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Approved Starship Ariane Class Assault Cruiser

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Intent: To provide the Firemane Company with an assault cruiser in addition their balanced Thuella Cruiser for use and marketing.
Manufacturer: Silk Holdings (Production) Firemane (Design)
Model: Ariane class cruiser
Affiliation: Kaeshana Confederation, Omega Protectorate, Firemane Company and Clients
Modularity: No
Production: Mass
Material: Durasteel and Titanium Alloy(Hull), Quadanium (Frame, Engine Block), Glasteel (Viewports)
Description: Slow and powerful, the Ariane class is a contender to be feared due to its thick and heavy hull, along with durable shields and an array of weaponry all meant to create a warship capable of trading blows with Capital ships with confidence. Meant as a companion to the Thuella class centerpiece, the Ariane class cruiser is meant to be fielded in a group around the Thuella as a flagship of a fleet while receiving more support from the Illyria class frigates also of Firemane design. The design of the Ariane cruiser is meant for exactly what it appears. An offensive tool meant to devastate enemy fleets and defend its companion vessels. Able to bear a heavy amount of damage, the Ariane class is somewhat slower than others of the cruiser class. It works best when used in conjunction with other supporting craft such as the Thuella or Illyria to help compensate for its slower nature and lack of starfighter support, though the gunships it carries do make up for some of this lacking. Named to honor one of the most famous Queen's in the Eldorai peoples history, this cruiser class is as mighty and strong as she was during her rule.

Classification: Assault Cruiser
Role: Assault Cruiser, Flagship Protection, Capital Ship Engagement
Height: 140 meters
Width: 110 meters
Length: 530 meters
Power Core Generator/Reactor: Solar Ionization Reactor
Hyperdrive Rating: Class 1 (Main) Class 10 (Backup)
Minimum Crew: 1,640
Optimal Crew: 3,880
Armaments:
  • 2 Bow Mounted Dual Heavy Turbolasers [8 Capital]
  • 2 Port Heavy Turbolaser Batteries [16 Capital]
  • 2 Starboard Heavy Turbolaser Batteries [16 Capital]
  • 2 Ventral Dual Heavy Ion Cannons [8 Capitals]
  • 2 Dorsal Dual Heavy Ion Cannons [8 Capitals]
  • 4 Quad Heavy Mass Driver Cannons [32 Capital]
  • 4 Proton Torpedo Launchers [4 Warheads]
  • 6 Concussion Missile Tubes [6 Warheads]
  • 4 Flak Cannons [4 Defense]
  • 4 Point Defense Cannons [4 Defense]
  • 8 Quad Laser Cannons [8 Defense]
Hangar: Non-Combative Attachments:
  • Communications Array
  • Encryption Network
  • Escape Pods
  • Holonet Transceiver
  • Redundant Shield Generator (50% Of existing generator)
  • Standard Detention Cells
  • Standard Life Support Systems
  • Standard Navigational Systems
  • Military Grade Sensor Array
  • Advanced Targeting Systems
  • Tractor Beams

Passenger Capacity: 400
Cargo Capacity: 8,000 tons
Consumables: 2 year
Sublight Speed and Maneuverability: 7
 
Hello! I will be your commissar for today, welcome to the Inquisitorial branch. In order to keep your stay as brief as possible, please remember that any Heresy will result in immediate dismemberment err denial.

Nothing really stands out as heretical about this submission however there are a few minor sins that the Emperor frowns upon. You have this classed as a heavy assault cruiser but length and gun count show that this is an assault cruiser, you also have 2 ventral Duel heavy ion cannons listed twice when I think you meant for one to be dorsal, I'd also like for this to need about 3 times the crew for something this size, and finally please explain more about these redundant shields (are they just as powerful as the normal ones, ect...).
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