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Private Break It To Make It

Location: Mustafar, Abandoned Mining Facility
Tags: Alana Calloway Alana Calloway


The heat was oppressive, even through the shielding of the platform. Mustafar's blackened rock and molten veins stretched into the distance, the air shimmering with the constant, restless motion of the planet's infernal rivers.

Natima Vando stood near the edge of a jagged overlook, clad in light combat armor that bore no insignia, no clear allegiance. It was practical, made for movement—exactly what she expected of her apprentice.

Her current face, a sharp-featured woman with red hair tied back, was set in a neutral expression. Green eyes, keen and patient, flicked toward the entrance to the platform. Alana was late.

Not by much. But late was late.

Natima didn't check a chrono. Didn't move. Instead, she ran one gloved hand over the small vibroblade at her belt, as if reacquainting herself with the feel of it. A subtle reminder.

This wasn't a lesson in punctuality. This was a test.

She listened for the approach, the shift of boots against metal, the telltale weight in a step that gave away a person's state of mind. When Alana arrived, Natima finally turned, her voice as smooth as durasteel cooled in the dark.

"You're slower than I expected." A pause. A slight tilt of the head, assessing. "But that's good. It means you're cautious. Careful. Or it means you're uncertain."

She took a single step forward, posture relaxed, but there was no mistaking the predator in her stance.

Several of her vibroknifes lined her left side, ready for use. The skin of her elbows remained exposed, ready to shift and draw the blades when she deemed necessary, but for now, it was merely an interview.

"So which is it?"
 

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Break It To Make It
Armor:
N/A

Weapons:
HG-88 Big Iron
SD-L1 Long Blaster
HESTIZO-201 "Silverrain" Vaccine
1 x VB-113 "Tidefall" Class Vibroblade
Gear:
Slicing Glove
DS-102 "Aegis" Personal Energy Shield
Sentinel Tech Gloves
VKA-7J "Hurricane" Combat Stimulant
G1 Omni Link

Alana's boots scraped against the metal of the platform as she stepped onto it, the weight of her pack shifting with each movement. The heat had been unbearable out there, the cracked volcanic landscape unforgiving. She was covered in soot, her once-pristine uniform now a dull, grimy mess. Sweat clung to the back of her neck, trickling down her spine.

Her breath came in slow, steady pulls, but there was no mistaking the weariness in her posture. The journey had taken more out of her than she cared to admit—Mustafar was a hellscape, but it was the training, the constant testing that drained her. She came to a halt, finding her instructor standing there with all the self righteousness she expected an assassin to have.

She could feel Natima's eyes on her the moment she stepped into view.

Alana didn't rush, didn't try to act as if she wasn't exhausted. She set her pack down with a grunt, the strain in her movements telling enough of the story. Her hands were smudged, but the gleam in her red eyes didn't waver.

She squared her shoulders, lifting her chin just enough to meet Natima's gaze, still brimming with the quiet defiance she couldn't shake. She wasn't about to make excuses.

"Uncertain," She replied, the word lingering in the air. A beat passed, and she allowed herself a small smirk, though it was tempered with the weight of her tiredness. "But I'll get there."

She stood still for a moment, letting the silence settle.

"Not bad for a first run, huh?" She added dryly, brushing the soot from her sleeve. "You really enjoy this, don't you? I mean, nothing seems to bother you now, huh?"

It wasn't a question—it was an observation. A challenge wrapped in a layer of sarcasm.

One she was certain would result in a smack down.

 
Natima tilted her head, watching Alana with the slow, unblinking patience of a predator sizing up its prey.

She saw the exhaustion, the grime, the strain in her muscles as she dropped the pack. She heard the weariness beneath the bravado, the quiet defiance simmering just beneath the surface.

And she smirked.

Not out of amusement.

Not even out of cruelty.

But because this was the moment she had been waiting for.

"You think I enjoy this?" She mused, stepping forward, boots barely making a sound against the platform. Her voice was soft, too soft, the kind of softness that promised something sharp beneath.

She reached out, slow and deliberate, and without ceremony, wiped a streak of soot from Alana's cheek with the pad of her thumb. It was almost a gesture of familiarity. Almost something intimate. But to Natima, it was a mark.

But then she pressed—just lightly—just enough to make a point.

"If I enjoyed it," she murmured, leaning in, her green eyes gleaming in the dim light, "You'd be dead."

She let the words settle, let the weight of them press down before pulling back.

Then—she laughed. A short, sharp exhale, as if she were letting Alana in on some kind of private joke.

"But I do like seeing you crawl back in one piece."

Her smirk widened, the ghost of something knowing flickering behind her gaze.

"Uncertain," she echoed, as if testing the word. Then she scoffed, shaking her head. "That won't do. You'll get there? You better."

She turned on her heel, the motion crisp, controlled. A hand flicked in the air—dismissive, yet expectant.

"Get yourself ready," She called over her shoulder. "Then we'll see how much of that defiance is still standing."

And just like that, she was gone.

If Alana didn't think quickly, she would be as well.
 

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Break It To Make It
Armor:
N/A

Weapons:
HG-88 Big Iron
SD-L1 Long Blaster
HESTIZO-201 "Silverrain" Vaccine
1 x VB-113 "Tidefall" Class Vibroblade
Gear:
Slicing Glove
DS-102 "Aegis" Personal Energy Shield
Sentinel Tech Gloves
VKA-7J "Hurricane" Combat Stimulant
G1 Omni Link

Alana exhaled sharply through her nose, barely suppressing the instinctual flicker of irritation. That woman had a way of getting under her skin, of pressing just the right buttons to make her feel watched—like a specimen under a microscope, her reactions cataloged for later use.

She ran a hand through her soot-streaked hair, letting out a dry chuckle.

"You'll get there? You better."


Damn her. She hated how much she liked the way Natima said it. Like she already knew the answer.

Alana rolled her shoulders, shaking off the lingering weight of exhaustion. The aches, the heat, the sand that had worked its way into her boots—none of it mattered now. Natima had set the pace. And Alana wasn't about to fall behind.

She grabbed her pack, slinging it over her shoulder with a grunt. Whatever the Shi'ido had planned next, Alana would be ready. Or at least, she'd look like she was.

Then she realized, Natima was gone.

Not the kind of gone where she simply walked away.

No footsteps. No sound. No trace.

Just—gone.

Her fingers twitched instinctively toward her belt, hovering near the grip of her pistol. The weight of her pack suddenly felt like a liability, something that would slow her down if this turned into a real fight.

And she knew it would.

Natima had been testing her from the moment they met. Not just with words, not just with the grueling hell she'd been thrown into on Mustafar—but now. Now, when she was tired, weighed down, just enough off-balance for Natima to see if she'd fall.

Alana wasn't about to give her that satisfaction.

She moved. Not quickly—Natima would expect panic. She wouldn't give her that, either.

Instead, she took a slow, deliberate step back, shifting her stance, loosening her shoulders. Eyes scanning the shadows, her breathing steady. The Shi'ido could be anywhere. Could be anything.

Alana knew better than to rely on sight alone.

She closed her eyes for half a second, reaching out—not with the Force, not in some grand display of power, but in the way a predator listens for its hunter.

The air was still.

Too still.

Her fingers curled around her pistol grip, her hand reached for her vibroblade as she began a slow retreat.

She was not about to get caught flat-footed.

 


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TAG: Alana Calloway Alana Calloway
Gear: Vibro-Daggers, Combat Jumpsuit

There would be a whisper of movement—just enough to be noticed, just enough to keep Alana on edge. A trick of the light? A shift in the heat haze rising from the scorched ground?

Then, a voice. Low, teasing, drifting from nowhere and everywhere all at once.

"Smart. But not fast enough."

The moment stretched, brittle as glass. Then it shattered.

Natima struck from the earth itself—no warning, no mercy. A blur of motion, a shift in form, her body twisting mid-strike. The Shi'ido's fingers, initially human, now sharpened into talon-like claws, slashed toward Alana's exposed flank, testing her reflexes. Her body seemed more akin to a living mass of earth than anything humanoid, as she set herself upon Alana.

She wasn't trying to kill the poor woman. Not yet.

She was measuring her. Seeing how much fight she had left in her bones.

The moment Alana reacted—dodge, block, counter—it wouldn't matter. Natima would already be gone again, slipping back into the shattered earth like a ghost.

This wasn't just an attack.

This was a lesson.

The next one however...Alana would not be so lucky.


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Break It To Make It
Armor:
N/A

Weapons:
HG-88 Big Iron
SD-L1 Long Blaster
HESTIZO-201 "Silverrain" Vaccine
1 x VB-113 "Tidefall" Class Vibroblade
Gear:
Slicing Glove
DS-102 "Aegis" Personal Energy Shield
Sentinel Tech Gloves
VKA-7J "Hurricane" Combat Stimulant
G1 Omni Link

Alana felt the shift before she saw it. The unnatural stillness in the air, the weight of unseen eyes pressing down on her shoulders.

Then—movement. A whisper of motion from below.

Instinct screamed.

She twisted, raw muscle memory wrenching her body sideways as Natima's claws sliced through the space where her ribs had been a heartbeat before. Too close. A breath closer, and she would've felt flesh part beneath those wicked talons.

Alana hit the ground hard, rolling with the momentum, boots kicking up dust as she snapped her pistol up—only to find nothing. No target. Just the heat-warped air and the unsettling quiet that followed in Natima's wake.

Her teeth clenched.

Not fast enough? Maybe. But she was still standing.

A slow breath steadied her pulse. This wasn't a fight. In fact Alana wasn't sure what the hell it was, as this monstrosity was something she had never even heard of before.

For all Alana knew, Natima let this damn monster out, and now it was hounding here to make this training course even more difficult.

Her fingers flexed around her pistol grip before she holstered it. Then the realization hit her.

This wasn't a battle she'd win with a gun.

Instead, she reached for her vibroblade.

Though even that, felt like foolish optimism at best.

"Alright," She muttered, rolling her shoulders as she rose to her feet. A smirk curled at the edge of her lips, sharp despite the heat, the exhaustion, the ever-present ache in her bones.

"What the hell was that?" Her stance shifted, loose but coiled, blade held low. "...hey, are you like, out there still?"

 

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