rain21199
The One Horned Demon
Hey guys remember me?
I'm writing a novel about what it's like to be a kid. I obviously not a professional writer, so I was looking for a group of people that could give me criticism about it, and I thought hey why not take it to the rp. I mean you guys write everyday. I know some obvious problems about my writing is that I don't give enough details in my writing, and that I feel like im not really going in depth in the story, it only feels like im listing off events, so I was wondering if you guys could give me ideas on how I could improve on these things in my writing. I will be posting paragraphs and stuff here.
I'm writing a novel about what it's like to be a kid. I obviously not a professional writer, so I was looking for a group of people that could give me criticism about it, and I thought hey why not take it to the rp. I mean you guys write everyday. I know some obvious problems about my writing is that I don't give enough details in my writing, and that I feel like im not really going in depth in the story, it only feels like im listing off events, so I was wondering if you guys could give me ideas on how I could improve on these things in my writing. I will be posting paragraphs and stuff here.