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 Alright, I'll do one

His Light Casts No Shadows
So for a while, I have been wondering how my writing has been. Specifically with Kale. I have him at just over 650+ posts and have been writing him since 2019. So, with that in mind, I would like some critiques on my writing, him as a character, or whatever. I'm not trying to "farm reactions." or whatever. I want some serious critiques. Something that makes me really think about how I have been writing him. My most recent threads I'll go ahead and share, or you can just stalk the profiles and get more from there.

Thanks in advance.

 

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