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Butterflies in Reverse

rain21199

The One Horned Demon
Writer
Hey guys remember me?
I'm writing a novel about what it's like to be a kid. I obviously not a professional writer, so I was looking for a group of people that could give me criticism about it, and I thought hey why not take it to the rp. I mean you guys write everyday. I know some obvious problems about my writing is that I don't give enough details in my writing, and that I feel like im not really going in depth in the story, it only feels like im listing off events, so I was wondering if you guys could give me ideas on how I could improve on these things in my writing. I will be posting paragraphs and stuff here.
 

Ire'Rain Sekairo

Look To Your Demons
Character
*breaks through the wall*
I VOLUNTEER AS TRIBUTE!
I WILL HELP YOU
VEN IS HERE
*high fives*
you got dis
 
@[member="Cain Laatl"]

I am a newbie writer and I finished my first novel a few months ago (well, it has to be checked, spellchecked, corrected and stuff) and I would love to help you. My problems might be the same. I understand it when I am writing, but I just can't write these things. But I read really much and I love seeing descriptions and powerful stuff. I think I could help you. ;)
 

rain21199

The One Horned Demon
Writer
Well thanks guys/girls, I will post the first chapter when I get there. (Which will take awhile because I don't have much time to write)
 
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