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Approved Planet Atrisia II (Zhang)

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OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION
GENERAL INFORMATION
  • Planet Name: Atrisia II (Zhang)
  • Demonym: Atrisian
  • Region: Core World
  • System Name: Atrisi system
  • System Features: The Atrisian System is a 9 planet solar system organized around a single star (Atrisi). Inner planets are terrestrial in composition, with the outer planets being gas giants and ice giants. Atrisia II is the second planet and closest to the sun in the system with 12 moons that are being terraformed as part of the Jishi era's restructuring of the entire system. With many of the initiatives the planet and its moons have an Anshin class sphere that is used for living population and organization as well as defensive measures. The mega structure can develop and serve as a tertiary shipyard or manufacturing hub.
  • Location: Chaos Map
  • Major Imports: Settlers
  • Major Exports:
    • Medical Technologies
    • High Grade Technologies (advanced living modules, terrraforming technologies, artificial intelligences, starship components)
  • Unexploited Resources: Mythra
GEOGRAPHIC INFORMATION
  • Gravity: Standard
  • Climate: Temperate (controlled)
  • Primary Terrain: Cityscape
  • Atmosphere: Type I
LOCATION INFORMATION
  • Capital City: Kanojo
  • Planetary Features: Massive surface cityscape designed to be a reflection of worlds like Denon and Coruscant without thousands of levels and less pollution. Marble white buildings towering and advanced weather and biosphere controlled environments, advanced living models.
  • Major Locations:
    • Imperial Palace: Beautiful in design with carved marble, large vaulted ceilings and an area to hold court for the emperor or empress when they visit the world. THe massive palace serves to show the advancements of the Atrisian people.
    • Hall of Tomorrow: A massive showroom, dedicated to expos and attracting the brightest minds in the galaxy. Much like the South Systems Bazarre that Danger Arceneau Danger Arceneau created this expo area allows for dozens of companies to showcase their wares and auctions to be held both public and private.
    • Kanojo: Less a single city then the capital district of the city planet... a circular area designed like a wagon wheel with streets laid out for defensive purposes but also to have around the palace shops and government officials.
POPULATION
  • Native Species: N/A
  • Immigrated Species: Atrisian (Humans)
  • Population: Moderate
  • Demographics: Atrisian: Seen largely as a secondary and more advanced world. (compared to the hyper traditional and preserved Atrisia) Zhang's people are the more progressive in terms of advancing their society while still being part of the Atrisian Commonwealth and sharing with their brothers and sisters next to them.
  • Primary Languages: Basic, Atrisian Script
  • Culture: Increasingly Atrisian cultural values that reflect the Commonwealth and thousands of years. With the more progressive thinking towards the future instead of just preserving the past. It has given way to massive advances in theoretical technology and leaps that can be done forward that it then shared with the rest of the Commonwealth. Where traditional Atrisia preserves their heritage and past giving a regal look, the more futurist Zhanglook to try and shape the galaxy in a way that it can predict and adapt to. Improving the lives of its people through education, technology and exponential leaps forward culturally.
GOVERNMENT & ECONOMY
  • Government: Monarchy
  • Affiliation: Atrisian Commonwealth (Planetary Government)
  • Wealth: Wealthy: Developing and selling high grrade technologies to the galaxy, hosting massive auctions for different markets from regular to the invisible marketplace for the galaxies ultra wealthy and taking a small handlers fee to ensure everything runs smoothly. Developing massive luxury homes for vacations or those who want their own private getaway from the galaxy in the core worlds but not around galactic politics.
  • Stability: High: Designed and fdounded in the Jishi era which aided itself with cooperation and drive. The world itself is about the advancement of Atrisian society which requires leaps forward together. Bringing many voices to a singular purpose towards the betterment of the Commonwealth.
  • Freedom & Oppression: Incredibly free in their ability to express themselves and strive for the betterment of Atrisian society. There is law and order on the world to aid in resolving and solve problems as they arise or to protect the planet when needed.
MILITARY & TECHNOLOGY
  • Military: The planet itself doesn't have its own military instead operating under the protection of the Atrisian Defense force and serving as one of the primary sources for ore and resources used in the construction of ships. Its cloning facilities are protected even more providing crew to the mines and ships.
    • Atrisian Defense Forces The royal navy is the primary military forces defending the stations and planet with it being the most internal and insulated with its own contingent of living areas and the terraformed moons that house science and military personnel.
  • Technology: Galactic standard. Atrisian manufacturing businesses included the powerful Sasori Research corporation, one of the largest in the galaxy. It also has the industrial endeavors of the Commonwealth behind it which produces much of its own high end technology in system.
HISTORICAL INFORMATION
The ancient world of Zhang, often considered the closest to Atrisia and the easiest to seen in the night sky. It was a dream to one day manage to colonize the worrld and within the Jishi era it became a possibility as terraforming technologies had developed to an improved upon level. Allowing the Commonwealth to begin the process on it and the moons as they set up and constructed an Anshin to protect the new world from solarr winds and dangers that would likely arise as they went about their work on the world. Through experiences they learned on the the other worlds and ion the recovery efforts on Atrisia itself. This provided the needed foundation after all and would set everything up for them to be able to create a Neo Atrisia as it were.. one not seeped in the traditional cities aand villages.

They continued to once the atmosphere was viable enough to construct the massive city... with districts across it that would serve to divide shops for the people and mirroring Coruscant there was minimal layers of it. The surface largely devoid of resources from mining efforts throughout the centuries so that much would have to be brought to the forefront. Advancements and an emphasis on the planet for leaps and bounds in advancing their technological edge over other worlds. Business dealings and the chance to show off to other worlds that come to visit Atrisia... come for the ancient culture but stay for the massive technological expos and thinktanks that are created with many of the greatest minds in the galaxy hired and brought to operate.

The newly christened and living world turned its attention towards it moons which would like the others in the atrisi system become terraformed to function as cities or research areas.
 
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Under Review Junko Ike Junko Ike

Thank you for your patience! There are a few things I'd like to check in about before I approve this submission.


  • Major Exports: What do you mean by "high grade technology?" Is it computer / droid technology, military technology, research technology, or some other kind? Please be a little more specific.

  • Major Locations: This is a pretty short list for an entire planet. Are there any notable districts or areas of the giant city? Adding to this section fleshes out the planet and gives writers who may visit more places to imagine and interact.

  • History: This section does a good job of describing the planet's colonization from an Atrisian perspective, but what about the rest of the galaxy? When was it colonized relative to major galactic events like the Clone Wars or Gulag Plague? Did the Galactic Empire, Gulag Plague, 400-year Darkness, or Netherworld event impact it at all, or was it settled after all that?

Please reach out with any questions or if you need any assistance.
 
The Mongrel The Mongrel edited

For the locations, there are several subs being worked on to flesh them out and to the timeframe... I thought I had the link in there. THe Jishi era (it is mentioned but now l;inked) took place after the last battle of atrisia with mythos before ther CIS came and then the GA was given control. The planet itself wasn't colonized before then.
 

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