Bio-Organic Slip Field Gland

[Mellifluous Magenta]

OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION

• Intent: Create a specific technology that forms part of the basis of the Acrobat Nuetralizer Model 1’s capabilities.
• Image Source: N/A
• Canon Link: Tractor Pressor
• Permissions: Sword Herald Special Purpose Industries (X)
• Primary Source: N/A

PRODUCTION INFORMATION

• Manufacturer:
  
  • First United Astral Engineering
  • Sword Herald Special Purpose Industries
• Affiliation:
  
  • House Io
  • Exclusive Writers - Marketplace Purchase or Direct Permission
• Market Status: Closed-Market
• Model: N/A
• Modularity: Yes
  
  • May be Implanted in Bio-Organic Nuetralizers and/or HRDs
  • Compatible with Organic, Cybernetic, and Software Modifications
• Production: Mass-Produced
• Material: Vong Biot Tissue

SPECIAL FEATURES

• Slip Field Gland - A Vong biot gland which generates pressor fields in the Nuetralizer’s immediate area, nullifying the effects of air friction, drag, and similar forces on the chassis. This gland facilitates the execution of dazzling feats of speed and agility, by nullifying friction-generating forces which act to slow the Nuetralizer down.
• Variable Field Strength and Distribution - Strength and distribution of pressor fields around the chassis can be adjusted on the fly, depending on the needs of the situation.

STRENGTHS

• Gas Repellent - The pressor fields can also function to repel gas, making them a viable defense against deleterious chemical or biological agents.
• Frictionless Velocity - Without friction or drag, spectacular feats of speed and agility are rendered possible, if the Nuetralizer has equipped with Bio-Organic Repulsor Cells to generate propulsion. Feats including underwater propulsion at extreme speeds, nigh-limitless acceleration in the air, and achieving seemingly preternatural velocities on land and air are rendered possible, to the point of being faster than the unaugmented human eye can process.

WEAKNESSES

• Propulsion - By itself, the Bio-Organic Slip Field Gland means little without an additional mechanism of propulsion, typically a jetpack, repulsors, or even the Force.
• Alpha Red - Alpha Red toxin can kill the gland, likely causing extreme bleeding, liquefaction, and a host of other deleterious effects.
• Dependent Power - The gland does not function as its own source of power. Should it be severed from the host Nuetralizer’s bio-reactor or unable to draw power due to some malfunction, it will cease to operate.
• Vong Tissue - The gland is allergic to Baffor tree pollen, due to its construction out of Vong Biot tissue, much like the crab armor worn by the Yuuzhan Vong. Naturally, exposure to this substance can be fatal or deadly to various degrees, for both the organ itself and the Nuetralizer, as well.

DESCRIPTION
Developed in tandem with the Acrobat Nuetralizer Model 1, the Bio-Organic Slip Field Gland forms part of the basis of the technology utilized to develop the fastest land Nuetralizer ever created. Designed to remove friction from the equation of speed, the Slip Field Gland allows the Nuetralizer to achieve unprecedented velocities in sea, air, and on land, with less energy needed to reach and sustain them. Intended for use on a Bio-Organic, Vong-derivative chassis, the gland follows suit in utilizing Vong-derivative tissue in its construction and as such has all the weaknesses of such technologies. Nevertheless, the Bio-Organic Slip Field Gland is considered to be the anchor that makes such a fast Nuetralizer feasible. It is hoped to prove a key innovation in the pursuit of speed, unlimited.

 

[Krass Wyms]

Mellifluous Magenta

An interesting concept but after discussion with John Locke the conclusion that this is not how vong cells function was concluded. So there are a couple options. Biots were multi cellular in nature and grown to become what they were. The cells were not individually able to do feats. Without supporting canon evidence this is not going to pass.

Return this to pre-factory and work on it.
or
I can deny it

 

[Mellifluous Magenta]

Power Gland - Generates an energy field capable of resisting lightsaber strikes
Glistaweb - Generates a "charge-neutralizing field" capable of turning away blaster bolts
Mycogens/Mycogen - Genetic mutations/bio-organisms that generate light
Plasma Eel - bioengineered grenades that utilize plasma energy

These cells are intended as an outgrowth of canon technology, as Vong organs/cells have been shown to be capable of generating fields and other technological effects. While there is no mention of Vong technology generating pressor fields (If there was, I probably wouldn't have subbed this to begin with), the technology is, in my opinion, versatile enough to achieve such a thing.

Krass Wyms

 

[Krass Wyms]

Mellifluous Magenta

Those are not cells, those are organs which is yes made up of cells. Going by a medical news article it could be trillions in the body but numberrs are still unclear and it is guess work. Vong cells haven't been shown to, vong organs have been yes. Because there is more then enough cells within the organ usually harvested from a creature.

As I said you have two options without providing canon evidence that vong cells can do such feats.

Return to pre-factory or have it denied.

 

[Mellifluous Magenta]

Summary of Changes

• Minor Grammar Edit
• Changed from "Cells" to a Singular "Gland"

Krass Wyms

EDIT:

• Expanded Variable Field Strength and Distribution Section

 

[Krass Wyms]

Mellifluous Magenta

Looks better thank you now to the next section of edits.

• Slip Field Gland - A Vong biot gland which generates pressor fields in the Nuetralizer’s immediate area, nullifying the effects of air friction, drag, and similar forces on the chassis. This gland facilitates the execution of dazzling feats of speed and agility, by nullifying friction-generating forces which act to slow the Nuetralizer down.
• Variable Field Strength and Distribution - Strength and distribution of pressor fields around the chassis can be adjusted on the fly, depending on the needs of the situation.

Propulsion - By itself, the Bio-Organic Slip Field Gland means little without an additional mechanism of propulsion, typically a jetpack, repulsors, or even the Force.

Pressors are repulsors which means this generates its own means of propolsion. Making this weakness null. You are going to

Frictionless Velocity - Without friction or drag, spectacular feats of speed and agility are rendered possible, if the Nuetralizer has equipped with Bio-Organic Repulsor Cells to generate propulsion. Feats including underwater propulsion at extreme speeds, nigh-limitless acceleration in the air, and achieving seemingly preternatural velocities on land and air are rendered possible, to the point of being faster than the unaugmented human eye can process.

Getting some speed is fine but outpacing an A-wing one of the fastest fighters to the point it can't be seen. Just Being able to instantly appear like a character in DBZ or Bleach behind someone and then get away avoiding any counter is highly unbalanced. If you want to increase the natural speeds of one using it yes but without heavy weaknesses to balance this is going to have to be removed or altered.

 

[Mellifluous Magenta]

Before I continue,

Are these the last remaining edits? If not, can you please list out any others you will be asking me to make in your next post? I would have preferred if all the necessary edits were all listed out in a single post. It is easier for both of us that way.

Krass Wyms

 

[Krass Wyms]

Mellifluous Magenta

Unknown depending on how you make edits, how you respond. These could be the last or there could be new ones required.

 

[Krass Wyms]

Mellifluous Magenta

what is the status of this submission?

 

[Mellifluous Magenta]

I'll handle with this later. Archive for now, please.

Krass Wyms

 

[Krass Wyms]

As you wish