Approved Location Canderous Ordo Medical Center

[Rianna Organa]

Name: Canderous Ordo Medical Center
(Canderous was also called the Preserver felt this was fitting to name a place of healing to someone nick named the Preserver)

Image source

http://www.reachtoteachrecruiting.com/images/china-health-care.jpg- the back of the hospital

http://www.payette.com/blog/2013/09-16-13/091613_cover.jpg- the front of the hospital

http://f.fastcompany.net/multisite_files/fastcompany/slideshow/2012/11/3002960-slide-slide-7-inline-best-medicine-fixing-modern-hospital.jpg- image of what one treatment room could look like

Intent: To provide a place for the mandalorian healers, and Jedi healers to interact, train, and heal the wounded.

Classification: Hospital

Location: Keldabe, Mandalore

Affiliation: Mandalorian

Description of the hospital and what is found on each floor -
This building has a total of 10 stories above ground and 3 stories below ground. -

First Floor - Emergency Care
Second Floor - labs and xray
Third Floor - Administration
Fourth - Maternity
Fifth - MandalMedical offices and research Labs
Sixth - Ten - Treatment of the sick and wounded

Below Ground
First - Mortuary
Second - Medical supply warehouse
Third is the underground garage for ambulances,field equipment, and transports for the outreach program.

The roof can support two shuttles at a time to bring in the wounded, this is also where the first responder medical teams deploy from. Shuttles provided by MandalTech.

Personnel are doctors, nurses, medics, volunteers, and administrative to ensure the hospital maintains cutting edge equipment and optimal medical care. The medical center also serves as headquarters for MandalMedical. Funding comes from MandalTech owned by [member="Ordo"], and MandalMedical a subsidiary of MandalTech owned by Rianna and by donations given by the other clans.

The main purpose of the hospital is to provide a central location on Mandalore for medical care, the mandalorian medical corps, and provide headquarters for MandalMedical. With the help the assistance of other Healers and Medics ([member="Briika Detta"] [member="Anastasia Rade"]) this facility will have an outreach program for mandalorians who are too far from Keldabe to reach a facility such as the medical center, and to follow the mandalorian forces into battle through the use of the medical teams and the medical frigate. Clinics being set up by medical teams in the remote regions of mandalore will be supported with supplies, transportation and staff.

With MandalMedical there to support the functions of the hospital, the hospital is guaranteed to be the primary recipients of any technology developed, or breakthroughs in medical care.

The medical center will support the Medical frigate, Jahaal'got.

 

[Reverance]

[member="Rianna Ar'klim"]

So, this feels like a pretty massive structure. And from the pictures, I get that feeling as well. But all in all, while this is relatively innocuous and largely for roleplay and not pvp, I feel like the description is relatively scant. For instance, you don't have any description about the personnel, how it's funded, etc. etc. The point of these subs is to really not just help you develop the idea, but also help those who intend to write with you. I'm gonna need you to give me just a bit more in terms of details. Logistics, a more discrete description of capabilities, the sort of personnel that are hired. Anything, really.

 

[Rianna Organa]

[member="Reverance"] - Is this better?

 

[Reverance]

[member="Rianna Ar'klim"] Yes, thank you for the extra details.

Approved pending secondary.

[member="Valiens Nantaris"]

 

[Valiens Nantaris]

Amusingly ironic name for a medical centre.

Approved.

 

[Valiens Nantaris]

Approved.