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Uanerth

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Tarishee

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OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION
  • Intent: [For business reasons, expanding forth an empire.]
  • ​Image Credit: [ Uanerth ]
  • Canon: [N/A.]
  • Links: [Paramount Syndicate]
GENERAL INFORMATION
  • Planet Name: [Uanerth]
  • Demonym: [Residents of Uanerthians]
  • Region: [Unknown Region]
  • System Name: [Aristaeus]
  • System Features: [Kais- 100,000 kilometers and 200,000,000 km away known as the "son sun" in the Aristaeus system. Arkail, the 1st moon being 250 KM, Laxtion the 2nd moon being a hybrid somewhat moon and includes life form, Oxero the 3rd moon with life, Xanic the smallest yet 4th moon with life form in the aristaeus system. There is a giant asteroid belt that covers the planet as if it were choking it, however the asteroid belt has never broken loose and never will, a perfect gravity as it's name is "Yang". The angle of the planet being 75 and the suns distance remaining 200M km away, and the size of the planet being about 3M km (Day length is about 25 hours, mars time), and orbital period. 480 days long for a year]
  • Coordinates: [(Y, 59)]
  • Major Imports: [Factories, blueprints, artifacts, metal, hardware and software, data, samples, building materials and war equipment.]
  • Major Exports: [Huge crystals and diamonds, statues made out of fine expensive material, spices and delicious wine, pets and illegal supply such as death sticks and dancers]
GEOGRAPHIC INFORMATION
  • Gravity: [Standard gravity]
  • Climate: [Temperate]
  • Primary Terrain:
  • 40% Water and wetland, 30%Grassland, 10%Desert, 5% Tropical, 10%Snowy
  • Major Locations:



Ceigh: The city of artifacts, built and designed long ago in the exact same spot. Being one of the bigger ruins, the growth on Ceigh had stopped when the Empire arrived, it was so prosper and the population there was controllable yet kind and caring. Around and outside the city revealed beautiful sunsets and city views, there weren't any factories around at that time, as the years move along it'd get older and older becoming broken down ruins. There wasn't much history and exciting news to be discovered however the simple fact that it was a peaceful area.


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Iche: The official desert city of Uanerth, beholding great fortresses and few stores including small towns and villages. In realization it is the 2nd smallest city on the planet, however amazing and shocking history was forged there and never forgotten. Having fought off the empire and pirate attacks commonly on the city, defending what is right and what is there's they've managed to deal with quite a bit of damage. Life there isn't so simple, it's small and to enemy eyes it is a vulnerable and easy target.







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Futh: Main base, it's nickname "BOSS BASE" for being incredibly hard to raid and destroy. It's structural design can withstand water overflow, extreme heat and incredibly low temperatures, also great for healing and physiological problems. Having a few factories and airbases inside as this base is also Hybrid. Futh is merely a Hybrid, it comes with a factory, garrison/barracks, Airbase, Hideout shelter, Labs and Research stations, and a missile silo that is seen a bit further away from the base, and last but not least the HQ main quarters and mess hall.




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Having 4 huge sides and areas all in one adds up for the biggest top number 1 foundation and base on the planet, a planetary base.(Wont get into detail about all 4)





Ivreim: The newly built city of Uanerth, being able to withstand blows from huge ships and orbital bombardments through it's shield surrounding the city. The capital of all cities, known as the 2nd Largest city on Uanerth, having many shops and villages outside and with in. Business is a huge thing there and the population size is over 2M civilians and other, accepting droids and all species into their bars however having lots of security.




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Force Nexus


Size: [3M km, being bigger than earth]
  • Area -

An old city "Just needs a touchup"(Not much information)



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  • Planet - [There's a force nexus located in Ceigh, not everyone that came to Ceigh felt the flow or sensed it but there were many that did.]
Intent: Having the nexus there meant stability and great health, if it were to weaken then there was trouble nearby and or negativity. They simply used this force nexus to carry on great and positive behavior, most imperials that invaded the town woke up to realization and a few would turn against the empire also handing over a blueprint of the Tie fighter. The Force Nexus there was meant to protect and aid those in need, giving knowledge to those who deserve it.




POPULATION
  • Native Species: [Breln, Uanerthians, Alsco, and Fleth]
  • Immigrated Species: [Humans, Inhumans, and Aliens, are all born and native Species as well]
  • Population: [Heavily populated]
  • Demographics: [The population being stable, healthy and wealthy. Being able to be so wealthy the Uanerthians find small minerals on top of the ground, instead of digging for them. All sharing different features and special abilities, athletics, strength, and smartness. . Having many and more than just humans, holding in aliens and borg like humans and droids. The city's being very welcoming and including all races and alien species, allowing robots and pets.]
  • Primary Languages: [English]
  • Culture: [
  • One strong: One strong signifying family and friends, the behavior of cruelty is not accepted and comes with a fine punishment and consequences. All understand the teachings of their parents and their elders, all stand strong as they don't separate people in race nor species, but by name and the name and to judge the inside of them and the actions they commit to.
  • Sports: The sports there are not big nor money making, it is a sport usually made for fun and experience. There are shows that go very wild, getting more and more people active to the daily sports.
  • Entertainment: Dancers, and lastly (Rarely)Sport entertainment



GOVERNMENT & ECONOMY
  • Government: [All having the same following under the same rules of the Syndicate]
  • Affiliation: [Following the rules by the Paramount Syndicate]
  • Wealth: [Sharing a high wealth system, buying and selling many things. Having an amazing amount of crystals and Artifacts, rich minerals and resources being sold and brought and modified material]
  • Stability: [The planet holds high stability. The planet is welcoming and beholds a great comfort, besides the military power though even the military is kind and helping. A peaceful planet, however having military powers may make you say otherwise. Having citizens take care of themselves, there are few votes and all are treated as one family.]
  • Freedom & Oppression: [There are multiple leaders, all being every citizen within and outside. Votes are made and constructed.]

MILITARY & TECHNOLOGY

  • Military: [Space faring, holding many fortresses, space docks, bars, medical facilities for troopers and more. Having military systems and barracks being built into cities and villages, assisting the cities security as well]
  • Technology: [ High tech, having good resource, buying and selling. Making their own blueprints and forging new material.]



HISTORICAL INFORMATION



Taking form very long ago, having ancient species and beings to have lived on the planet. All very smart and adapting rapidly, separate in the beginning, as years go by they'd find new places and new ways of life and coming as one together in peace. The Uanerthians and it's outsiders were very smart and curious, some a few too curious which often caused trouble. Most of the population lived on top of ground, while a few lived in mountains and underneath. The citizenship began to grow their technology, plant more life and start new ones. Peacefully living their purpose of life, and having few flaws on the planet. There were sink holes commonly, though as the planet got older sinkholes stopped and there was silence. Long after sinkholes would fill up with water, and life. Trees, gardens, wildlife, and sanctuaries were made. Huts were now houses, as houses were residents. It's first discovery was by the empire and their officers, having such minerals and material to choose from the Empire needed it but the planet stand strong and fought back. Their breaking year which was around the time of the Galactic Empire invasion brought many to sadness, as some left and explored other places. Being an already discovered planet lead to, bringing back aliens and people from different planets, assisting those who need help and caring for those that have already given up. New families were glued together as one, a huge family. Later on taking in birth of a chosen one of their planet. Dalek Fanishia, a soon to become leader of the planet itself, 10ABY growing as he did so and bringing peace, making an Empire of families.
The planet would then soon be settled by more and more people, Uanerthians would rapidly grow and grow as their Empire did too.












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[member="Tarishee"]

On a first glance, I need first and foremost a restricted mission thread if you want to keep the Force nexus on your planet. The below is the challenge that has to be completed:

Force Nexus [Locations, Planets, Items] (( Embark on a quest to locate / create and research the Nexus in question. The larger and more powerful the Nexus, the more unique writers should be involved in the process. There is no set post limit, though you should tell a complete story. ))
 

Tarishee

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Taeli Raaf said:
[member="Tarishee"]

On a first glance, I need first and foremost a restricted mission thread if you want to keep the Force nexus on your planet. The below is the challenge that has to be completed:

Force Nexus [Locations, Planets, Items] (( Embark on a quest to locate / create and research the Nexus in question. The larger and more powerful the Nexus, the more unique writers should be involved in the process. There is no set post limit, though you should tell a complete story. ))

Basically include it in the history? :D
 

Tarishee

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Taeli Raaf said:
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No, if you want a Force Nexus anywhere in the submission, you need to complete a story in a thread.

So, basically make up a story..in thread? Show me where please.
 
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On the main page there is the Roleplay section where you can post up both Open Threads that anyone can join and Private Threads that are only you and whoever you invite to post to it
 

Netherworld

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Please @mention me next time, as I otherwise have no way of knowing you've responded to me. :)



Tarishee said:
​Image Credit: [ Uanerth ]
  • You should credit the authors of all the images you're using in your submission, of which there are quite a few. If you cannot find the original artist, you should at least link the webpage where you found the image (but not the image itself)


Tarishee said:
also great for healing and physiological problems.
  • How exactly is a military outpost / fortress 'great for healing and physiological problems'? Please explain this, as it currently doesn't make much sense.


Tarishee said:
being able to withstand blows from huge ships and orbital bombardments.
  • If it has such extensive defenses, please elaborate and expand on them; what gives it such level of protection?


Tarishee said:
Force Nexus Size: [3M km, being bigger than earth] Area -
  • Force Nexus are a Restricted material – please consult their entry on the list and either:
    Complete the required mission
    OR
    Remove the Nexus and all its mentions from the submission


Tarishee said:
[The population being stable, healthy, and wealthy. All sharing different features and special abilities, athletics, strength, and smartness. . Having many and more than just humans, holding in aliens and borg like humans and droids. The city's being very welcoming and including all races and alien species, allowing robots and pets.]
  • If the planet is heavily populated, it's highly unlikely that they would all be healthy and wealthy – this is not impossible, but I'd like to see some reasoning as to how it's achieved.
  • All sharing different features and special abilities, athletics, strength, and smartness. Please clarify what you mean by this.


Tarishee said:
Primary Languages: [English]
  • English doesn't exist in the SW universe. The 'equivalent' and what we hear mostly used in the movies and games is called Galactic Basic.
The whole GOVERNMENT & ECONOMY section needs some thorough reworking. If the world is so peaceful and rich, why does it maintain such a well-equipped, large, and extensive military? Why aren't the citizens bothered? How does the Syndicate enforce / maintain their rule over the planet? If the voting is rigged like you say, what prevents the people from rising up to combat this?

Furthermore, the HISTORY section likewise needs expansion. How did the Gulag plague and the Netherworld affect its large population and technological advancement? How did the Syndicate come to hold such absolute power over the whole planet?
 

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@Netherworld

Makes, since. A little bit, i don't fully understand but i can change a few things. This is fun btw, thanks! I'll do it tomorrow then, i've got school. If not can you keep this under review so i may change it?
 
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