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Approved Starship Akan Galaar Class War Ship the Tracyn

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High Commander of the Lilaste Order
OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION
  • Intent: to create a ship for my character to find/ chase after
  • Image Source: Akaan Galaar

Veragitor.jpg




  • Canon Link: N/A
  • Permissions: N/A
  • Primary Source:N/A
PRODUCTION INFORMATION
TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS
  • Classification: Attack Carrier
  • Length:1,600 meters
  • Width:: 670 meters meters,
  • Height: 380 meters,
  • Armament: High
  • 2 Super Heavy Mass Drivers
    6 Heavy Mass Drivers
    8 Heavy Turbolaser Batteries
    20 Light Turbolaser Batteries
    6 Light Laser Cannon Batteries
    4 Ion Cannon Batteries
  • Defenses: High
  • Beskar/Trimantium hull
  • 3 Default Deflector Shields[4000+ years outdated]
  • Hangar Space: Extreme
  • Hanger Allocation: 15
  • Starfighter Squadrons: 7
  • Support Craft Squadrons: 8

  • Maneuverability Rating: Low
  • Speed Rating: low
  • Maximum Acceleration 3,000 G
  • Max Atmospheric Speed 975kph
  • Hyperdrive: Class 2.o HyperDrive
STANDARD FEATURES

  • Ship Components
    • Standard Communications Array
    • Standard Hyperdrive
    • Standard Ion Engines
    • Standard Life Support Systems
    • Standard Navigational Systems
    • Standard Repulsorlift Engines
    • Standard Sensor Array
    • Can Enter Atmosphere and Land
ADVANCED SYSTEMS
  • N/A
STRENGTHS
  • Survivability the Ship is made Primarily out of Beskar And Trimantium Giving it a high Survivability Rate
  • Double Armor- the Ship has two Layers of armor
  • Old Systems - due to the age of many of the ships Systems some ships might have Trouble scanning and even detecting some of the ancient Frequencies that the ship runs on
WEAKNESSES
  • Ancient - Due to the age of the Ship, Many of its Systems are Severely Outdated Leaving it Vulnerable to New age Electronic Warfare
  • Ballistic Armament - with Mass Driver Cannons installed the Ship needs to carry live rounds which if destroyed would cause an Internal Explosion
  • Old Systems - due to the Old age of the ship's Systems and Computers Many of them need Constant Maintenance and Many of the parts are no longer in Production
DESCRIPTION
The dagger-shaped class was similar in appearance to the Venator Class StarDestroyer produced millennia later for the GAR[ Grand Army of the Republic] during the Clone Wars. the Ship was one of the Primary Capital ships used by the Mandalorian Neo Crusaders during the Mandalorian Wars. being used alongside the Kandosii class as the main Capital ships of many Mandalorian Fleets. the Akan Gallar or Veragitor was used as a Carrier for fighters. this Ship, in Particular, was Named the Tracyn by Ris Ordo during the Mandalorian Wars, and thus has Clan Ordos clan Mark etched into the right "Wing" on the outer Hull as well as being etched above the doors in the Corridor. on the Bridge above one of the main View, ports hangs Laphistos Force Sword. Returned to him after Ris Ordos Death. the ship is currently in the unknown regions where it is manned by a full droid crew with orders to flee or destroy any ship that gets to close that doesn't have the required stand-down beacon. the Ship needs a total of 20,000 Crew in order to operate at peak efficiency. and has enough space to hold 50,000 Troops and Support Staff. and has a cargo hold Capable of Storing 50,000 Metric Tons.

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Hanger from high to Extreme
Color coded values
 
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Massive issues.

This is not what the Image Source is for. It is to be displayed on the website page itself, where the image is located on that page, not the actual image as a separate link.

This is not based on our canon, remove as it cannot be transfered.

  • Manufacturer: MandalMoters/Byblos Drive yards
Link these to the proper manufacturers.

  • Affiliation: Originally owned by Ris ordo and the Mandalorian Neo Crusaders during the Mandalorian wars
Not allowed. You as an individual cannot own it either, so either use a minor faction, major faction or company you are apart of. Link whatever you put in but that affiliation will not work.

  • Doonium/Laminasteel Structure
  • Beskar/Trimantium Reinforced Hull
  • Quadranium Engines/ fuel tanks
  • Durasteel Blastdoors and interier
Link the materials! Anything like Doonium, Laminasteel, ect needs to be listed and linked!

  • Hangar Space: 10
1000m [Base: 1 | Very Low: 3 | Low: 4 | Average: 5 | High: 7 | Very High: 9 | Extreme: 11]
1500m [Base: 2 | Very Low: 4 | Low: 6 | Average: 8 | High: 10 | Very High: 12 | Extreme: 15]
2000m [Base: 2 | Very Low: 5 | Low: 8 | Average: 11 | High: 14 | Very High: 17 | Extreme: 20]
  • Hangar Allocations: 260
    • 160 Davaab Starfighters
    • 100 Basilisk Wardroids
This is not how it works. It works on a squad basis as our starfighters have their own submission threads in factory that works off this. Essentially it should look like this:

Hanger Space: High
Hanger Allocation: 10
Starfighter Squadrons: 8
Support Craft Squadrons: 2

That is just an example based on what you have. Please fix this. Also get rid of the fluff in between, there is no use for it to be there.


  • Self Destruct - Like all Mandalorian Ships at the time the Akan Galaar Came Equipped with a Self Destruct Switch
Not a weakness, remove. Most have a switch like it these days.


Let me know when you fix all of this.
Laphisto Laphisto
 
First, copy the link from the URL of the material you are using. Then, highlight a word, like this one I hyperlinked. Then, click on the paperclip/chain like icon which to the left is a >_ icon and to the right is a wind icon. Make sure it is on URL and just paste the URL from earlier and hit insert. There you go!

Laphisto Laphisto
 
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