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Approved Tech Vaela Layne's Lightsaber

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OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION
  • Intent: To create a weapon for future roleplay.
  • Image Source: Self-made
  • Canon Link: N/A
  • Permissions: N/A
  • Primary Source: N/A
PRODUCTION INFORMATION
TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS
  • Classification: Lightsaber
  • Size: Average
  • Weight: Light
SPECIAL FEATURES
  • Cerakote shroud.
  • Beryllius plating.
  • Arctic-blue Kyber Crystal.
STRENGTHS
  • Slice and Dice: Vaela Layne's lightsaber, like most standard lightsabers, is able to cut through a wide variety of materials and objects. In addition to that, Vaela's lightsaber can deflect projectiles such as blaster bolts and work underwater.
WEAKNESSES
  • The Good Stuff: Vaela's lightsaber will be shorted out for a short period of time after coming into contact with materials that have certain properties, like Cortosis. In addition to that, Vaela's blade is not able to cut through lightsaber-resistant materials.
DESCRIPTION
Vaela Layne's lightsaber was constructed nearly an entire century ago, made by herself when she was but fourteen years of age. Collecting a Kyber Crystal from the family crop in the ice caves underneath Frosthall, Vaela created her lightsaber with the guidance of the force, using beryillius plating and a cerakote shroud -- common elements used by members of House Layne in the construction of their lightsabers. Vaela was sister to the Lord of Frosthall at the time, Karrin Layne, who himself was not sensitive with the force. As such, Vaela served as House Layne's champion and protector, fighting against opponents and the elements with her lightsaber. Upon her death, Vaela's lightsaber was not buried with her but instead entombed in the family mausoleum among the blades of her ancestors, a tradition of House Layne. For now, Vaela's lightsaber still resides in the mausoleum, but as with any blade of House Layne, that does not mean its future is over quite yet.
 
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Got just a few problems. Just linking issues.

  • Manufacturer: Vaela Layne
  • Affiliation: House Layne
For your Manufacturer, just link your bio onto your name. Affiliation wise, this is made for one person only which be Vaela Layne. I know you want it passed down but at that point, just go to pre-factory to edit it when it must be done to pass it down. So change your affiliation to Vaela Layne and link your bio to that to.


  • Cerakote shroud.
  • Beryllius plating.
  • Arctic-blue Kyber Crystal.
I know it is repetitive but link all three of those. I know they are in materials but it is required.


Do this and we will pass then on into approval land!
Beric Layne Beric Layne
 
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The affiliation has been changed to the person who the lightsaber has been intended to pass down. As for the special features, I am pretty sure that it is not required to link a material again if it has already been linked in materials. Does that look good?
 
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