Factory Denied Bryn'adûl | Reinforcement Mutagen 2A

[Tathra Khaeus]

Bryn'adûl | Reinforcement Mutagen 2A

OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION

Spoiler

• Intent: To detail the Mutagens used by Tathra.
• Image Source: X
• Permissions: N/A
• Primary Source: N/A

PRODUCTION INFORMATION

• Name: Superior Reinforcement Mutagen
• Manufacturer: The Bryn'adûl
• Affiliation: Tathra Khaeus
• Homeworld: Draemidus Prime
• Production: Unique
• Modularity: N/A
• Material: Mutation
• Colour: N/A

PHYSICAL SPECIFICATIONS

• Classification:
• Weight: Extreme
• Resistances -
• Blasters: Very High
• Kinetic: Extreme
• Lightsabers: Very High
• Force: High

SPECIAL FEATURES

• The Mutation reinforces the Sinew and Ligaments and joint muscles throughout Tathra's body with reinforced contraction muscles that add additional force to Tathra's strength whilst also heavily increasing the durability of both the Sinew & Ligaments.

Strengths:

• Incredible durability
• Additional Speed & Strength
• Force Resistant
• Lightsaber Resistant

Weaknesses:

• Instability is incredibly dangerous

DESCRIPTION:
The Superior Reinforcement Mutagen 2A is an enhanced variation of reinforcement mutagens. These are powerful mutagens, crafted from incredibly powerful alchemy and cosmic energy. The 2A in particular is built to help increase speed and durability for savage strikes.

 

[Runi Verin]

Archived for inactivity in the Pre-Factory. Please place a request in here should you wish this item to be retrieved once more.

 

[Runi Verin]

Moved to Pre-Factory now. Please remember to make a note at the bottom of your submission summarizing the changes you have made and tag a member of the Factory Staff once you're ready for active judgement.

 

[Tathra Khaeus]

Runi Verin - Ready for live judgement.

Changes made:
Updated format
Updated Resistances

 

[Ravenfire]

Tathra Khaeus

Hi there I am gonna be judging your submission today,

Currently you are severely under powered

Unique -4
Weight: Extreme -3
Resistances:
Very High +2
Extreme +3
None -3
Average 0

All up gives you a -5 under the rating scheme.

Secondly what do you mean by
Material: Alchemic Mutation
is this force alchemy or some other sort of alchemy? Might I also suggest you add the resistances to your strengths and weaknesses.

 

[Avo]

Tathra Khaeus

What's the status on this submission? Please see the review given above and notify the Judge when changes are made.

Thanks!

 

[Tathra Khaeus]

Ravenfire

Upped the resistances to be balanced, also I would've thought the durability factor would've covered the resistances but I've added more specifics.

 

[Ravenfire]

Tathra Khaeus
So now we have gone over by one point slightly but that should be fine

Unique -4
Weight: Extreme -3
Resistances:
Very High +2
Extreme +3
Very High +2
High +1
= +1

Also can I please get more clarification than just mutations on what exactly this is as at the moment in your words

DESCRIPTION:
The Superior Reinforcement Mutagen 2A is an enhanced variation of reinforcement mutagens. These are powerful mutagens, crafted from incredibly powerful alchemy and cosmic energy. The 2A in particular is built to help increase speed and durability for savage strikes.

They are some form of alchemy with a mutagen and also have cosmic energy or "the force" imbuing them.

 

[Ravenfire]

Tathra Khaeus

Archiving for inactivity. If you want this moved back to active judging, please request here.