Approved Location =x= Kyber's Repair Shop =x=

[Kyber Salurra]

[SIZE=14.6667px]Name[/SIZE][SIZE=14.6667px]:[/SIZE][SIZE=14.666666666666666px] [/SIZE][SIZE=14.6667px]Kyber’s Repair Shop[/SIZE]​

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[SIZE=14.6667px]Image Source[/SIZE][SIZE=14.6667px]:[/SIZE]​

http://digital-art-gallery.com/picture/313​

http://openwalls.com/image?id=17484​

http://coolvibe.com/2012/sci-fi-art-repairs/​

http://digital-art-gallery.com/picture/11441​

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[SIZE=14.6667px]Intent[/SIZE][SIZE=14.6667px]:[/SIZE][SIZE=14.666666666666666px] [/SIZE][SIZE=14.6667px]I hope to get a little roleplay out of this, although I don’t expect much. I mainly want to use it to explain a small portion of Kyber’s Daily income as well as start a thread to give others the option to upgrade or repair their ships instead of buying a brand new one or going through the process of making a factory application.[/SIZE]​

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[SIZE=14.6667px]Classification[/SIZE][SIZE=14.6667px]:[/SIZE][SIZE=14.666666666666666px] [/SIZE][SIZE=14.6667px]It’s a Medium Sized Warehouse/Mechanic Shop. It has a small office, one fighter sized ship reparation area (about 50 sq meters), and one light freighter ship reparation area (about 100 sq meters), as well as a storage/unloading area in the back (about 100 sq meters).[/SIZE]​

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[SIZE=14.6667px]Location[/SIZE][SIZE=14.6667px]:[/SIZE][SIZE=14.666666666666666px] [/SIZE][SIZE=14.6667px]It is located in the Capital City of Roon, in the poorer outcropping of one of the major spaceports.[/SIZE]​

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[SIZE=14.6667px]Affiliation[/SIZE][SIZE=14.6667px]:[/SIZE][SIZE=14.6667px] It is currently owned by Kyber Salurra, and he hopes to make contact with the Techno Union’s Representatives to make sure he is registered under the External Corporation Registration Act and not breaking any such laws.[/SIZE]​

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[SIZE=14.6667px]Description:[/SIZE]​

Back of shop, loading dock and leads into door shown in next picture.

Main Hangar Shown from front-entrance perspective, back cargo door shown.

Side Hangar to the left relative of the picture above this one. Used to Store/Repair Wide Wing-spanned Ships

Storefront on the left, edge of picture to first hangar door

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[SIZE=14.6667px]History[/SIZE][SIZE=14.6667px]:[/SIZE][SIZE=14.666666666666666px] [/SIZE][SIZE=14.6667px]Used to be a Warehouse for some company or corporation long failed and forgotten. Bought and re-outfitted by Kyber to be used to repair vehicles and ships.[/SIZE]​

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[SIZE=14.6667px]Links[/SIZE][SIZE=14.6667px]:[/SIZE][SIZE=14.666666666666666px] [/SIZE]​

http://starwarsrp.net/topic/61195-x-kybers-repair-shop-employees-x/#entry912256​

 

[Darth Pyrrhus]

Under review.

 

[Darth Pyrrhus]

Overall this looks good to me. However, there are two things I would like to address before I approve this.

Image source: Instead of a link to the image used, I would like a link to the page where you got it from. Here is an example of an acceptable source link.

Classification: It’s a Medium Sized Warehouse/Mechanic Shop. It has a small office, one small ship reparation area, and one large ship reparation area, as well as a storage/unloading area in the back.

You mention that it is a medium sized warehouse, with areas for both small and large ships. Could you be more specific? What do you have in mind when you say “large ship”? I get the feeling this is mostly aimed at light freighters and starfighters. Could you include a range of ship types this location can work with? For the sake of easy reference, http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Anaxes_War_College_Systemhere is a link to an overview over starship classifications.

Thanks.

 

[Kyber Salurra]

// [member="Darth Pyrrhus"] //

Everything fixed to your specifications!

and thank you for taking the time to review this.

 

[Darth Pyrrhus]

[member="Kyber Salurra"]

My pleasure! Have fun with your repair shop.

Approved, pending secondary.

[member="Valiens Nantaris"]

 

[Valiens Nantaris]

Approved.