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Approved Planet Andax

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  • [SIZE=11pt]Intent: To create a planet to expand upon the lore of the Unknown Regions [/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=11pt]Image Credit: [/SIZE][SIZE=11pt]https://cdnb.artstation.com/p/assets/images/images/004/231/425/large/vadim-sadovski-2016-12-12-22-49-42.jpg?1481572560[/SIZE][SIZE=11pt] [/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=11pt]Canon: N/A [/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=11pt]Links: Emani (To be submitted)[/SIZE]

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[SIZE=11pt]General Information: [/SIZE]


  • [SIZE=11pt]Planet Name: Andax[/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=11pt]Demonym: Andaxin [/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=11pt]Region: Unknown[/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=11pt]System Name: Encaran System[/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=11pt]System Features: Encaran system features 2 dwarf planets in the same system, 1 moon, and a bright blue star that Andax orbits called Encara. The rotational period is 26 hours, orbiting around Encara 366 Days a year. Andax also features a Ring that orbits around the planet, often surrounded by dust or even small asteroids Andax also orbits a gas planet known as Apex[/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=11pt]Coordinates:Hex C-42 next to Rakata Beta, above Dosuun Hex[/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=11pt]Major Imports: Tibanna, Bacta,Technology . [/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=11pt]Major Exports: Machinery, Duraplast,Doonium, Durasteel, Medicine [/SIZE]

[SIZE=11pt]Geographic Information: [/SIZE]


  • [SIZE=11pt]Gravity: Standard[/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=11pt]Climate: Temperate[/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=11pt]Primary Terrain: Oceans,Grasslands,Plains,Mountains,Volcanoes,Tundra.[/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=11pt]Major Locations:[/SIZE]

[SIZE=11pt]The Vault:[/SIZE][SIZE=11pt] The last of Palpatine’s observatories, built in 20 BBY by Darth Sidious as part of a network of observatories for his grand plan to travel into the Unknown Regions. It is laid out by a labyrinth of tunnels and deadly traps, guarding artifacts and deadly secrets both of the former Galactic Empire and the Dark Side.. A guarded secret by the government known as the United Imperium of Andex (UIA) has kept for centuries guarded. [/SIZE]

[SIZE=11pt]The Holy City of Zhora:[/SIZE][SIZE=11pt] The Oldest City of the native Emani species and often a pilgrimage on the main continent of Varos. The Emani often travel there as the city was founded upon what the natives believed to call it “The Great Fall.” They prey to their gods and is often visited every year, where Emani across the planet come. The City is also a major port on the coast. [/SIZE]

[SIZE=11pt]The Red Forests of the West[/SIZE][SIZE=11pt]: To the west of Zhora lies the magnificent forests of red, shaded in it’s color leaves it is said in tales of old of the Emani’s beginnings within the woods. Often forming the early tribes before evolving as a society. The woods are often plentiful of game and a sight to see before entering the realm of the Emani. [/SIZE]

[SIZE=11pt]Imperial City[/SIZE][SIZE=11pt]: The Capital of the UIA, located on the east of Varos. It is where all the dealings of the UIA take place, the center of power for both the Military and Civilian Infrastructure all across the planet. It holds the ministries that divide the government, and is the most civilized city on the planet, the capital of fine arts, and works of all kinds from the Humans and the Emani alike. [/SIZE]

[SIZE=11pt]Vara[/SIZE][SIZE=11pt]: An ancient city the Emani has inhabited for centuries. Vara is not as prestigious as Zhora, but presents a calm and unique atmosphere, that the city is known for the priests and monks that reside all over it’s religious structures, most government meetings within the various tribes all over Andax takes place here. [/SIZE]

[SIZE=11pt]The Lost City of Tara[/SIZE][SIZE=11pt]: Located in the Mountains of the North, The Lost City of Tara was once a magnificent city dedicated to the advancement of the culture of the Emani. Surrounded by massive stone structures, the city had thrived until the time of the Great Fall, where the Emani were forced to go on an exodus to the south, separating into what became cities such as Vara, and Zhora. [/SIZE]

[SIZE=11pt]The Barren Lands of Eros[/SIZE][SIZE=11pt]: These dark lands make up half of the sister continant of Eros Once a fertile land, all that remains is ash covered soil, and ruins of what believed to date back to the time of the Great Fall. The land is also host to violent eruptions from nearby volcanoes, making it impossible for habitable life to remain for very long. [/SIZE]

[SIZE=11pt]UIA Outpost 2499[/SIZE][SIZE=11pt]: Perhaps one of the only settlements of the UIA on frozen tundra of Eros, and perhaps the worst posting for a soldier. This outpost is not only for military purposes, but for scientific as well. Often studying the ruins of what used to be on the world, as well as dealing with the native Emani that have survived on this part of the world. Outpost 2499 shows that the United Imperium Of Andex’s reach is far and wide. [/SIZE]

[SIZE=11pt]The Frozen Tundras of Eros[/SIZE][SIZE=11pt]: The frozen reaches of Eros lie south of the destructive barren lands. Life is just as hard in this region as it is in the barren lands, with the local Emani have already learned to adapt to cold whether, the Frozen Tundras are a challenge of survival, where only the strong survive and the weak perish if one hopes to survive on the continent. [/SIZE]

[SIZE=11pt]The Mountains of the North[/SIZE][SIZE=11pt]: Making up most of the Northern region of Varos.. Tall as many Imperium cities, and covered in snow, the Mountains is often a mysterious place as the rest of Andax, carrying a unique system of caves, ancient ruins, and even the Lost City of Tera, the Mountains is a region steeped in mystery and adventure. [/SIZE]

[SIZE=11pt]The Wild Grasslands of the East[/SIZE][SIZE=11pt]: While the Red Forests cover the West, grasslands lead the way to the East, filled with game and all types of plant life, the grasslands are a sight to behold and one of the beauties on the continent. A traditional hunting ground for the Emani tribes that still dwell there. The Grasslands has a cultural and spiritual importance to the natives. [/SIZE]

[SIZE=11pt]Parax Castle[/SIZE][SIZE=11pt]: A fortress located on the edge of the Frozen Tundra’s and the Barren Lands of Eros. The Castle was built in 15 BBY when the Empire had started to finalize work on the Vault. Parax Castle would often be a home for the Emperor when checking on the progress of his work, or to practice dark side rituals staining the castle in an aura of dark side energy. The Castle is now home to the UIA dictator Arsian Bardack. [/SIZE]

[SIZE=11pt]Jamai[/SIZE][SIZE=11pt]: Deep within the harsh wasteland of Eros, lies the canyon city of Jamai. At first an emani industrial wonder of their prowress at surviving the harsh landscape, and often used to mine precious metals. Now under the control of the UIA, both Human and Emani workers, mine Doomium and Durasteel for the planned expansion of the UIA. [/SIZE]

[SIZE=11pt]Pani[/SIZE][SIZE=11pt]: A city located to the south of Imperial city, and on the coasts of the Terran Oceans, it is mainly a fishing world and became one of the first worlds to hold a spaceport before transferring the technology across other cities. A city where the Emani and the Humans of the UIA coexsist, they strive as an example of a future where both races can prosper for the government that they serve. [/SIZE]

[SIZE=11pt]The Ring[/SIZE][SIZE=11pt]: A prototype station developed by the UIA, after finally acquiring hyperspace technology, and to travel beyond the stars, The Ring was created and worked on for decades, and is a staging area for ships traveling between the planet and out into space, the Ring is often used as a trading area for most of the World’s imports and Exports and is of high priority to the UIA. [/SIZE]


[SIZE=11pt]Edin:[/SIZE][SIZE=11pt] An ancient industrial center of what used to be a thriving culture of the Emani. Edin is all but the last of such society, Used to create metals from the Lava used throughout the city, they had acquired, having learned techniques from the time before the Great Fall. It supplies the UIA with metals for it’s War machine along with the settlement of Jumai. learning to adapt to current times. While remaining to the old ways that they have lived. [/SIZE]

[SIZE=11pt]Population:[/SIZE]
[SIZE=11pt]Native Species: Emani, Wildlife [/SIZE]
[SIZE=11pt]Immigrated Species: Human, Twi’lek, Chiss. [/SIZE]
[SIZE=11pt]Population: Heavily Populated[/SIZE]
[SIZE=11pt]Demographics: Andax’s population makes up 50% Emani, 45% Human, 2% Twi’lek 1% Chiss, 1% Yuuzhan Vong[/SIZE]
[SIZE=11pt]Primary Languages: Galactic Standard Basic[/SIZE]
[SIZE=11pt]Culture: The Andaxin and Emani societies are vastly different with the Authoritarian Andaxins having a fair system of class based on the needs of the people and the Emani being linked through Tribes. The Andaxin classes include. [/SIZE]
[SIZE=11pt]Society: [/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=11pt]Nixorin class: Starting from the bottom the Nixorin class are the backbone of the United Imperium, the lowest of the classes, the members of this class is primarily used as a labor force and have been responsible for building most of the Infrastructure of the Imperials, often made up of the poor, and the criminals as well as aliens. They earn their place as citizens through their hard work and dedication.[/SIZE]


  • [SIZE=11pt]Mercatorias Class: The Mercatoris class are that of merchants above the Nixorin class as well as skilled crafters, they often pride themselves as one of the most talented with crafting anything from beautiful pots, to magnificent tables through carpentry or masonry. They are proud of what they do and are known to have very tight social circles and family units.[/SIZE]


  • [SIZE=11pt]Arisirian Class: Are the scholars and the Scientists of the government. These bright minds have worked on bringing the United Imperium out of what they had used to be with new technology being embraced and evolved, and with bright new minds they have ushered in a time when Andax can finally be brought out into the Galaxy, while the scholars question the meanings of why they are there, and the teachers teach the next generation of citizens.[/SIZE]


  • [SIZE=11pt]Castari Class: The Castari are ones destined for Military service, and are chosen due to their physical and mental potential to join in the UIA Military or even the UIA Ministry of Justice as Law Enforcement, they are also given more privileges since they are higher up, and given credible prestige as well within the Government. [/SIZE]


  • [SIZE=11pt]Apparitor Class: The Highest class within Andaxin Society, this mostly comprised of the Government’s leading officials, civil servants, and the most powerful and wealthy of the UIA, and is the top of the social food chain and are most looked upon as leaders and dealing with all matters of the government, from policies to other matters such as the military. [/SIZE]

[SIZE=11pt]The Emani classify themselves based on where they come from as a tribe, they are identified by their different pigments, and customs. The Emani all throughout Andax come in different shades of colors each one marks one tribe, as well as the many rituals and customs that are also not uncommon for some tribes to have mingled over the years, and shared. [/SIZE]


  • [SIZE=11pt]The Lithari tribe is one of the most prestigious of the Five Tribes of the Emani. Most known for it’s Light skinned pigment, the Tribe has often held respect as warriors, and hunters, even inventing a few of the earliest older customs of the Emani such as the Dance of Sorrows, and the Harvest fest of Kala. The Lithari had originally started out as a peaceful people of nomads who had grew plentiful crops, and believed in a process of non violence, until constantly raging war with outsiders and other tribes for resources, growing as respectable warriors and the most Respected tribe in all of Andax. [/SIZE]


  • [SIZE=11pt]The K’Kan often known for it’s orange pigment i were once the most prosperous of them all, and perhaps one of the most Ancient Peoples of Andax. Being the first to develop a calendar through the advanced used of mathematics as well as other wonders such as monuments, irrigation systems, and even a communication, The K’Kani’s history is all but forgotten from a cataclysm long ago, they still serve as some of the most brightest minds that Andax has to offer. [/SIZE]


  • [SIZE=11pt]The Chatari often known for it’s dark purple pigmenti were Mountain folk, dwelling in the Northern Mountains their speciality was mining and were known for the architecture and their skills in masonry and carpentry. They are known as great builders of the Five Tribes, and were believed to have help in the creation of cities such as The Lost City of Tara. [/SIZE]


  • [SIZE=11pt]The Veri Tribe often known for its blue pigment is the most cut off from the rest, dwelling within the Frozen Tundra’s of Eros, they live off the land, and have not advanced millenia’s worth of Technology, focusing on Tech that are Millenia old, they believed that Technology had a hand in the Great Fall, and so have become Technophobic as a result. There blue pigment also has provided them with an advantage, allowing them to better blend to their surroundings. [/SIZE]


  • [SIZE=11pt]The Axan often known by it’s unusual trait as Albinos are a Mysterious tribe, being the only ones who did not leave the lands of Eros during the time of the Great Fall, they have clung to the ancient ruins and Industrial cities as if they had religious significance to them, often hoping that the more they build the more the land will become great by pleasing the gods, and allowing Eros to bloom the fruit of life once more. They have also been known to have a Higher pain tolerance than most, and have developed a ritual through Body Suspension which has allowed them to mark their bodies, with all sorts of religious markings and text.[/SIZE]

[SIZE=11pt]Arts:[/SIZE]

[SIZE=11pt]Many of the Arts that both the Andaxin and Emani share were largely imported from the rest of the Galaxy, although the Emani have developed song and dance early on, and have developed immaculate paintings on the architectures they create, as well as inheriting ancient texts from older generations past. The Andaxins on the other hand had largely imported most of their arts early on from Imperial Descendents and had developed a similar style for the following centuries. [/SIZE]

[SIZE=11pt]Religion: [/SIZE]

[SIZE=11pt]When it comes to matters of religion, Andaxins have been largely Atheist through the Government, but the Emani believed in a Polytheistic Religion that involved 5 Gods that had once lived in peace with the Emani long ago in the Stars, before the Gods had separated and had cast the Emani out on an Exodus that had lasted for Hundreds of Years before finding Andax and colonizing it. The Five Gods included.[/SIZE]


  • [SIZE=11pt]Kala the Goddess of Harvest and Life: Kala is worshipped as the Goddess of Harvest and Life , they believe that Kala is one that had created everything green and good on Andax, bringing about life to flourish through the animals and the plants the moment she breathed a single breath she began life. [/SIZE]


  • [SIZE=11pt]Cacian the God of War and Destruction: Perhaps one of the most destructive out of the civilians, and often worshipped in times of War, Cacia offers mercy to those that pray to him, and bring him offerings, originally part of a pact with her Sister to bring about the end of the Gods, Cacia is often known to be very merciful and righteous despite his destructive ways. [/SIZE]


  • [SIZE=11pt]Vani the Goddess of Death and the Underworld: Many Emani Believe that Vani was the one who had judged you when traveling to the Underworld realm of Arrancar, divided up into three levels, Paradise a land where after Vani judges your soul based on the good that you have done, you go there, and live for the rest of your days in peace, If she judged you based on your evil ways that you have done, you were sent to the harsh fiery pits of the Underworld, where you would suffer tormants like no other for a Thousand Years. Although she is known for trying to rule the Gods all her own, she is often seen as a tragic figure who is barely understood. [/SIZE]


  • [SIZE=11pt]Hana The Goddess of Love and Spirit: The Mother of Vani, Cacian and Kala, she is known to bring about the spirit of all Emani People, through the gift of love like the love of her family throughout the Ancient texts and is mainly to be both the Spirit of Andax and of the people. [/SIZE]


  • [SIZE=11pt]Yendar the God of Knowledge and Wisdom: Yendar is the Father with Hana his wife, and his three children, He is often believed to be a divine and merciful being, He loves his children as he does all creatures of Andax, and is the most worshipped as much as the rest of the Gods. He is shown to be very kind even to his enemies always believing that in the end, the balance of all life must be respected. [/SIZE]

[SIZE=11pt]The Story of the Gods started when the Emani were once advanced societies, brought forth Technology by the Gods they lived in peace and Harmony in what was called the Promised Land. The Gods Yendar, and Hana had brought forth the best out in the Emani People during a time known as the Great Beginning, their the Emani had let brilliance shine, learning how to cover the lands in metal and stone, To reach the stars and venture into new lands, to crawl from the oceans of life to perhaps one of the greatest civilizations of all time and Kala brought about the creation of New life, and plentiful food to be grown. But through the generations, there were no more lands to conquer, the God known as Cacian who had once been a peaceful God was tempted by his Sister Vani to embrace a darker path, Cacian accepted thus bringing about the rise of War within the Emani People, With Cacian and Vani now an evil unlike that the Emani has never seen the Great Beginning ended with the time of Dreaded Sorrow began with War raging all across the Stars for the next seven generations, finally ending with the battle of cosmic balance Separating the Gods from the Emani, and Yendar in his great Wisdom establishing a place for his Wife and Children punishing Vani by banishing her to the Underworld, and sending the Emani on a journey to the Stars guiding them to the new home that the Emani believe they have created. [/SIZE]

[SIZE=11pt]Sports: [/SIZE]

[SIZE=11pt]Sports are not that common with the Andaxins, but they did manage to inherit combat sports from the Emani, that they have been known for, the favorite sport of both the Emani and the Andaxin is known as Bruma. Bruma involves the the use of 4-5 players on either side with combat sticks, carved sticks made in the way of training swords, while a ball is present with the aim of hitting the ball with a stick and hitting it over a ring attached to the wall, several feet from the ground with the ball going through a hole earning either team a point, attacking your opponents, and defending your objective are also side objectives. , Bruma was believed to have been invented during the time of the Dreaded Sorrow as a Combat exercise, which had quickly grown to be loved as a sport amongst the Emani and later the Andaxins. [/SIZE]

[SIZE=11pt]Government and Economy: [/SIZE]


  • [SIZE=11pt]Government: Authoritarian[/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=11pt]Affiliation: None[/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=11pt]Wealth: High, Both the Emani Tribes and the United Imperium of Andax has prospered through the amount of precious ore and metals found on the world, such as Duraplast, Durasteel, and Doomium. The metals are often sold offworld to small groups looking to build ships, and have made Billions through their economy thanks to the mining cities such as Jumai and Edin. [/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=11pt]Stability: High, The United Imperium of Andax had succeeded over the years to bring about Order all across Andax through unity, order, and peace. The classes unifying the people believing they are striving for the common goal of moving to other worlds. For now, they have strived to enjoy the comforts of better working conditions, impressive education, and outstanding healthcare. Some might say it’s a wonderful utopia, but underneath lies a dark underbelly, constantly watched by the government, and the Police always on guard, anyone who is a threat to break the conditioning while the military only suffers from minor incursions from the local tribes spread throughout the wilderness. [/SIZE]


  • [SIZE=11pt]Freedom and Oppression: Rights are fairly limited within the UIA, often going through a basic conditioning of obedience and absolute loyalty to the Eternal Leader and to the rest of the nation. The Eternal Leader is led by Arsian Bardack who had seized control of the once United Republic of Andax, and since then he led a great revolution that had changed the everything, and since than He has allowed the government to be structured the way it had been for several decades. The Government follows a rigid and organized structure consisting of these bodies of the Government as followed. [/SIZE]


  • [SIZE=11pt]The Eternal Leader: The ruler of the United Imperium of Andax held by Arsian Bardack, The Eternal Leader commands all aspects of the Government, such as the Military, but as in regards to matters of policy he leaves the most important matters of state to the Council of 12. [/SIZE]


  • [SIZE=11pt]The Council of Twelve, the Council of Twelve consist of six members of both the Andaxin and Emani representatives, often dealing with the most important matters of state such as the Military, Propaganda, Science. Agriculture, Education, and Economics. In the end they answer ultimately to the Eternal Leader. [/SIZE]


  • [SIZE=11pt]The Eyes: The Eyes are the Secret Police of the United Imperium, often tasked with hunting down those that harbor treason, or those that seek to tear down the Government itself. They monitor the people through constant surveillance. After capturing the criminals they are often sent to the Council of Twelve for judgement, and are sentenced based of the severity of the Crime based on anything from treason, to propaganda, to conspiracy to murder. . [/SIZE]

[SIZE=11pt]The overall atmosphere is of strict obedience and loyalty mixed in with fear and an ever growing feeling of being watched. But the people even though they live in a world of fear and control, are brainwashed into a cult of personality. Worshipping the Eternal leader and believe he has made them and their world strong. Striving to do better in their society.[/SIZE]

[SIZE=11pt]Military and Technology: [/SIZE]

[SIZE=11pt]Military: Over the centuries the military capabilities of Andax has undergone a massive change with now being two dominant military forces of the world. The UIA and the Emani. The UIA had to make due with technology left by their ancestors but has crafted new armor and Blasters dividing themselves into different branches. [/SIZE]


  • [SIZE=11pt]Centurion[/SIZE][SIZE=11pt]: Centurions serve as the main bulk of the Military, compromising of soldiers, and engineer’s they often overwhelm enemies in numbers. And are often compromised into large units. Outfitted with basic durasteel armor and a blaster rifle. [/SIZE]


  • [SIZE=11pt]Legionnaire[/SIZE][SIZE=11pt]: The Legionnaire's are special forces comprised of the best of the best, some even are fabled to be Half Human Half Emani breed that had allowed them to be faster and stronger. They are hardly seen and are usually grouped into small squads. [/SIZE]


  • [SIZE=11pt]Vanguard[/SIZE][SIZE=11pt]: The Pilots of the UIA Navy they are like the Centurions are often used in snub fighters made up of old TIE’s or TIE’s mixed in with other ships, and often use large numbers to overwhelm enemy capital ships and fighters. They wear no life support suits and like the Empire of old suffer the highest casualty rate.[/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=11pt]Alaris[/SIZE]: The Alaris are a group of special warriors, believed by the religious Emani as being blessed with the power of the gods, able to move objects at will and wield lightsabers. Trained in an unorthodox and more military view of the Jedi, these few Force Users play a support role in the Military and technical fall outside of the Military command structure as a secret of the Government.


  • [SIZE=11pt]Officer Corps[/SIZE][SIZE=11pt]: Like the Empire or the First Order before it, The Officer corps is often made for commanders of both the land armies and those that take to the skies. They are often made of some of the most brilliant academics that passed through the Military. Soldiers such as Centurions may also qualify for the Officer corps through experience. [/SIZE]


  • [SIZE=11pt]The Emani Expeditionary Force: The Emani Tribes who had not joined the UIA had worked together to create the Expeditionary Force, a Frontier force comprising of light armor and robes and armed with Bolt Rifles and homemade explosives. [/SIZE]


  • [SIZE=11pt]Technology: The Technology of Andax both the Emani and the United Imperium as of circa 852 ABY have reached a technological advancement akin to that of the First Order- Resistance conflict. Inheriting the technology passed down from the Ancestors of the Emani and the Empire and First Order that had originally settled there. They have just started to reach out beyond the world they inhabit, with the technology able to have holograms, medicine, and magnificent cities but they are primitive in comparison to the advanced technology of the modern era[/SIZE]

[SIZE=11pt]Historical Information:[/SIZE]

[SIZE=11pt]Andax was once a world housed by an Ancient Civilization deep in the Unknown Regions as the ruins are believed to have dated all the way back to 30,000 BBY Many believed they were related as perhaps being slaves of the Ancient Rakatan Empire. The ancient peoples that had dwelled on the world had vanished not long after the Rakatan Empire collapsed, leaving behind vast ancient ruins scattered all across Andax. The technological people of the Emani had settled on the world in 25,000 BBY following along the destruction of their homeworld in a different system on the Outer Rim following in what would be known as the prophesied event known as the Great Journey to the people, they had settled on the world and began a time of great wealth and prosperity known as the Age of Peace. The Age of Peace lasted for several millennia, the world often remaining out of most of the major events of the Galaxy, and in that time The Emani built cities such as Tara often basking in new found wealth and wonder for thousands of years.[/SIZE]
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[SIZE=11pt]The Great Fall [/SIZE]

[SIZE=11pt]Andax and it’s people remained out of Galactic affairs until 3637 BBY during the renewed conflict between the Sith Empire and the Galactic Republic, but was also attacked by the Eternal Empire in the Unknown Regions. The Empire met Sith and Republic forces over Andax, with troops fighting on the ground, the native Emani on the continent of Eros. Seeing Jedi and Sith, and troopers of all kinds they fought against both sides, but the Sith decided to purge the world and bombarded the continent of Eros, the Emani population that did survive made a long exodus to the sister continent of Varos, with those that stayed hopelessly attempting to bring back what was lost. The battle becoming known to the Emani as the Great Fall, revenge carried out by the Gods for them to lose their way and become too technological dependant. [/SIZE]

[SIZE=11pt]The Emani that had settled on Varos had spread out into various city-states. Practicing a more traditional way of thinking before they became more opened up to Science with the Religious leader Val Cardar had guided the people to prosperity, establishing the holy city of Zhora in 2000 BBY. Andax had roughly remained quiet till the declining years of the Republic with the Chiss Ascendancy discovering Andax and the Emani people in 250 BBY, at first hostile intentions due to the Emani’s distrust of outsiders after the Chiss decided to share technology and knowledge the Emani reluctantly accepted them and learned of the greater galaxy. [/SIZE]

[SIZE=11pt]The Emani were able to travel the stars by 100 BBY with the Chiss’s help and met with Republic explorer’s in 80 BBY, with the Emani being considered to of be great interest to the Jedi, they had even started to take select students into the Order much to the Emani’s distrust of the Jedi and their fear. The Emani prospered embracing technology and coming out of it’s primitive dark ages that they had endured for millenia. Becoming part of the wider galaxy and even embracing the Republic, becoming a part of their senate in 50 BBY. [/SIZE]

[SIZE=11pt]The Emani stayed largely out of the corruption that had plagued the Republic, with the world catching the eye of Supreme Chancellor Palpatine in 30 BBY, knowing of it’s history as a place visited by the Sith thousands of years ago, as well as a way to the deepest parts of the Unknown Regions. Andax for the next decade keeps to itself largely ignoring the separatist threat within the Republic. In 20 BBY Palpatine begins construction of several observatories across the galaxy, Andax being the final one known as the Vault, used to store Sith artifacts brought over from Coruscant. Andax stays out of the Clone Wars, and stays to become part of the Galactic Empire in 19 BBY. [/SIZE]
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[SIZE=11pt]Kira Harik Jedi Survivor and Rebel[/SIZE]
[SIZE=11pt]Under the Empire the Emani are forced to yield almost half of the Doomium they have, the Doomium precious and used for the Empire’s growing fleet of Star Destroyers, Andax became prioritized in mining the Doomium while making sure the Emperor’s Observatory is built often working the people to cruel limits. In 1 BBY Jedi Padawan Kira Harik on the run from the Empire for years crash lands on Andax. Kira Harik after seeing the cruel treatment of the Empire throughout it’s cities and the treatment of the people decided to embrace her destiny as a Jedi. Training one Emani Padawan, she disrupted the Empire’s operations till incurring the wrath of the Emperor who had dispatched Darth Vader to deal with her. Kira instigated a revolt by the Emani, who had proceeded to overthrow the Empire from Andax thanks to old weapon systems designed during the Republic. Kira faced Vader aboard the Imperial Star Destroyer Justicar where Kira engaged in a final duel with the Dark Lord, triggering the Destroyer’s reactor sacrificing herself and bringing the Destroyer down, and Vader escaping his mission completed.[/SIZE]
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Admiral Killion, founder of what woud be later the United Republic of Andax
[SIZE=11pt]After the revolt the Emani had controlled Andax for several years until 5 ABY, when an imperial fleet fleeing into the Unknown Regions were pursued to Andax, with their ships damaged the Imperials led by Admiral Galan Killion, forced to settle on Andax knowing they would not be joining the other Imperials. Himself believing they were being left behind by their fellow Imperials. Killion started to set up settlements around the ruins of the crashed destroyer Justicar, using left over supplies, and material from the Destroyer and their own ships to set up a makeshift base fighting off the Emani who had gained the use of Imperial arms as well. [/SIZE]

[SIZE=11pt]For the next several decades Admiral Killion used brutal tactics against the Emani, winning battles and losing them while being pushed back. Killion thought of losing all hope till the First Order had found the planet, and established a colony accepting Killion into the First Imperial Navy. Killion’s battle-hardened experience on Andax had changed him, he had commanded his men as well as the Twi’lek slaves that he had used to build the settlement, he had awarded them with various positions of power within the First Order controlled Andax. After the fall of the First Order after 34 ABY, Killion in his old age had enough of the Imperials and decided that the Imperials under his command as well as his slaves would be the backbone of his government. Calling for a truce with the Emani people, he and the Emani tribal leaders decided to work together establishing a better brighter future for all peoples. By creating the United Republic of Andax.[/SIZE]
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[SIZE=11pt]Arsian Bardack, ruler of the United Imperium of Andax and military expert alongside a Centurion. [/SIZE]
[SIZE=11pt]The United Republic prospered for many years, thankfully even staying out of the Yuuzhan Vong Invasions, but soon became a place of refuge for Yuuzhan Vong broken from the war. The people had thrived after enduring War for so long, that they had finally known peace for the many centuries to come. Andax was forgotten to most after the First Order’s collapse, the only way it was known was through the archives of the Empire, and so for the next few centuries prospered. This would not last as in 426 ABY, the trade that they had prospered from the Galaxy within brought the sickness to them. The Emani and Humans died by the millions, and by the time the Plague was over in 455 ABY. Andax was devastated set back the Emani decades technologically. They had started to revert back to a simple way of life, and by 700 ABY emerged from its dark ages setting up the United Republic once more, The Andaxins started to reach back into the Galaxy, trading with other worlds and by 800 ABY they had reached back into the technology of the Old Republic. With instability in the Government Military taction Arsian Bardack had the idea of a government similar to the old ways recounted in their history. He gathered those most loyal to him and triggered a military coup assassinating most key officials and establishing the United Imperium. A more authoritarian regime than the Republic. By 852 ABY after centuries of recovery under the Imperium of Andax, they have reached a technological level similar to that of the First Order- Resistance War.[/SIZE]

[SIZE=11pt]Thriving as it used to be The Imperium looks beyond the stars in hopes to expand waiting to enter back to the larger state of the Galaxy, unaware of what lurks beyond. [/SIZE]
 
[member="Kyrel Ren"]

Thank you, so a few things that need addressed in the submission:
  • I hate to say this, but in image credits, all your links are just going to the image themselves. I need them to link to the actual page that artist posted them to.
  • There seems to be a slight contradiction between your imports/exports and their technology level. You state they are able to manufacture blasters and medicine, but also list they have to import medicine and tibanna gas. With the planet's history that they seem to just be reaching out to the galaxy again, they wouldn't have access to everything they needed to make blasters and such until now. So clear up this please by either saying they connected with the galaxy sooner than it seems to be implied or they are just now getting sufficient resources to reach FO-Resistance War tech.
  • If the former is chosen, it is also going to mean that you need to explain how the Gulag Plague affected the world as trade would bring the plague to the planet.

  • Kyrel Ren said:
    The overall atmosphere is of strict obedience and loyalty mixed in with fear and an ever growing feeling of being watched. But the people are not afraid in fact live happily it what almost seems like a perfect utopia.
    so they live in fear and paranoia about observers but they are not afraid and live happily. Please fix this contradiction.
  • Overall, this is a very fleshed out submission that has seen a lot of work put into it. The only other thing I'm going to note is while I am alright with one of Palpatine's Observatories being here, I would advise caution and moderation on what might be found inside it.
 
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