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Fire with Fire, Bolt for Bolt


“It's just the wind, howling through these rusty bones. Don't let it bother you too much, kid.” — Unknown Ranger​

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| OUT-OF-CHARACTER INFORMATION
| SETTING INFORMATION
  • Spaceport Name: Whistler’s Landing
  • Location: Kirdo III
  • Affiliation:
  • Classification: Limited Services: Due to its low traffic, the Landing has limited accommodations - enough to maintain the local Ranger detachment and see to the supply ships that support it, but little more than that
  • Population: Sparsely Staffed
  • Accessibility: The Landing is a reasonably easy port for travelers and civilians to access alongside the Rimward Rangers, after presenting the proper credentials or undergoing a basic security check upon arrival. The native Kitonak are largely allowed free access
  • Traffic: Low
  • Description: Named for the way Kirdo’s winds whip through its frayed hull, the Whistler is a downed and forgotten freighter located in the heart of a Kirdoan gulch. Before being commandeered by the Rimward Rangers, the ship was host to a cell of slavers known as Eclipse. Since their expulsion, the League’s finest have retrofitted the Whistler to serve as an outpost for their operations on Kirdo III. It features public landing spaces outside, a secured hanger for Ranger vessels, a barracks, and a public trading post for travelers passing through the desert

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| POINTS OF INTEREST
  • The Docks: Ranger vessels, supply ships, and the occasional drifter all make their landing at the docks. This section of the outpost is comprised of the Whistler’s hangar bay, renovated to securely accommodate docking ships, as well as exterior landing pads for larger vessels or those unaffiliated with the Ranger Corps
  • Ranger Quarters: Occupying the freighter’s barracks, mess hall, and armory, the Ranger’s quarters are host to the RTL’s day-to-day operations in the outpost. As the name implies, it is a secured section of the base that serves to house, feed, and arm the Kirdo Ranger detachment
  • Processing and Cargo: This section of the outpost is located in the Whistler’s cargo bulkheads, where both supplies brought in from off-world and those salvaged from the desert are stored and processed
  • The Wet Whistle: Open to the good ole Rangers and civilians alike, the Wet Whistle is a makeshift bar found just outside the outposts main entrance. It serves a small selection of imported and locally brewed drinks, and is likely the first Credit-rearing establishment on Kirdo III
  • Trading Post: Simple and stocked only with the essentials, the Whistler’s trading post is a small lifeline for Rangers looking to pad their rations. Travelers, salvagers, and even the Kitonak stop in to barter or sell their finds

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| SECURITY
| HISTORICAL INFORMATION

With the Sanrafsix Corridor liberated from the threat of Eclipse slavers, the Rimward Trade League seeks to reinforce and protect its newfound allies from future attacks. On Kirdo III, the resourceful Ranger Corps has retrofitted the former Eclipse stronghold, giving it a new purpose and brighter image for the native Kitonak.

Records found aboard the Whistler reveal it to have been an independent freight barge from the Mid Rim, one who’s apparent owner is not only mismatched from the crew manifest, but apparently never existed in the first place. Whether the barge was stolen and falsely registered or was a pirate vessel from the get-go isn’t clear, but regardless of, it has been given a noble purpose as Whistler’s Landing - the Kirdo Rangers outpost.


 
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Breaker of Chains
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Arcadian Arcadian

First of all, I'd just like to say that I love this submission! It's exactly the sort of thing I hope to see when I peruse locations and it's got a very nice aesthetic to boot! However there are two very minor things that I need you to address before I can approve this for you.

This one is very minor but under Setting Information, Travel is supposed to be Traffic. Admittedly I am willing to let this go but that's how the template is so I must abide by it. The more pressing issue however is a complete lack of the Security portion of the submission. This is necessary for the sub to be approved and as such I require it to be added, at the very least a rating is needed.

Tag me when the relevant edits are made and I'll be more than happy to stamp approval on this!
 
Fire with Fire, Bolt for Bolt
How absolutely silly of me! I've no idea how they were omitted/altered. Edits have been made, as well as a few minor additions, which are detailed below. Thank you for your patience!
  • Specified 'Rimward Rangers,' 'RTL Servicemen,' and 'V-4 Series Utility Droids' in the Population field
  • Corrected 'Travel' to 'Traffic'
  • Added Security field and flavorful assets
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