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Approved Planet Achillea

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Duke of House Cadriaan
[SIZE=11pt]OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION[/SIZE]
[SIZE=11pt]THIS IS A CANON PLANET [/SIZE]

[SIZE=11pt]GENERAL INFORMATION[/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=11pt]Planet Name: Achillea[/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=11pt]Demonym Achillean [/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=11pt]Region: Colonies (Between Inner and Core)[/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=11pt]System Name: Achillea System[/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=11pt]System Features: [/SIZE]


  • [SIZE=11pt]Achillea (Celestial Body I): The capital of the System, and major source of power and trade. Planet has 400 days and rotational period of 30 hours, being fourteen hours of light and sixteen of night. Temperatures during the day are considered quite pleasing like planets such as Alderaan, with cold evenings and even colder nights, not enough to make it snow. Its seasons are divided in summer, spring, autumn and ‘winter’, it doesn’t snow in the planet. With atmosphere Type I[/SIZE]


  • [SIZE=11pt]Planet has Four Moons, and one sun, called Patrocus [/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=11pt]Celestial Bodies I.II: The Four Moons of Achillea:[/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=11pt]PELEUS: Type I atmosphere, a barren and desert moon, mainly used for factories and mining. With many moisture farms around the habitable zones, Peleus possess quite wildlife, much like Tatooine, the moon has anoobas, banthas, dewback, cliffborer worm, eopie, galoomp, profogg, ronto, sandswimmers, womp rat, worrt and gorgs. [/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=11pt]MYRMIR: Type I atmosphere, a moon of lovely weather and rich green fields. Home to many Revyia and Daltarri. Mostly made by farmers, the moon is known to have vast fields, tall hills, rivers and inner oceans of sweet water, a rich place of many herbs such as Nysillin, tchuspera, blumfruit, carababba tabac, muja fruit, shuura and aura spice. Most of its economy is made from trade, having great and close ties with Achilla as they are ruled by them, the farming moon also hosts several private properties and is home to many alien fauna that roam freely in the satelite. Such as bogwing, falumpaset, fambaa, anooba, canoid, banthas, frog dogs, bist, Bergruutfa , urcaninus, tookas, edgehawks, mooka, nerf, Goa lawah, grantaloupe, grazer, gualamas, rabbits, squalls, qieg, blarths, anakoona, arrak snake, womp rats, scurrier.[/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=11pt]THETIS: Type I atmosphere, a barren and cold world, crawling with mountains, the moon is known for being having its wealth located underground. Mostly used for mining and manufacturing, the moon has rich deposits of diamonds, aurodium, titanium, lignan, trimantium, lommite, tricopper and arcetron.[/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=11pt]NEREID: Type I atmosphere, a sea and stormy planet. The whole moon is covered by oceans with constant rains, the weather itself is divided with cloudy or rainy. The moon has a very wide marine life, with Aiwha, krakana, moappa, whaladons, crabs, yobshrimp, colo claw fish, doo, faa, mee, opee, ray, sando aqua monster. Many facilities and research labs from private companies operate in this moon. [/SIZE]


  • [SIZE=11pt]Coordinates: 21 R, between Selvaris and Netaleon. [/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=11pt]Major Imports: Raw materials, consumer goods, technology, luxury items, processed foods.[/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=11pt]Major Exports: Space wood furniture, refined metal and pure ore (quadrillium, alusteel, titanium, lignan, trimantium) goods (carbonite, carababba tabac and similars), food.[/SIZE]
[SIZE=11pt]GEOGRAPHIC INFORMATION[/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=11pt]Gravity: Standard[/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=11pt]Climate: Temperatures during the day are considered quite pleasing like planets such as Alderaan, with cold evenings and even colder nights, not enough to make it snow. Its seasons are divided in summer, spring, autumn and ‘winter’, it doesn’t snow in the planet.[/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=11pt]Primary Terrain: With shallow yet rich, warm seas all across the planet, and three large land masses covered with forests, savannas, green fields, mountains, caverns and deserts. The land masses are called Nessantico, Beleriando and Farrendelo.[/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=11pt]Atmosphere:Type I.[/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=11pt]Major Locations: [/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=11pt]CADRIELL (Capital): Cadriell is located on the western coast of the planet most northern continent, is a very beautiful city with old buildings and palaces, remembering the old times of the colonization of the planet.. There is very tall trees everywhere and mountains around the city, that occupies half the continent. It was named the capital for being the place where House Cadriaan has its main palace and seat of power in the planet. [/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=11pt]GADRIELL: Gadriell is the biggest city of the planet, even bigger than Cadriell, occupying most of the northern continent. Being the biggest, is also the most ugly to look at. At least when you have cities like Cadriell and Shirell to compare. Is also where most the non-elzeri lives.[/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=11pt]SHIRELL: Shirell is the city of the rich, the wealth, and the nobles. Even members of the royal family choose to live here, due to being a small city that exists in the third and smallest continent. A place of woods and green fields, where many small estates and personal summer houses exist were built across the area. Rich in wildlife and flora. [/SIZE]

[SIZE=11pt]POPULATION[/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=11pt]Native Species: Formerly human.[/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=11pt]Immigrated Species: Elzeri, Vahla, Miraluka, Togorian, Herglic, Baragwin, Tintinna, Dashade, Kushiban, Revyia and Daltarri.[/SIZE]
[SIZE=11pt]Population: 50 billion permanent residents, Populated.[/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=11pt]Demographics: [/SIZE]
[SIZE=11pt]Elzeri: 25% of the general population. [/SIZE]
[SIZE=11pt]Vahla: 25% of the general population. [/SIZE]
[SIZE=11pt]Humans: 10% of the general population[/SIZE]
[SIZE=11pt]Miraluka: 5% of the general population. [/SIZE]
[SIZE=11pt]Togorian: 5% of the general population. [/SIZE]
[SIZE=11pt]Herglic: 5% of the general population. [/SIZE]
[SIZE=11pt]Tintinna: 5% of the general population. [/SIZE]
[SIZE=11pt]Dashade: 10% of the general population. [/SIZE]
[SIZE=11pt]Kushiban: 5% of the general population. [/SIZE]
[SIZE=11pt]Baragwin: 3% of the general population. [/SIZE]
[SIZE=11pt]Revyia: 1% of the general population. [/SIZE]
[SIZE=11pt]Daltarri: 1% of the general population. [/SIZE]
[SIZE=11pt]Primary Languages: Galactic Standard Basic, elzerish and vahla. [/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=11pt]Culture: Achillea is the center of culture of the Cadriaan Provinces, there is very tall statues competing with the giant trees. Art can be see anywhere on the streets in various forms, a lone artist painting a beautiful art, young kids doing graffiti in the urban areas of Gadriell. The daily life is about the same as every other nations, the people wake up and go to work, children go the school or to the circle to learn how to use the force. Being a people most inclined to arts and studies, sports are not as encouraged, but there is one sport the people of Achillea loves, the Gladiators. There is several coliseums around the whole planet where everyone can fight. The fights are controlled and deaths are highly unusual. Religion in Cadriaan is the cause of the majority of the conflicts occurring in the surface of the planet. The official religion is the Church of the Word, that reigns absolute over the planet, causing other religions to be treated as heretism. . [/SIZE]
[SIZE=11pt]GOVERNMENT & ECONOMY[/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=11pt]Government: Hereditary duchy.[/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=11pt]Affiliation: Interstellar Protectorate[/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=11pt]Wealth: High, Achillea is a major trade world, exporting most of its products thanks to its position in the Shapani Bypass. [/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=11pt]Stability: Former: Medium High, Present: Low Medium. Although a rich planet that borders a fruitful trade route that made the fortune for House Caadrian and made the planet known for being a good place to make money. The ‘civil war’ has damaged the trade with other planets and allies, mostly for their shipments being hijacked and stolen from the rebels. It is said that once peace is settled with the planet, tourism and merchants will come back to resume trade with Achillea. [/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=11pt]Freedom & Oppression: Right now, the planet is being ruled by a Privy Council who usurp the power from the rightful ruler. House Cadriaan has always ruled the planet and has guide it to be a wealth, rich and a secure place, so the people didn't’ just accept the new government. Oppression has become the main tool of the Council and the people is not allowed tell what they really think about this situation, and the ones that do get beaten up, tortured or killed.[/SIZE]
[SIZE=11pt]MILITARY & TECHNOLOGY[/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=11pt]Military: Low-Medium, regional force to protect its borders and enforce the law. Real forces depending on other factions. [/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=11pt]Technology: Same standards as planets like Alderaan and Naboo. [/SIZE]
[SIZE=11pt]HISTORICAL INFORMATION[/SIZE]

[SIZE=11pt]A planet descended from the glorious era of the days of the Twelve Kingdoms Era, a government with all the major houses of the Tapani Sector uniting and establishing a powerful kingdom, renowned for it is trade routes and noble houses. Achillea led by House Cadriaan joined the Galactic Republic after several centuries during a era of closed borders where the Tapani lived in a inner circle. Once a proud member of the Galactic Empire, much like his peers from the other Tapani Noble Houses, the Cadrians always turned to support the side that was winning in the major galaxy. [/SIZE]

[SIZE=11pt]Little more eight hundred years ago, Duke Rhaelal Cadriaan to support trade with his neighbors from Kaikielius, married a elzeri noble and opened his doors and borders for that rich and powerful race. His planet being target by two ships that housed several clans of drifting elzeri, followed by many Vahlas and Miralukas from Kaikielius that were seeking wealth and status. His actions were not well seen by the humans in Achillea, for the culture that separated the Elzeri, Vahlas and Miralukas was to different, soon, many humans began to leave the planet not long after a small civil war rose in the planet, forcing House Cadriaan to choose a side. Siding with the aliens, for he was one that was interested in the elzeri blood rushing through his veins and line, Rhaelal began to establish human communities on the moon of the planet to sue for peace between both races. [/SIZE]

[SIZE=11pt]One hundred years later, the planet was sitl being reshaped by the new inhabitants. The grandson of Rhaelal, now Duke Rodur Cadriaan found his planet too dull and simple, so he began to offer lands and homes to alien species that he always wanted to meet and had admiration for their cultures. [/SIZE]

[SIZE=11pt]His son, Duke Ray Cadriaan, fifty years later, spend half his fortune buying and exporting strange and exotic animals for his system, for he wanted to open the greatest moon zoos in the galaxy. Unfortunately, his death came before that, forcing his father, Rodur, in grief to set all the animals free in his moons. [/SIZE]

[SIZE=11pt]During the time of Raslo Cadriaan, Roman’s father, the planet was ruled by a Inner Council of five members, chosen by him, that had little interest in doing it so. With his passing, the Inner Council instead of calling his son to take on the throne, they took it for themselves. Population fearing war, has stopped accepting their rule, fear of civil war has grown in the planet. [/SIZE]
 
[member="Duke Roman Cadriaan"]

Apologies for the delay, I wanted to mull this over for a bit and my power was out yesterday. Anyway, there are a few things I will need addressed:
  • So the first and foremost thing is that Force Nexus require a development explaining how they were formed and/or discovered, so if you want to keep that there, I will need one of those done.
  • I'm finding the reasoning for the demographic change odd as the humans on this world, in canon, were living alongside giant whale people as both Humans and Herglics were native to the planet so different cultures would not really be an issue for them. I'm not believing they would all get up and move when Elzeri (these need to be linked to the approved Codex sub) and Miraluka, people that look very close to them, arrived on the planet, nor do I believe the human leader of this Tapani Sector world would get away with exiling other humans before the other Tapani houses came down hard on them. So, I'm going to need a different reasoning for why no humans live on the planet or change the demographics.
  • Lignan is listed twice in the Thetis section, and on that topic, exports and imports need to reflect all the materials on this world as well if they are being mined.

  • Duke Roman Cadriaan said:
    Stability: Medium. A pleasant place for tourists mostly made of law abiding citizens. With so many fierce races and dominating religion, the planet has a heavy vigilance from the local authorities. To carry weapons without a license is a great crime in the planet, where most citizens have great respect for the ruling house and their small fees compared to most nobles in the Tapani Houses. A society governed by castes based on wealth where working is thought ever since the citizen is but a child, equality for the fellow alien is highly incentivated and enforced. Freedom & Oppression: Right now, the planet is being ruled by a Privy Council who usurp the power from the rightful ruler. House Cadriaan has always ruled the planet and has guide it to be a wealth, rich and a secure place, so the people didn't’ just accept the new government. Oppression has become the main tool of the Council and the people is not allowed tell what they really think about this situation, and the ones that do get beaten up, tortured or killed.
    these two things contradict each other, and given in context with the last section of the historical section, the planet just recently and/or is currently going through a civil war. Stability would not be very high if the fighting and resistance is still ongoing.

  • Duke Roman Cadriaan said:
    A planet with rich history from the days of the Twelve Kingdoms Era, Achillea led by House Cadriaan joined the Galactic Republic after several centuries during the Federal Era.
    this needs to be rephrased as this is copied, almost word for word, from the wiki.
 
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