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Watto's Podracer

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OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION
PRODUCTION INFORMATION
  • Manufacturer: Watto
  • Affiliation: Trilla Kestis
  • Market Status: Open-Market
  • Model: N/A
  • Modularity: No
  • Production: Unique
  • Material: (What is it made out of? Certain materials are more resistant, or vulnerable to certain weapons. Example: 'Durasteel, blaster components.' If this submission uses materials not found on wookieepedia, please link. You may also be asked to link materials that are obscure or difficult to find, e.g. exist as a byline in wikia entry)
TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS
  • Classification: Landspeeder
  • Role: Personal Transport
  • Size: Average
  • Weight: Very Light
  • Armaments: None
  • Defenses: Low
  • Maneuverability Rating: Average
  • Speed Rating: Low
  • Propulsion: (Repulsorlift)
  • Minimum Crew: 1 pilot
  • Optimal Crew: 1 pilot
  • Passenger Capacity: None
  • Cargo Capacity: None
STRENGTHS
  • Good cooling
  • Good repairing
  • Accelerates quickly
WEAKNESSES
  • Low top speed
DESCRIPTION
Built by a certain Toydarian, this podracer, while structurally sound, is not the best in the galaxy, though Watto claims otherwise.
 
Several issues to address.

First off, you do know this is 865 ABY right? Just making sure on the description.

Second, description needs to be a lot longer. Describe it and so forth, flesh it out!

Third, your image source goes to a blank page. Just like the wikipedia page instead and it be fine, you source always to the page that the image came from, not the image itself.

  • Affiliation: Trilla Kestis
Fourth, link your bio to your name.

  • Material: (What is it made out of? Certain materials are more resistant, or vulnerable to certain weapons. Example: 'Durasteel, blaster components.' If this submission uses materials not found on wookieepedia, please link. You may also be asked to link materials that are obscure or difficult to find, e.g. exist as a byline in wikia entry)
Fifth and final, you need to list the materials, this is not accepted. Link them also if appliable.

Let me know when you do all of this.
Trilla Kestis Trilla Kestis
 
Trilla Kestis Trilla Kestis

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