Approved Planet Zarchas Kitza

[Darth Vyrassu]

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• Intent: new Custom capital planet for The Jen'ari Empire.



• Image Credit:


All photo edits made by me
All Headers custom made by me
Post splitter made by me
Planet pic custom made by me
Zarchas City
Sith Imperial Citadel
Imperial Military HQ
Galactic Diplomatic relations
Ministry Buildings
SITH ACADEMY BUILT BY ME ON SECOND LIFE
Midawn Spaceport
Ocadon City
Bay City
Frost City
Jen'ari Imperial Prison
Ancient Dark Temple
Totem City
Grasslands
Vaises Room
Dusuah Tower
Dead Valley
Vanduo City
Imperial Complex
Imperial Cloning Facility
Fel Embassy
Mandalorian Clan Mortui Compound



• Canon: N/A


• Links:


* The Jen'ari Empire
* Humans
* Vornskr
* Jungle Rancor
* Icewolf
* Jungle Worrt
* Skreev
* Tarsarian Devourer
* Terentatek
* Sith Species
* Zabrak
* Sanguinius Vampirika
* Sith Imperial Troopers
* The Nyeklas Squad
* The Jen'ari Sith Marauders
* The Dusuah Sorcerers
* The Imperial Credit
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GENERAL INFORMATION
• Planet Name: Zarchas Kitza

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• Demonym: Zarchanians



• Region: Outer



• System Name: Zarchas System



• System Features: Zarchas Kitza is the 3rd planet in the Zarchas System. It has 2 moons, 1 is a Forest, the other is complete ocean. There is only 1 Sun for the system.



• Coordinates: AI - 48

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• Major Imports: Duraplast, alcohol, various meats,



• Major Exports: crops, organic made medicines from jungle leaves and oils, various metal ore, various crystals.


Unexploited Resources:
* Dedlanite



GEOGRAPHIC INFORMATION
• Gravity: Standard


• Climate: Stormy/Electrified/Snow storms/Windy


• Primary Terrain:
* Rocky Mountains
* Jungles
* Oceans
* Swamps
* Grasslands
* Snow Tundra

• Atmosphere: Type I


LOCATION INFORMATION

* Capital City: Zarchas City

* Planetary Features:
* The planet is a mixture of multiple regions of environments such as Frozen/Snow Tundra, Rocky Mountains and cliifs, Swamps, Jungles, tropical islands and oceans.
* Vanduo City is a massive metropolitan city that now lie abandon and in ruins from the Gulag Plague.
* Dead Valley is a massive burial and temple ground valley for Sith in the Tundra. It's Sith spirits still roam the valley, who knows what kind of ancient artifacts of the Sith lie within the tombs.

• Major Locations:

✥ ZARCHAS CITY ✥

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Zarchas City is a massive metropolitan city carved into the rocky mountains with several flat spots terraformed in the mountain for the city. The city consist of several government buildings such as The Sith Imperial Citadel, The Imperial Military Headquarters, The Galactic Diplomatic relations center, and the Imperial Ministries Building. As well it features tons of entertainment buildings such as, Casinos, Bars, Cantinas, clubs, gentlemen clubs, theaters, and museums. Plenty of shopping can be done as well at the Imperial Plaza Mall. The city features the biggest Spaceport on the planet, The Midawn Spaceport. The city is under constant guard by Imperial military forces as well as the fierce sith marauders.

✥ SITH IMPERIAL CITADEL ✥

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The Sith Imperial Citadel is in the center and heart of Zarchas City. It reaches several kilometers into the sky making it the tallest building on the planet. It includes The Emperor's throne room, Dark Council chambers, Imperial intelligence, imperial offices, sith offices, sith apartments, ministry offices, training rooms, Sith Archives, and workshops to build new tech and lightsabers. It was designed to be identical to the First Imperial Citadel under Vitiate for the Reconstituted Sith Empire of the Old Republic. It stands as a monument of power for The Jen'ari Empire.

✥ IMPERIAL MILITARY HQ ✥

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The Imperial Military HQ is where all Imperial Officers for the capital are stationed as well as Imperial Troops. The HQ as well houses the Nyeklas Squad. The HQ features barracks, training course, tactical planning rooms, offices, a gym, classrooms, a library, shooting range, armory and a supply depot. It sits on the main street of Zarchas City, a couple of blocks away from the Citadel. It's structure is designed to show the Imperial Military's power.

✥ GALACTIC DIPLOMATIC RELATIONS ✥

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The Galactic Diplomatic relations or GDR building was a building that would house several important meetings to discuss treaties, alliances, and non hostile pacts of the nature. As well for every alliance TJE had, the Aligning faction would have an office in the GDR building for an ambassador of the faction.

✥ MINISTRIES BUILDING ✥

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The Ministries building houses the 4 different ministries of the Jen'ari Empire that deal with different relations among the Empire. Although classified to the public, Each ministry has an important role that works within the Empire. The offices of each ministry can be found here along with different rooms of each divisional branch they operate and work in.

✥ SITH ACADEMY ✥

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The Sith Academy is where all Sith acolytes first start at in The Jen'ari Empire. Here they'll learn to create a lightsaber, learn basic combat and force abilities. Afterwards a Sith Knight or higher will take you as an Apprentice. The academy features, classrooms, combat dojo, library, meeting and planning rooms, barracks, offices, obstacle courses and training rooms. The Academy is located on a massive mountain top flat plains outside of Zarchas City.

✥ MIDAWN SPACEPORT ✥

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The Midawn Spaceport named after it's builder Darth Midawn. It's the largest spaceport on the planet. It serves as the central hub of all traffic coming and going from Zarchas Kitza. The spaceport can house 450 personal ships, 20 massive ships such as transport ships. It also serves as the central hub for all imports and exports. As well, one can pay for shuttle rides to various locations around the planet so long as it has some sort of port.

✥ ODACON CITY ✥

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Odacan City is hidden deep in the jungles of Zarchas Kitza. It's a massive metropolitan city that has become overgrown by the plant life of the jungle. It's not abandon, it's just it's residents seem to like the overgrown look of it. The city features casinos, hotels, apartments, cantinas, bars, and clubs as well as various stores. Many criminals seek refuge here hidden away so far in the galaxy.

✥ BAY CITY ✥

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Bay City is the oldest city on the planet and at one point was the biggest and only city. It's a major tourist trap for those that find their way this far out into the galaxy. It features hundreds of shops, fishing plants, casinos, bars, gentleman clubs, restaurants, diners, hotels, casinos, apartments, just about everything you could think of in a tourist spot. Many Jen'ari Empire personal vacation here when off duty. But like the rest of the planet, it has it's dark secrets. The city was once ruled by a dark sorcerer who did so many rituals that it caused a Darkside Nexus to form over the city.

✥ FROST CITY ✥

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Frost City is a hidden city deep in the ice and snow tundra region of the planet. Temperatures here get to -30 degrees at night. Buildings here are made of metals that keep the cold out. On top of the frigid cold weather, it seems to always be snowing non stop. The city features hotels, apartments, shopping, theatres, restaurants, bars, casinos and museums. So if you can brave the cold you'll find something for you here. Just outside the city is the Jen'ari Imperial Prison where all enemies of The Empire and law breakers are kept.

✥ JEN'ARI IMPERIAL PRISON ✥

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The Jen'ari Imperial Prison is a well maintained highly secured prison. Every structure is made in layers of Concrete, Durasteel, duraplast, then concrete again with each layer being at least 6 inches thick. The walls are 65 feet high. Security towers with Nyeklas Squad snipers and search lights, Turbo lasers around the outside. Inside is 245 normal cells, with 50 force cage cells all containing a window that is 6 inches tall and 3 feet wide. Each cell block has a library, a yard, and rec room. Solitary cells have no windows and are sealed by Duraplast and Durasteel layered blast doors with one little slit to slide in food trays. Each cell has a thin mattress, sink, and toilet. Showers are available during rec room time. The prison also includes Wardens office, cafeteria, Imperial officer offices, visiting rooms, interrogation rooms, torture chambers and execution chambers as well as barracks for guards posted here.

✥ ANCIENT DARK TEMPLE ✥

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The Ancient Dark Temple was once Darth Vyrassu's private temple in 245 ABY when The Jen'ari Empire first ruled the planet. Inside it features a library, throne room, meeting room, an alchemy room. It became a force nexus from Vyrassu's personal rituals done here. The temple became abandon after the gulag plague hit. Today it is rumoured that Vyrassu uses the temple once again but has never been confirmed. It's location is hidden deep in the jungles only Vyrassu and the Dark Council knowing of it's exact location.

✥ TOTEM CITY ✥

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Totem City was a massive metropolitan city that was once a thriving entertainment city. But once the Gulag Plague hit the galaxy every living soul in totem city perished. The many Sith Deaths that died here have their spirits still walking the city causing a Darkside Nexus. Today the city remains nothing but abandon ruins, a ghost shell of what it once was.

✥ GRASSLANDS ✥

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The Grasslands has played host to many events. One can find war damage here, find that weapons testing happened here by the Galactic Empire, as well Sith Emperor Vitiate did rituals here to cause a nexus. But now it plays home to many many farms where most of the planets fruits, vegetables and crops are grown and harvested. The grasslands are vast large open lands with Nyeklas snipers constantly watching from rocky mountains and other high point places protecting the farms.

✥ VAISES ROOM ✥

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The Vaises Room is a massive 5 story entertainment center. It was the biggest Cantina on the planet. The 1st floor was a massive Cantina with private booths along the wall, a Droid band that played the music you chose from a jukebox by tokens that could be purchased by the Bartender. 2nd floor was a casino with tons of gambling games such as Pazzaak, Sabacc, as well as slot machines and various other gambling games. The 3rd floor was the fanciest Restaurant on the planet, with plates costing a hefty amount but only serving the finest and best food. 4th floor was a Club for ppl to dance, listen to music and have a good time. 5th floor was private meeting rooms where patrons could rent the rooms for meetings.

✥ DUSUAH TOWER ✥

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The Dusuah tower is a sorcerer's tower standing as the second tallest building on the planet. It features barracks, Labs, arcane rooms, a library, a throne room for the Emperor, Experiment chambers, and a Ritual room at the very top. The top of the tower has a ball of fire that is constantly burning even in the rain, it's rumored too be kept lit by dark magic. All around the tower is falling ash mixed with the rain. It's said the ash is from the fire burning the Dusuah Sorcerers failed experiments. The tower is a Darkside Nexus due to constant rituals being done in the tower. The Tower sits on a mountain top flat spot 30 miles outside of Zarchas City.

✥ DEAD VALLEY ✥

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Dead Valley was a massive land in the tundra riddled with Ancient statutes and runes and pillars and tombs. This was a massive Sith graveyard. Hundreds of Sith are buried here as well as many Sith spirits still linger around the valley. This place is very strong in the darkside and as well is the host of a Nexus.

✥ VANDUO CITY ✥

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Vanduo City is located very very far out in the storm ridden oceans of the planet. It's so far out that you cannot see land in any direction. The city is held up by Duraplast poles high enough so the crashing waves would never hit the city platforms. The city is massive. It features hotels, restaurants, Cloning Facility, HK Assassin Droid factory, Imperial Military training academy and Imperial Military boot camp. The city as well has bars, apartments, museums, theaters, and plenty of shopping. The only way to the city is by flying, a boat could not make it due to the massive waves and sea monsters. The City was once host to Sith Rituals to kill many Jedi invaders causing a Darkside Nexus.

✥ IMPERIAL COMPLEX ✥

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The Imperial Complex is a secret facility on the planet. Only rumors are fully known about the place other than it's severely guarded. Imperial Troopers, Nyeklas squad, HK Assassin Droids and Sith Marauders all working together to guard the complex. The complex is a massive massive building that is painted to match It's surroundings. It's exact location is classified to all outside high ranking Imperial officers and The Dark Council. It's said this location is where weapons, and HK Assassin droids as well as other things are created for the empire.

✥ IMPERIAL CLONING FACILITY ✥

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The Imperial Cloning facility is a classified location building that creates clones that are made into Imperial troopers or the Nyeklas squad. The host DNA has been considered classified outside of the Emperor and The Dark Council. It's a 9 story building, with each floor housing 500 clones. Under ground is a massive complex where nearly 500,000 clones are constantly being created. The cloning process is similar to the cloning process on Kamino, accelerated growth, and full Imperial justification training system. From there the clones go to the Imperial Military academy.

✥ FEL EMBASSY ✥

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The Fel Embassy tower was built in the planets capital city, Zarchas City as honor to the Imperial Treaty of alliance signed between the Fel empire and The Jen'ari Empire. The tower includes offices, barracks, armory, meeting rooms, combat dojo, tactical planning rooms, communications center, as well as various other rooms varied for The Fel Empire's needs. The building is illuminated with LED strips of crystal blue lights for decoration.

✥ MANDALORIAN CLAN MORTUI COMPOUND ✥

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Clan Mortui was around since the first Mand'alor. Recently signing a business employment contract with The Jen'ari Empire which gave the clan use of an old abandoned military base on an island. The clan fixed up the base and made it a fully operational Mandalorian Compound complete with barracks, combat ring, armory, hangars, training course, library, a few offices, a jail, trading outpost, a small farm, water purification system, communications center and a planning room.

Force Nexus (Optional): The planet has a Darkside Nexus all over it, mainly due to every region having Darkside Nexus's connecting all together to cover the entire planet.


* Intent: A Place for The Jen'ari Empire to submit themselves into the Darkside and create a truly interesting environment within the Darkside for future stories and roleplay.

* Strength: Strong

* Effects: The effects of the Darkside nexus to those that are indeed bound to the Darkside can feed off the energy of the nexus to empower themselves, but one must not let it fully consume them as it might drive them insane. To non Darkside users, the effects MIGHT be felt as Depression, cold, death, anger and or hate more than anything else.


Nexus Development Thread: Darkness of the past
(this also explains the nexus)

POPULATION

• Native Species:
* Humans
* Vornskr
* Jungle Rancor
* Icewolf
* Jungle Worrt
* Skreev
* Tarsarian Devourer
* Terentatek
* Wampa


• Immigrated Species:
* Sith Species
* Zabrak
* Sanguinius Vampirika
* Sarlacc
* Krayt Dragon
* Various others


• Population: Crowded - Billions


• Demographics:
* Humans - 45%
* Various Creatures - 30%
* Sith - 10%
* Various others 10%
* Zabrak - 5%

• Primary Languages: Basic, Hutteneese, Sith

• Culture: The culture of the planet can be described in a variety of ways as there is different types of people on the planet. There's some that love going to the theaters and operas and museums, there's those that love going to the casinos and gambling. There's even the ones that like to commit crimes but gets arrested by Imperial troopers. There's the ones that fill up the bars every night after a hard days work, travelers who like to go shopping at the unique stores all around the planet then the explorers who are always looking to discover something new. So the culture is very diverse and thriving.

GOVERNMENT & ECONOMY
• Government: Magocratic/Theocratic Empire

• Affiliation: The Jen'ari Empire

• Wealth: The wealth of Zarchas Kitza is said to be high due to the constant income of casinos, taxes on empire citizens, selling of crops and medical supplies. Sale of various animal hide including Terentatek hide, and citizens shopping at various stores.


• Stability: High, the planet is very stable for the constant guard of The Jen'ari Empire, such as the military and Sith, as well various criminals aid the Empire in keeping their home planet stable and under control. Most crime is handled by being sent to prison or executed as the Empire has 0 tolerance for breaking Imperial Law. As well the fear from the powerful Dark Council keeps all citizens of the planet obeying Imperial Law.


• Freedom & Oppression: Citizens of the plant are fairly free to do as they please as long as they follow Imperial Law.


MILITARY & TECHNOLOGY
• Military:
* Sith Imperial Troopers
* The Nyeklas Squad
* The Jen'ari Sith Marauders
* The Dusuah Sorcerers
* The planet is militarized by various sources of the Jen'ari Empire. All have their own commanders, they help defend and protect the planet in their own way with each of their unique abilities. Outfitted with the correct weapons and armor needed for what they are designed for make them a fatal force.


• Technology: Technology is on par with the rest of the galaxy and TJE's R&D department is always hard at work developing new tech.


HISTORICAL INFORMATION
Zarchas Kitza served as a hidden Sith world during the Great Galactic War of the Old Republic. The Sith Emperor and his most trusted Sith would travel to the planet to test rituals constantly. All the rituals scattered around the planet eventually caused so many scattered Darkside Nexus's that they all just connected together causing the entire planet to be one big Darkside Nexus.

The planet was so far out in the galaxy that the republic never picked up on the planet. Very few knew it existed. The Sith rituals had cracked the atmosphere to cause eternal storms all over the planet. Vitiate conducted rituals in various places around the planet causing numerous Darkside nexus's to form. Also the Cold war took place here. The republic finally discovered the Sith Empire on the planet due to republic scouts looking for Empire territories. the main battle happened in the grasslands. During the battle a massive bomb was placed in the field, it was set off instantly killing thousands upon thousands of Sith, Imperial troops, Jedi and republic troops causing a nexus, however the nexus became dark due to the spirits of the dead Sith still roamed the grasslands corrupting the nexus. After Vitiate was no longer the Sith Emperor, the planet then became deserted by Sith for some time and was discovered again by random criminals, pirates and pilots and smugglers. Upon discovering the planet, all noticed it was actually inhabitanted by various pockets of humans among wild creatures. The new and current settlers begun constructing a city on a beach known as Bay City.

The planet begun to thrive and gain a bigger civilization by just word of the mouth, and those that wanted to travel so far out into the galaxy would find the planet and settle on it. Then when Darth Bane recreated the Sith Order, a handful of Sith Fled to Zarchas Kitza and with their cunning skills and power took over the planet enslaving the weak and those that opposed the new Sith Regime. The Sith Regime ruled the planet for a thousand years creating many more cities. During that time, many powerful Sith conducted rituals for immortality or to just grow their power in various places of the planet, some done where no nexus had been formed, causing Darkside nexuses to form. The Sith Regime was discovered by Inquisitors of Emperor Palpentine and eradicated the Sith Regime and The Galactic Empire took control of the plant using it as a weapons testing planet in the grassy plains of the planet.

Once the Galactic Empire fell, the Planet was free again and started to thrive and rebuild. Over the next 200 years the population of the planet grew significantly. In 245 ABY The Jen'ari Empire was born and ruled the galaxy as the biggest government body of the Galaxy. The Sith Emperor Darth Vyrassu had Frost City Built with an Imperial prison right outside of the city. He then built a Citadel hidden in the Jungles serving as his private citadel on the Planet. Vyrassu conducted multiple rituals in his jungle temple creating a Darkside nexus that would connect to the already established Darkside nexuses. Most of the population took a liking to the Empire for the wealth, security, stability and the jobs it brought to the planet. The planet remained under Jen'ari control for another 200 years before the Empire fell apart due to the 400 year Darkness brought on by the Gulag Plague.


The Gulag plague swept across the galaxy like a storm. Zarchas Kitza was severely affected due to the lack of traffic through hyperspace and shipping lanes, the planet being so far out had to self sustain itself. It worked for a while living off crops, and hunting wild life for meat, but eventually the meat and crops were affected by the plague making people severely sick or even killing people. One City, Totem City was affected the most and every single person in the city had died causing the city to fall into dispair and become ruins. This event led to Totem city becoming a nexus connecting it to already established nexus's, eventually the nexus would grow dark due to Sith spirits. To this day it remains abandon ruins and believed to be haunted by all the people that died within the city.

Eventually the Plague had just disappeared and the galaxy spun into CHAOS. Many factions begin to rise, but Zarchas Kitza remained alone out so far in the galaxy. It would eventually repopulate to mass numbers by many travelers, criminals, pirates among many other types of settlers. But one thing remained, the planet was unstable and had no security or control. Old records showed the planet thrived the most when it was under The Jen'ari Empire control. Citizens noticed Vyrassu had returned to the known galaxy with his Empire and heard they were attacked by another Empire ran by some powerful Sith named Carnifex. The mass population reached out to Vyrassu for help. Vyrassu met with his Dark Council and discussed the request.

The Jen'ari Empire Dark Council and Emperor agreed to move across the Galaxy to Zarchas Kitza and put it under their control. The civilization welcomed the Empire with open arms. The Emperor had a new capital city built named Zarchas City, with a Citadel designed identical to Vitiate's first Citadel. A Sith of the Empire named Darth Midawn designed and built the Midawn Spaceport but was killed shortly after by the Emperor due to Midawn insulting the style of the Citadel. Vyrassu conducted a ritual within Zarchas City forming a Darkside Nexus, this would cover the rocky mountain region and connect to the other Nexus's around the planet. All the Nexus's now connected together covered the planet in one big nexus. The Dark Council put the entire planet under Imperial Law and brought security and stability to the planet as well as a massive fleet in orbit over the planet. Vyrassu ordered all cities to be refurbished and built up stronger and more stable. The planets population grew to billions. The Empire created more jobs by creating mine shafts and tunnels to mine for various metal ore that was in the rocky mountains. The ore was refined and smelted and either sold or used to make stronger metals for weapons, armor and buildings.

The Empire even told the population of the crystal caves in the tundra so people could harvest them and sell them to make money. The Dark Council then instated the The Imperial Credit and opening a credit exchange in every city to turn regular credits in for Imperial Credits. Still to this day The Jen'ari Empire rules the planet in full control helping the planet thrive. During Recent events, Vyrassu had Krayt dragons imported from Tatooine to add to defenses of the planet as well as to add more dangerous wildlife to the growing planet. This would serve as tests of strength and combat for Acolytes.

 

[Kyyrk]

Under Review

 

[Kyyrk]

Alright, looked over the sub, and overall it's pretty well done. There are, however, a couple suggestions I'd like to make before moving forwards. First, I'm going to get the big nasty one out of the way: Per Codex rules, only images may be contained within spoilers. Specifically, the two spoilers under the "Image Credit" and "Links" heading will have to be removed before I can O.K. the sub.

Now, with that out of the way, there are a few suggestions I'd like to make that are not necessarily required, but I feel would improve the overall readability of the submission. The first one is to add some kind of divider between the Major Locations section and the Force Nexus section. I personally had to double-take on that transition when reading it over the first time, so I think adding some kind of section header, or even a bigger space between the sections would help improve the readability of the sub.

Second, looking at the information of the Force Nexus, you state that the effects of the Nexus as felt by non-Darksiders "Would be felt as depression, Cold, Death, anger, and or Hate." While not necessary, I feel it would be a good idea to clarify that these effects MIGHT happen, rather than WOULD happen, as death cannot be inflicted on a player character without their consent.

The next thing I would suggest to you are minor changes to the History section. The first observation I would make is a detail about the Force Nexus, as stated in the first paragraph of the section, is planet-wide because of numerous smaller Nexuses that connected together over the years. However, the seventh paragraph (Where the Jen'ari Empire return to the planet), states that Vyrassu the character conducted a ritual that created a new Nexus that caused all the other nexuses to link. Paired with information in the fourth paragraph about Vyrassu essentially doing the same thing, but at his private citadel, it's unclear to me exactly how this planet wide nexus was supposed to be formed. Ultimately the end goal is the same, but clarifying might help the submission's readability.

The final thing I'll point out is that in the second Paragraph seems to contradict itself by stating that it was far enough out that it was never noticed by the Republic, and very few knew of its existence, and yet in the same paragraph it states that a Cold War era battle took place on the planet, resulting in the detonation of a bomb that killed "thousands upon thousands" and creating another Dark Side Nexus. Same as the previous observation, the end result either way is the same, but it might help the readability of the submission to explain how the Republic never knew the planet existed, and yet sent a sizable force to attack it during the Cold War.

Otherwise, good work, you have a very well thought out submission here. If you can get the spoilers fixed up for me, I can OK it and pass it on to the next rung of approval!

[member="Darth Vyrassu"] [member="Irajah Ven"]

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For ease of reference:

Image Credit and Links spoilers MUST be changed

Header/Divider between Major Locations and Force Nexus CAN be added, but is NOT required

Clarification on the Effects of the Force Nexus being possibilities instead of guarantees CAN be added, but is NOT required

Clarification on creation of Planet-Wide Force Nexus CAN be added, but is NOT required

Clarification on Republic attack during Cold War CAN be added, but is NOT required

 

[Darth Vyrassu]

[member="Voph"]

Edits made

1. Splitter between major locations and nexus
2. Added more clarification to the history
3. Fixed the nexus with "might"
4. Removed spoilers

 

[Kyyrk]

[member="Darth Vyrassu"] [member="Irajah Ven"]

Short, simple, to the point, I love it.

Pending Trainee Approval.

 

[Kuzo]

[member="Darth Vyrassu"]

Over all looks good. One minor thing here:

• Coordinates: AH/AI - 48

I checked the map, this is definitely AI-48. So if you can just change it to that for the sake of Jamie who will be doing the map update, that would be great.

 

[Darth Vyrassu]

[member="Irajah Ven"]

Edited

 

[Kuzo]

[member="Darth Vyrassu"]

Approved