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Tyrano Masamune, Darth Angelus

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Name: Tyrano Masamune, Darth Angelus
Loyalties: The Sith Empire
Role: A former Sith Lord that exists in a buried unknown temple where he waits as a spirit in the Dark Side. More explained in the Bio.
Development Threads:
If needed
Age: died at 36 years old, born in 4030 BBY died in 3994 BBY
Species: Shaliz'Na
Force-Sensitive: Yes, Sith Lord
Appearance: Has a single black wing and white hair which is opposite of the spices which has two white wings and black hair.
Personality: A quite person who speaks very little unless it is needed. Sees weaker people as inferior and unworthy of his time (Never took on an Acolyte). He is loyal to the Sith Empire, but believes the strong must rule so aims for the Dark Lord of the Sith as his title. He enslaved a sect of the Eldorai through a powerful variation of Force Corruption. He is very ampitous which is what led to his need to build an army completely devoted to him.
Weapon of Choice: The force and his Masamune
Wealth: None
Combat Function:
A master of Juyo and tactics
Skills:
Force Corruption- Legendary
Force Speed- Legendary
Force Storm- Master
Force Lightning- Master
Force Destruction- Master
Force Rage- Master
Darkshear- Knight
Force Sense- Knight

Notable Possessions: The Masamune
Other Notes:

Bio: Tyrano, born on Shar'Ack to loving parents in 4030 BBY. He was a kind and gentle child with no ounce to suggest his dark future. He was raised to sing for his soothing voice and was one of the more gifted children when it came to singing. In 4024 BBY their planet was attacked by the Sith. The Sith killed Tyrano's parents and took him captive.

Upon capture he was stricken with grief for the loss of his parents. He would not eat, barely slept and was becoming weak and near death. A Sith Knight named Genso was incharge of the child captives. He began to torture Tyrano and break him. He tied Tyrano to a table and hooked him to life support to keep him nerished and alive. This torture continued for near a year where Tyrano's sadness became hatred, an emotion not easily felt by his species. Another Sith Acolyte named Alexna heard about Genso's secret of Tyrano. In the middle of the night she snuck into the torture room and freed Tyrano. She came him a vibroknife and helped him sneak into Genso's room. She said Tyrano could continue to be tortured or kill Genso and become a Sith and gain the power to never experience such pain again. With much inner turmoil, he killed Genso in his sleep.

Alexna was actually only a few years older than Tyrano and helped him to join the Sith where they shared the same Master. While most Acolytes were competitive, Alexna and Tyrano were not. They both became Knights together. She was a Sorcerer type while Tyrano became more of a warrior who specialized in mind manipulation. Now that they were teenagers they began a relationship that would last and become marriage. They were both loyal to the Sith even despite the Sith killing Tyrano's parents. He was almost thankful as he now had power beyond he could imagine. When he was made a Sith Knight his Mark of Darkness was to make his white wings black.

When Alexna became 24 and Tyrano was 21 they became a Sith Lord and Lady. They were sent to invade the Eldorai planet Kaeshana and claim it for the Sith. The Eldorai proved much stronger than they had anticipated and the Sith forces were overan and destroyed. Tyrano and Alexna were surrounded and a cheap move was made resorting in Tyrano's getting one of his wings cut off and knock out. It was during being knocked out that the current Dark Lord of the Sith appeared and revealed this was a trap to make Tyrano a better warrior by getting rid of what was holding him back, Alexna. She was killed and left dead next to Tyrano. When he awakened, he found his wife laying lifeless beside him which led him into a rage where he sought the death of the Eldorais. He got further than expected and cornered a leader who revealed the Dark Lord as the killer.

This sent the newly named One Wing Angel who ironically could still fly due to the Force being what gave him flight more than his wing. He used Force Corruption on the sect of Eldorai who were still alive and continued to torture them with it for years as he built an army of Eldorai. Once his army was complete and ships were ready, Tyrano led his army against the Dark Lord himself. This lasted in a three year war that ended on an unknown planet. This war led to a ridiculous large amount of death transforming the battlefield into a wound in the Force. The war was close, but the Dark Lord prevailed and delivered the vatal blow that killed Tyrano and he was buried in a temple on the battlefield. Tyrano didn't really die, but laid in waiting in the Dark Side wound until a worthy person entered the temple and would provide the Sith Lord with a new body.
 
[member="Taeli Raaf"]

There will be a submission of the sword, ships and dark eldorai army that will also be made so here it is merely a mentioned.

I wasn't sure what kind of Dev thread you'd need, but this character is going to possess Valdra so maybe that can be the Dev since he won't be getting more powerful, just changing.
 
[member="Darth Valdra"]

Okay got several things with the submission that need to be ironed out
  • The NPC's powers and the level of his powers does not sit well with me at all. Several of those are incredibly rare and/or powerful and I need to ask for those to be toned down
  • What exactly will the effects be on Hakora during the possession? Does he gain the powers listed? What role would this serve?
  • This looks very dangerously close to Sephiroth from the Final Fantasy series, even down to the sword being named Masamune and being called the One Wing Angel
 
[member="Taeli Raaf"]

The powers will overlap seeing as they basically have the same powers except Hakora gains the Force Corrupt (this comes into play in ONLY one way as him controlling his NPC at that will be suited. He will use it for nothing else because I see no other way to use that is not God modding.) besides that Hakora already trained for the powers so all he will gain is lightning, force corruption and darkshear(I feel like that ability should be used more on the site by masters, but there is very few if any who can train it. So while it is a master level, Hakora gains very little in this, more so Tyrano gains more from Hakora.

As to what it does it gives Hakora a way to fall to the dark side seeing as how I made him he resists it. It also gives him the one wing which I have always liked that an the long sword Masamune. The role is mainly for story and character developments.

Yes it is a lot like Sephiroth because that was where Hakora has been going all along and I am a high Sephiroth fan. At the same time, besides appearance, the sword and wing, Tyrano is nothing like Sephiroth. These were the three things that remained. I also got influence from Riddick and the Necromancer Army. I know copying is frowned upon, but I can promise that besides these three things it will not be Sephiroth.
 
[member="Taeli Raaf"]

If anything, after the possession, Hakora/Valdra will be quieter and more like a samurai styled villain. Hard to describe what my plans are. I am ironing them out with Venefica, but submitting piece by piece as I develop them.
 
[member="Darth Valdra"]

Okay, I'm still incredibly uneasy about this sub as it currently stands and some things do need addressed
  • From what I looked over with the Eldorai, they didn't have much if anything in the way of space travel during this time frame as they were still isolated until just the last century, so the species for the army will probably need to be changed.
  • What Dark Lord of the Sith are you referring to?
  • Possession from a Sith spirit would not result in Hakora gaining a wing, mutations do not occur from possession
  • A wound in the Force would destroy any spirit trying to live near it, the nature of a wound in the Force is the Force itself doesn't exist and just consumes everything near it and a Force spirit is completely made of the Force.
  • As the powers currently stand, I can't let them go through unless some of those rare powers are dropped or nerfed. Force Storm can tear apart entire fleets for example
  • You need to make it quite clear this is not Star Wars Sephiroth as the current sub reads way too much like him to make me comfortable passing this through
 
[member="Taeli Raaf"]

Ok I will make the changes, but I need to point out Force Storm is not the worm hole one. The force storm there is the one to create a lightning storm in the area made of force lightning.


As for the species and I can expand upon it, Tyrano brought about space travel, not them. The planet is big and so I mentioned he only had a sect, this would still be true for the vast majority, but give him an army. It ether has to be Eldorai or Echani, this is to make a link between Tyrano and Hakora. As for the mutation of the wing, it doesn't say much on the wiki about possessions so I am using creative freedom with that one. I just really like the wing and sword of Sephiroth. Both enhance his villainous appearance. Angel wings are usually a beautiful wing, but how he uses it and the makes crafted it it is almost Ironic. If the wing is a big problem I can just remove that, no big deal, just a cosmetic thing really as flight Valdra sort of already has, but doesn't use as no one else flies so it is usually pointless. He can hover and fall with style, that is the extent of his flight through wind shaping.
 
[member="Darth Valdra"]

Go with Echani as they did have space travel then and would be more versed on the galaxy as for Force Storm, if it is listed as an individual power most everyone will assume the fleet destroying one, leaving it under Force Lightning is fine for skill sets
 
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