The Red of Sinner
Battle Sister
Planet Nar Shadaa
The night had come quick, but would last forever, the day before, McNeal had just came back to the planet, sober, and now he was drunk, walking the streets as it poured rain onto of it. It was acidic rain from all the crap in the air from the factories, and other buildings producing pollution. How the planet stayed habitatal was beyond him.
He stumbled as he walked, using a wall to keep him up. A bottle of ale in one hand, and a free hand to keep him up, McNeal walked the streets, soaked. His twin repeaters hung in holsters under his arms, and his face needed a shave. His mind raced back to his sister happy on Coruscant, and his father visiting.
"I should have been visiting her too." He spoke inside his head. The only place words could be spoken, and kept secret. The only place he was aloud to speak openly about his feelings, whatever those were. Few people had come to this sector of Nar Shadaa, and he was grateful to that no in saw him in this pitiful state. "What am I doing here?" He asked himself, he stumbled again, but ended up on the ground. He couldn't catch his balance this time. So he sat up straight, and leaned against the wall. He took a gulp of the ale, feeling the sweet, but burning sensation go down his throat. "To the soldiers who fight for us, bunch uh.." he blurred the rest with in slurs not understood. He continued sitting there, sitting in the rain.
The night had come quick, but would last forever, the day before, McNeal had just came back to the planet, sober, and now he was drunk, walking the streets as it poured rain onto of it. It was acidic rain from all the crap in the air from the factories, and other buildings producing pollution. How the planet stayed habitatal was beyond him.
He stumbled as he walked, using a wall to keep him up. A bottle of ale in one hand, and a free hand to keep him up, McNeal walked the streets, soaked. His twin repeaters hung in holsters under his arms, and his face needed a shave. His mind raced back to his sister happy on Coruscant, and his father visiting.
"I should have been visiting her too." He spoke inside his head. The only place words could be spoken, and kept secret. The only place he was aloud to speak openly about his feelings, whatever those were. Few people had come to this sector of Nar Shadaa, and he was grateful to that no in saw him in this pitiful state. "What am I doing here?" He asked himself, he stumbled again, but ended up on the ground. He couldn't catch his balance this time. So he sat up straight, and leaned against the wall. He took a gulp of the ale, feeling the sweet, but burning sensation go down his throat. "To the soldiers who fight for us, bunch uh.." he blurred the rest with in slurs not understood. He continued sitting there, sitting in the rain.