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Approved Starship Aries XIII

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OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION
  • Intent: To Create A Personal Ship
  • Image Source: X
  • Canon Link: N/A
  • Permissions: N/A
  • Primary Source: N/A

PRODUCTION INFORMATION

TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS

STANDARD FEATURES

A. Life Support System
B. Navigation Computer
C. Backup Hyperdrive
D. Targeting Computer
E. Holotable
F. Encrypted Computer

ADVANCED SYSTEMS

A. Sensor Mask: Allows the ship to be more undetectable
B. Cloaking Device (Stygium Crystal): A device that renders the ship completely invisible to all forms of detection.
C. Speeder Bike: An accessory to allow transportation across great lengths without the need of walking.
D. Holotransceiver: A communication device that allows and broadcasts holographic messages, over great distances between two or more beings. The device is constructed in the cockpit area.
E. Carbon Freezing Chamber: A freezing chamber that uses doses of Tibanna gas for more convenient transportation. In this case, it is utilized to freeze living beings for transportation of criminals, dissidents, and political enemies of the state.
F. Electromagnetic Shield: A shield that disrupts sensors.
G. BiVVol RVR-325 and Voice Recognition Link: A security system to prevent the theft of the ship.

STRENGTHS

Defenses: The ship is heavily defended, coming equipped with both an antimissile octet and a minelayer to thwart enemy vessels.

Stealthy: With the addition of the stygium crystal, it allows the ship to implement stealth technology. Outside of the stealth capabilities, it comes equipped with an optical shield. Working in conjunction with both the sensor mask and electromagnetic shield, the optical shield disrupts visual oberservations.

WEAKNESSES

Agility: The ship has poor maneuvering capabilities. Technically not 'a dead fish' floating in the sea, but it's not far off.

Tortoise Vs. Hare: The ship, in this case, is the tortoise. It's incredibly slow for it's size. Even if the hare slept for a year, the silly rabbit would still win the race.

DESCRIPTION

The Aries XIII is not classified as a warship, but an extension of the Inquisitor Mikilanna Mihaly. Upon her acceptance into the Saaraishash, the ship was commissioned while she completed the initial training courses in both the Sith branch and space flight. Throughout the construction process, she was allowed to add input since it was her ship. Most of the advanced technologies where installed at her request such as the carbon freezing chamber and the anti-theft security system. The rest, including the heightened standard features, came from the employed shipwrights and engineers at Yaga Minor Shipyards.

The main function is to aid the Inquisitor in successfully completing her missions. The encrypted computer is coded via a number sequence she solely possesses. The computer houses an infinite amount of knowledge such as planetary governments and heads, high profile individuals, etc, The computer can also be linked up to her personal datapad, Whistler XIII, allowing the transferring of data.

A carbon freezing chamber was installed for the sole person of transporting prisoners back for interrogation purposes. The chamber has a side locker where up to four frozen living individuals can be safely stored. With such a device in play, the need for cells as been eliminated; as well as feeding prisoners.

The overview of the Aries XIII is that it's more capable of defending itself with marginal offensive capabilities. But it lacks speed and agility, hence the need for stealth technology as a countermeasure to offset it's weakness of flight.

There is no crew, except for herself and any potential prisoners. There is medium cargo space after the speeder bike is loaded, but rarely is the space needed outside the daily rations to sustain life and stave off hunger; for there is little requirement for sight seeing in her profession. There is, however, a small compartment delegated as personal quarters, equipped with a bed and a few unmentionable luxuries.
 
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Well, we have a problem. Still like this though.


NECESSARY CHANGES!

  • Hangar Space: 0
  • Hangar Allocations: N/A

Ehhh, you do not need this. In fact, you grabbed the wrong one. Below is the chart.

Squadron Count: (Please provide the amount of fighters this submission would have in a squadron. The average squadron for any starfighter is 12, at lengths averaging 12.5 meters. The bigger the fighter, the smaller your Squadron Count should be. The smaller the fighter, the bigger your Squadron count can be. [None: 1 | Very Low: 4 | Low: 8 | Average: 12 | High: 16 | Very High: 20 | Extreme: 24 ] Squadron Sizes may be listed as just the rating.)

Please replace that with that which most likely be NONE which is 1.


SUGGESTIVE CHANGES!

Even with the listed change above, you are SEVERELY underpowered. Here is my work I did when doing your ratings with the proper fix with Squadron Count.

Unique: -4
Armament: Average 0 (-4)
Defenses: Very High 2 (-2)
Squadron Count: None -3 (-5)
Manverability Rating: Low -1 (-6)
Speed Rating: Very Low -2 (-8)
Hyperdrive: Does Not Count Unless Going Below Speed 1. (-8)
Cloaking Device -1 (-7) (It is a cloaking device, course it goes down a rating.)

You can literally max out a whole stat if you wanted to. Take advantage please!



Let me know when you make the required changes and we can go from there!
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This is a really neat and nicely put together submission, there are just two points I want to bring up with you.

Image Credit

The image credit you use is Pinterest which isn't really an acceptable source to provide an image credit if there are no other option available. A quick reverse image search brought me to this art station page that is the source of the image.

Manufacturer

While you've linked the manufacturing location, this is the field for the actual manufacturing company or the individual. Please mink to a faction, company or individual who actually built the ship.
 
Ladybug Ladybug

Perfect, thank you.

In regards to doing an image search there is an article here that goes into detail.

For myself, I tend to use google, if you right-click an image you should see an option to search image. Google then searches the web for that image and pulls up all the pages it can find. Sometimes the original source is obvious, other times it can mean scrolling through a few pages or checking Pinterest links. Finding the source is normally doable though. A lot of people do use Tineye as well.

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