving as a supply ship to the Jakku Enclave in case of emergency while staying in edge of the Jakku system, the ship has been upgraded with faster sublight speed and maneuravility. The installation of more engines caused the hull to be increased in width slightly and thus allowing the addition of a Meditation and Training Chamber where Jedi can continue their studies in the ways of the Force.

In order to provide the right support to the Enclave and also to assist in different operations and missions across the galaxy, the hangars of the ship have been increased to support the Squadrons belonging to the Cyan Jedi Support Group. These squadrons outfitted with the upgraded SSCJ01 X-Wings along with the UTCJ-79E Support Crafts standby to scramble as needed under the command of the Jedi Master.

Republic Engineering Republic Engineering
 
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Hello again, looks like I'm the only Judge for you.​
  • Your Hangar Space is a bit too ambiguous for my liking; the number of Squadrons a vessel of this size and rating would be able to carry is two, whereas the current description could be read to allow for as many as four. Unless you want to tinker with the ratings to allow more Squadrons, I suggest the following, though you may freely diverge from it should you so desire, so long as it's sufficiently clear.
    • "Hangar Allocation: Can carry two Squadrons of Starfighters and/or Support Craft, typically a mixture of SSCJ X-Wings and UTCJ-70E Support Crafts."​
  • Your UTCJ-70E link is broken.​
  • I'd suggest linking Animated Metal Sealant since its functions are less obvious to the casual reader than most of the Valkyrie's subcomponents.​
  • "... while keeping a safe distance from it to support the" - Looks like you might have been cut off in the Description. You might want to remove the ("pending Submission") parts too, replacing them with links would likely be the cleanest alternative.​
 
AMCO AMCO

Hello once again! It's nice to have the same judge so that we get the same line of thought overall. So here is what I have done:

  • Setup the Hangar Capacity to Very High and decreased the Speed to High in order to allow for 3 Squadrons (2 XSCJs and 1 UTCJ).
  • Fixed the link.
  • Animated Metal Sealant links have been added.
  • Fixed the Description wording.
 
Vexander Graves Vexander Graves AMCO AMCO ,

Everything here balances in terms of ratings. However, when it comes to actual squadron counts, the length listed per rating is the minimum in order to obtain that number of squadrons.

In other words, since this ship sits at 330 meters, it would actually use the 200 meter" ratings (or alternatively viewed, the "200-349 meter" ratings).

My suggestion would be to simply increase the length of the ship to 350 meters, and we can keep everything the way it currently is otherwise. Alternatively, we could keep the 330 meter length and reduce the squadron count to 2 squadrons.
 
Vexander Graves Vexander Graves , I'd like to apologize for misreading your submission (and thanks to AMCO AMCO for catching me on this). I saw your "Very High" rating for the hangar and missed reading the "Very" part of it and just saw the "High".

It's entirely up to you, but if you'd like, you can change the length back to 330 meters if you so desire. If you're fine with that 350 meter length, "Very High" actually gives you 4 squadrons of ships. Personally, I would think that an extra 20 meters on a capital ship is worth an extra squadron of small craft to me.
 
PRE-FACTORY TEMPLATE
  • Submission Name: CJSG01 Light Cruiser "The Valkyrie"
  • Link to Submission:
  • Reason for Pre-Factory Request: Addition of squadron.

Moved to pre-factory per OP request.

Please remember to include a list of changes when you tag a member of factory staff to move the submission back to live judgement.
 
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