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Codex Denied Bamayar IV

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OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION

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  • Intent: To house unused droids and a hiding place for Jedi
  • Image Credit: https://listverse.com/2015/04/18/10-planets-from-the-star-wars-universe-that-exist-in-our-own/
  • Canon: N/A
  • Permissions: N/A
    [*]Links: N/A

GENERAL INFORMATION

    • Planet Name: Bamayar IV
    • Demonym: Bamayarian
    • Region: Mid Rim
    • System Name: Caz
    • System Features: Has one sun called "Fedah", Caz only has two planets which include Bamayar IV and Pebiror, it takes 20 Coruscant Days to complete a year here.
    • Location: Neighbor of Rakata Prime
    • Major Imports: [ What the planet frequently buys from other planets. Common materials and ores should just be listed (Ex. Durasteel ore), while anything special or rare should be linked. ]
    • Major Exports: Top Carbonite Exporter of the Unknown Regions of Mid Rim
    • Unexploited Resources: Gold and Agrocite
GEOGRAPHIC INFORMATION

[*]Gravity: Standard
[*]Climate: Mars-like temperature, can also be technology-controlled
[*]Primary Terrain: Canyons, volcanoes, and craters
[*]Atmosphere: Type I

LOCATION INFORMATION
  • Capital City: Andolens
  • Planetary Features: The planet is equipped with many pieces of tech, the houses look very futuristic. I would describe it as an Urban place.
  • Major Locations:

    Bamayarian Jedi Temple -
    This is where the Jedi who hide from the Sith and the Empire live. They teach the fellow Bamayarians the ways of the force. The Jedi Council visits here occasionally. This is the Force Nexus of the planet.

    Bamayar IV Droid Factory -
    This is where the "good" droids get produced. Most of them are given throughout Bamayar IV to help the citizens. Some of them are tasked to help the Jedi in their space missions.
  • Force Nexus (Optional): Light
    Intent: To get more people to believe in the Force and especially the Light. This is done because the Jedi are running out of Jedi to help fight off the Sith.
    Nexus Name: Bamayarian Jedi Temple
  • Nexus Alignment: Light
  • Size: Large
  • Strength: Moderate
  • Accessibility: The Bamayarian Jedi Temple is open to public, anyone can meditate with the Force and can even become a Jedi.
  • Effects: The Temple encourages more people to become one with the Force. This Temple has been a big help for the Council as their number of Jedi increased a lot.

POPULATION
  • Native Species: Humans and Sullustans
  • Immigrated Species: Rodians, Droids
  • Population: Moderate
  • Demographics: Open to all kinds of races, no discrimination is allowed as it is in the Constitution. The planet is 50% Human and 50% Alien
  • Primary Languages: Basic
  • Culture: Bamayarian culture is linked with Limmie. Limmie tournaments are held here annually and people from other corners of the galaxy come here. Another culture of them is podracing, the Bamayar IV Race Circuit is one of the many circuits in the planet.
GOVERNMENT & ECONOMY
  • Government: Democracy
  • Affiliation: The Galactic Alliance
  • Wealth: [ Medium, people buy their quality Carbonite only occasionally, and it is their main source of income. But sports tournaments are keeping the economy alive.
    [*]Stability: [ Low, this is definitely a tourist spot for travelers. Peace is maintained here by the Jedi.
    [*]Freedom & Oppression: All the people here are free. Because of democracy, peace is also maintained. Nothing illegal here is permitted.

MILITARY & TECHNOLOGY

    • Military: Bamayar IV has heavy defenses. With tech and Jedi on their side, no planet dares to colonize them.
    • Technology: Tech is really advanced here. Futuristic gadgets such as Dyson Spheres exist here. I would describe it as a "future planet" with flying cars.
HISTORICAL INFORMATION
Bamayar IV was discovered around 200 BBY. The Jedi were finding a planet with a Force Nexus, and Bamayar IV was the one. They built a Jedi Temple there that could withstand hot temperatures. They tasked Jedi Masters to live in that Temple to spread the Light. Inhabitants were curious about what this was, so they went in there. The Masters thought them the ways of the Jedi and later became Padawans. A hundred years later, the planet was covered with houses, the population continuously rose, more Jedi lived in the Temple. More and more immigrants appeared on the planet. And in the Battle of Yavin, the Bamayarian Jedi helped the Rebels and succesfully won, and that's how Bamayar IV got its fame. Now, Bamayar IV is considered one of the best planets to live on.
 
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  • This planet has all of the necessary information filled out but some of it, especially the History is a little bare bones. What has happened on this planet since the Battle of Yavin?
  • Does this planet have any connection to the Canon Planet Bamayar? If so - Your System Features are incorrect. There would be at least two more planets by the name Bamayar per the Wiki. The link should also be added to the "Link" section. We have Bamayar and Bamayar IX.
  • The Location: Neighbor of Rakata Prime - Is it in the same Hex as Rakata Prime or a neighboring Hex? Please be more specific and offer general positioning within the hex as the template asks.
  • The Region: You have it noted as the Mid Rim which would make sense because Canon Bamayar is in the Mid Rim, however, the location you've chosen on the map is actually the Unknown Regions. You'll need to update that. It can't be in both.
  • For the climate, a "Mars-like temperature" would need to be removed. Mars doesn't exist in Star Wars and is an Earth term. Not to mention that if the temperature was akin to that of Mars it would be unlivable, though, adding that it is definitely controlled by technology helps. Perhaps, you were trying to describe terrain? If you're shooting for a desert climate perhaps reference a Star Wars planet like Tatooine instead.
Please review these items and flesh out this submission. There are some pieces of broken coding, but, that's minor. When you've looked through it give me a tag and I'll review this again for you. Thank you!
 
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