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Approved Planet Atrisia IV (Yokubō)

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OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION
GENERAL INFORMATION
  • Planet Name: Atrisia IV (Yokubō)
  • Demonym: Atrisian
  • Region: Core World
  • System Name: Atrisi system
  • System Features: The Atrisian System is a 9 planet solar system organized around a single star (Atrisi). Inner planets are terrestrial in composition, with the outer planets being gas giants and ice giants. Atrisia IV is the fourth planet from the sun in the system. With 2 moons that are being terraformed as part of the Jishi era's restructuring of the entire system. With many of the initiatives the planet and its moons have an Anshin class sphere that is used for living population and organization as well as defensive measures. The mega structure can develop and serve as a tertiary shipyard or manufacturing hub. A secondary atmospheric shell.
  • Location: Chaos Map
  • Major Imports: Salvage
  • Major Exports:
    • Clouzon-36
    • Tourism (holodrama, sports entertainment, entertainment)
    • High Technologies (advanced hardlight technologies, terraforming, clothing and fashion)
  • Unexploited Resources: N/A
GEOGRAPHIC INFORMATION
  • Gravity: Standard
  • Climate: Controlled with weather stations and managed to be ideal for visitors as well as the people on the world.
  • Primary Terrain: Cityscapes with beaches and islands
  • Atmosphere: Type 1.5 with atmospheric shell created to contain saturated pheromones produced by zeltron refugees and make the world a smaller version of their homeworld.
LOCATION INFORMATION
  • Capital City: Va-Nah
  • Planetary Features: Pheromone laced atmosphere, planetary shielding gate and large cityscapes bordered by beach resorts.
  • Major Locations:
    • Atrisian Transportation Network Hub: Created and connected to the Atrisian network of advanced transportation between the worlds and locations on the world.
    • Cosoom: Large entertainment park, with rides, attractions, fireworks and copious amounts of food that sees several interconnected parks delivering an experience. Role players tour around the park and sign autoprints as needed or take images with people.
    • Barsoom: Reconstructed like the temple on Zeltros, Barsoom is used by the Wukong jedi as a training temple on one of the newer colony worlds. Bringing a merge between zeltrons and Atrisians that seeks to gain a sense of understanding and enlightenment with Ami Dejah in command within the temple.
    • Sasoom: A massive galactic zoo and hologram fun world combination. AAllowing biodomes that house creatures from around the galaxy for all to see from the rare and exotic to the common.
    • Rasoom: Massive and dedicated to theater... with opera houses, amphitheaters for singerrs and idol competitions that are running for many across the galaxy. Reality holonet shows that are able to be seen and experienced.
    • Jasoom: Massive holonet production studio with sound stages for production of shows that span across the galaxy.
    • Va-nah: Capital of Atrisia IV and an island city. Called by many the silver city for the white gold and silver stone used... reflective surfaces and hardlight projectors that can show the elected officials for the resorts and beaches off in the distance.
POPULATION
  • Native Species: N/A
  • Immigrated Species:
  • Population: Heavy
  • Demographics: A heavy population of Zeltron engineers and refugees, twi'lek settlers who are hired to aid in the founding processes given that they are good finding and surviving. With Atrisian's from colonies that had retreated back given the attacks and dangers of groups like the sith, maw and bryn.
  • Primary Languages: Basic, Atrisian Script, Zeltron, Ryl
  • Culture: Larrgely combining zeltron traditions with parties, hedonistic lifestyles and pursuits with the more focused Atrisian values. Focusing on business and expanding itself the people operate large casino's, entertainment districts and production studios crafting holomovies, dramas and entertainment for the masses of the galaxy. With a new network thanks to aid from digital services. THeir more entertainment driven has led to many more improvements as cities host theirr own police forces to handle crimes usually petty in nature since criminals know there is much more profit to be made not allowing tourists to be attacked on the planet. The traditons of electing rulers continues and they serve to represent the planet within the Atrisian court with the emperor. Nightclubs, amusement parks, hardlight hologram attractions and sports arena's. Massive gambling dens and shows that cater to the ultra rich of the galaxy as well as to the more common folks are important, there is always something on the world that can be celebrated.
GOVERNMENT & ECONOMY
  • Government: Elected Monarchy
  • Affiliation: Atrisian Commonwealth (Planetary Government)
  • Wealth: Wealthy: Highly sought after with sales of high end technologies and entertainment. Production of new holodrama's, shows and even singers has given the Commonwealth an entertainment capital as casino's are designed across the planet attracting billions from across the galaxy.
  • Stability: High: Stable in many of its aspects, with a tightly controlled emphasis on tourism and making credits. Crime is largely regulated and punished while citizens are happy to throw massive parties. Elections for officials and the king and queen resumed on the world who are then able to represent the planet within the Atrisian court talking to the emperor and empress.
  • Freedom & Oppression: While being part of the Commonwealth and specifically Atrisia the world has much in the way of autonomy... they elect their leaders as they did before an offworlder declared themselves queen for life. Popular vote among the people and the rulerr for a period of seven years meets with and represents them in front of the Atrisian emperor and empress. A military force the is paid for by the people as services for the most wealthy from across the galaxy sees a massive influx to the Commonwealth. Luxerious art and architecture is exported from the world for those who want it.
MILITARY & TECHNOLOGY
  • Military: The planet itself doesn't have its own military instead operating under the protection of the Atrisian Defense force and serving as one of the primary sources for ore and resources used in the construction of ships. Its cloning facilities are protected even more providing crew to the mines and ships.
    • Atrisian Defense Forces The royal navy is the primary military forces defending the stations and planet with it being the most internal and insulated with its own contingent of living areas and the terraformed moons that house science and military personnel.
    • Zeltron Defensive Militia: Collected remnants who came to the world after invaders and drastic ecological dangers werre met on their own world. To better improve much of it they rallied together and joined as a division of the Atrisian military working with their exploration corp and expanding their capabilities.
  • Technology: Combining high technology from zeltros with Atrisian standards for their advanced technologies. To improve upon living modules, medical equipment and terraforming technologies allowing them to remake and shape the world much like their homeworld.
HISTORICAL INFORMATION
The temperate world of Atrisia IV was ideal when it started being terraformed by the Jishi era... many of its resources having been mined throughout the centuries and used for construction on the main world but it could serve a greater purpose. With their works going towards a sort of diversity to the populations of Atrisia... the Commonwealth was glad to give it to some of their staunchest Allies. since the time of AKio and several emperors before him allies with the zeltrons who dealt in high end technologies beneficial for infrastructure and making hardware leaps in their systems. Was friends so when an offworlder took control of their world and seemingly declared themselves queen of the planet for life, reduced the cultural aspects such as parties and cleared the atmosphere allowing one of the biggest defensive measures of the planet to be compromised.....

Many left the deteriorating world and were welcomed, advanced engineers, business owners, tens of thousands who were workers in various trades.. they were welcomed to Atrisia to work on the ANshin and some of the islands but there wasn't enough space for all of them. So the inclusion of the Jishi era terraforming worlds they managed to add a great deal to the aspects... improving the methods and developing the shell that would be used to retain for the time as it formed the atmosphere. The anshin being constructed overhead for them and improvements from their engineering feats led to the world being made largely for them with other refugees being able to come and settle the planet as well as many fo the Atrisian colonies that had been in other sectors and attacked or victims of the war having the frontier of the planet.

The work that has been done on the world and the alliances between the Zeltron navy that makes them a part of the Commonwealths large coalition forces. The planet getting much of its work done to recreate zeltros from artificial beaches, to cityscapes... districts of shops, food, entertainment and streets that are large enough with balconies lining it for planet wide parties that are able to be implemented. The credits earned from everything keeps many of the criminal elements in line and agreeable as it is just good business as the zeltrons have shown and the atmosphere being able to fill with the pheromones are designed in a way to provide the greatest defense the planet had against invasions. A natural one they create through the excessive hedonistic lifestyles.

With the alliance though form Atrisia the Commonwealths terraforming technologies and ANshin shipyards have also served to give the zeltrons a new function. The ability to rapidly develop and improve many of their own ships or security forces. With new ship ideas and designs being made for them.. planetary security forces and crossbred Atrisian/Zeltron children forming a new generation who bring many of the values of both together and work with their houses that have begun to terraform the other worlds in the Atrisi system.
 
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Under Review Junko Ike Junko Ike

Here are a few things for us to resolve before approval.

  • Links: It would be helpful to link to the Jishi Era, since you mention it prominently in History.


  • Major Exports: Per the Roleplay Rules (#3), "You may not portray rape, prostitution, pedophilia, etc. in any form." Cafarels are prostitutes, so including them in the submission violates this rule. Please remove all mentions of Cafarels from all parts of the submission, including Major Exports and History.

  • Unexploited Resources: An "unexploited" resource means one that is not currently being used. If Tourism is an unexploited resources, there are currently no tourists, but there could be in the future. Is that what you mean? Similarly, if technology is an unexploited resource, no one is making technology right now, but they could in the future. If Tourism and Technology are currently making money for the planetary government, they should be moved to Major Exports. Please specify what kind of technology it is.

Please feel free to reach out with any questions you may have.
 

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