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Approved NPC Adin Zang


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OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION
  • Intent: To create Alina's second in command over the 67th Legion
  • Image Credit: Brian Matyas
  • Role: Military Commander
  • Permissions: N/A
  • Links: 67th Legion
PHYSICAL INFORMATION
  • Age: Middle Aged
  • Force Sensitivity: Non-Force User
  • Species: Arkanian
  • Appearance: Adin is almost always in his armor. Underneath, he's the more typical Arkanian. White skin, white hair, four fingers. He has a haunted, distant gaze born from the numerous combat he'd been in. Average height, average weight, average build. Under his armor he looks more like the most average Arkanian in the galaxy, save for a couple scars that mar his flesh here and there.
SOCIAL INFORMATION
  • Name: Adin Zang
  • Loyalties: Alina Tremiru, The 67th Legion
  • Wealth: Middle Class
  • Notable Possessions: Sith Imperial Legionnaire Combat Armor, Judicator Adaptive Battle Rifle, Knuckle Plated Vibro Blade, Electro Magnet Pulse Grenade, Thermal Imploder
  • Skills: Military Command, Piloting, Engineering, Demolitions
  • Languages: Basic, binary droidspeak, Sith, Galactic Sign Language
  • Personality: Adin is an old soul in an old body. He's calm, quiet, and collected. But fiercely loyal to his troops above all else. The only thing that he could be considered just as loyal to is the Sith. Empire or not, Adin has seen the strength and power the Sith have first hand. Before the fall of the Empire, he treated them with reverence befitting a god. Now, he respects the power they hold, but realized they weren't gods.

    If they were, the Empire never would've fallen.

    But he still believes that the Sith are destined to rule, and while unwilling to lay down the lives of his troops, he would gladly give his own if it meant putting the Sith back in their rightful throne.
COMBAT INFORMATION
  • Weapon of Choice: Blaster Rile
  • Combat Function: Troop Command. When engaged directly he focuses on utilizing his battle rifle, either to shoot down his foes or bash them like it's a club.
  • Force Abilities (Force Users Only): N/A
Strengths:
  • Quick Wit: Adin is quick with his mind, able to hastily assess most situations and formulate a plan to get around any problems.
  • Loyal: There are no one he is more loyal to than Alina and the 67th legion.
Weaknesses:
  • My Troops Survive: Orders that involve sacrificing his own troops are a no go. He'll flat out ignore those sorts of orders, even if it costs the mission.
  • Cybernetics: His lungs don't work on their own. Small cybernetics within his chest keep them moving, but an EMP could send him into raspatory failure.
HISTORICAL INFORMATION

Who Adin was before the Sith Imperial Army didn't matter to him. It was the moment in life when he realized everything he'd been doing was a lie. Rumors spread about his past throughout the academy. Former Alliance farmer boy. He had a family but they were killed in the war. He was a gang member on Nar Shadaa. All manner of rumors, but none he'd deny or confirm.

He lead various squads throughout the former Sith Empire's rule, fighting alongside fellow troops and Sith. It wasn't until much later that his efforts and loyalty would be recognized. Adin Zang became the newest leader of the 67th Legion. After the fall of the Empire and the resulting collapse, he took it upon himself to take who remained and keep them in hiding until his Lady's return. Like those that remained, he believed Alina would return. And when she did, he was quick to pull everyone into line. Named the new commander by Alina, he awaits their next orders in a hopes they can one day reclaim all that had been lost with the Empire.
 
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Under Review Alina Tremiru Alina Tremiru

This checks all the main boxes, but there are a few areas I'd like to see expanded a bit.

  • Appearance: Although all Arkanians have similar pigmentation, they don't all look the same. Is Adin's build thin and wiry? Thickset and muscular? Gone a bit to fat now that he's commanding rather than fighting on the front lines? Is he taller or shorter than average? What color are the eyes that have that haunted look? What sets him apart from others?

  • Notable Possessions: Please link the relevant equipment here so that readers don't have to visit another sub to find it.

  • Personality: Optional, but this is pretty brief, and would benefit from some expansion. Adin wants to reclaim the Empire's territories. Why does he believe in the Empire? What drives him to want to restore it? What does he love, respect, hate, and fear?

  • Combat Function: Per the template, "Should your NPC wind up in combat, what would they be good at? How would they work alongside you, or would they be a liability?" If Adin is directly confronted, rather than facing his troops, is he any good in a fight? What kind of tactics would he use in a situation like that?

  • Historical Information: Adin presumably had a life before the 67th. Where was he born? How did he grow up? Where was he educated on military tactics? Did he ever serve in the field before becoming a commander? If so, where and when? Did his upbringing as a citizen of the Sith Empire affect his view of the galaxy?

Feel free to reach out with any questions you may have.
 

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