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Factory Tutorial: How To Be The Factory Chad

Grand Shepherd Burtch

Fleet Commander For The Nomadic Peoples Coalition
Grand Shepherd Burtch
Character Bio
I'm kidding, I'm kidding, I'm kidding…

But since I have your attention anyways…

I have a present for you…
​
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[SLIDE_HEADER][B][SIZE=18px][COLOR=rgb(147, 101, 184)]Out of Character Information[/COLOR][/SIZE][/B][/SLIDE_HEADER]
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[*][FONT=Arial][B][FONT=Arial]Intent[/FONT][/B][FONT=Arial]: (Example: 'To create a medical ship to support the growing crisis in the Outer Rim.')[/FONT][/FONT]
[*][FONT=Arial][B]Image Source[/B]: (Please link to where you found the image, or to the original artist if possible. TinEye or Google Image Search can help.)[/FONT]
[*][FONT=Arial][B]Canon Link[/B]: (Please link the canon link if applicable canon item.)[/FONT]
[*][FONT=Arial][B]Permissions[/B]: (Please link any Marketplace purchase approvals or other permissions to use other Writers' submissions as part of the submission)[/FONT]
[*][FONT=Arial][B]Primary Source[/B]: (Please link and cite the sources which you are modifying for your use in your submission.)[/FONT]
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[SLIDE_HEADER][B][SIZE=18px][COLOR=rgb(147, 101, 184)]Production Information[/COLOR][/SIZE][/B][/SLIDE_HEADER]
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[*][FONT=Arial][B]Manufacturer[/B]: (Kuat Drive Yards, BlasTech Industries, [Character Name], etc. Please ensure you link these accordingly. For Manufacturing limitations on who can make what, please see For more details see the Star Ship rules)[/FONT]
[*][FONT=Arial][B]Affiliation[/B]: ([COLOR=rgb(255, 255, 0)]Individual Character Name[/COLOR] (an individual PC/NPC who is permitted to use this item), [COLOR=rgb(255, 165, 0)]Company Name[/COLOR]([COLOR=rgb(255, 165, 0)]s[/COLOR]) (Companies authorised to use this submission), [COLOR=rgb(221, 160, 221)]Faction Name[/COLOR]([COLOR=rgb(221, 160, 221)]s[/COLOR]) (Factions authorised to use this submission), other potential options include a submitted NPC unit, or another general organisation/group. For Affiliation limitations on who can field what, please see For more details see the Star Ship rules.)[/FONT]
[*][FONT=Arial][B]Market Status[/B]: ([COLOR=rgb(255, 0, 0)]Closed-Market [/COLOR](Any character can use this if they have explicit permission through, for example, a marketplace purchase), [COLOR=rgb(0, 255, 153)]Open-Market[/COLOR] (May be used by any character without permission from the Manufacturer))[/FONT]
[*][FONT=Arial][B]Model[/B]: (Example: TIE ([URL='http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Twin_ion_engine'][U]Twin Ion Engine[/U][/URL]). For submissions where a model wouldn't be appropriate, such as a custom walking stick, put 'N/A' for 'Not Applicable'.)[/FONT]
[*][FONT=Arial][B]Production[/B]: The scale is [COLOR=rgb(227, 157, 18)]Unique [/COLOR](Only One Character), [COLOR=rgb(255, 20, 147)]Semi-Unique[/COLOR] (A single small unit, squad, or squadron), [COLOR=rgb(255, 69, 0)]Limited [/COLOR](Only one small group of characters. IE: A Single Minor Faction, Company, or Group within a faction.), [COLOR=rgb(34, 139, 34)]Minor [/COLOR](Large groups of characters. (IE: A Single Major Faction, a few companies, or groups.), [COLOR=rgb(72, 214, 204)]Mass-Produced[/COLOR]. (Anyone.) [I]Characters refer to NPCs & PCs.[/I])[/FONT]
[*][FONT=Arial][B]Material[/B]: (What is it made out of? Certain materials are more resistant, or vulnerable to certain weapons. Example: 'Durasteel, blaster components.' If this submission uses materials not found on wookieepedia, please link. You may also be asked to link materials that are obscure or difficult to find, e.g. exist as a byline in wikia entry)[/FONT]
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[SLIDE_HEADER][SIZE=18px][B][COLOR=rgb(147, 101, 184)]Technical Specifications[/COLOR][/B][/SIZE][/SLIDE_HEADER]
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[SLIDE_HEADER][SIZE=18px][B]Size Information[/B][/SIZE][/SLIDE_HEADER]
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[TH][CENTER][B][SIZE=18px]Size:[/SIZE][/B][/CENTER][/TH]
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[TH][CENTER]Classification[/CENTER][/TH]
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[TD][CENTER](Cruiser, Assault, Anti-Starfighter, Escort, Exploration, Heavy Cruiser, Medical, Patrol, Transport)[/CENTER][/TD]
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[TH][CENTER]Length[/CENTER][/TH]
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[TD][CENTER](Via Metric System. [B]Max[/B]: 2,000 meters. Examples: [URL='http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Venator-class_Star_Destroyer'][U]Venator-class Star Destroyer[/U][/URL]: 1,137 meters, [URL='http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Imperial_II-class_Star_Destroyer'][U]Imperial-class Star Destroyer[/U][/URL]: 1,600 meters)[/CENTER][/TD]
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[TH][CENTER]Width[/CENTER][/TH]
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[TD][CENTER](Via Metric System. [B]Max[/B]: 2,000 meters. Examples: [URL='http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Venator-class_Star_Destroyer'][U]Venator-class Star Destroyer[/U][/URL]: 548 meters meters, [URL='http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Imperial_II-class_Star_Destroyer'][U]Imperial-class Star Destroyer[/U][/URL]: 900 meters)[/CENTER][/TD]
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[TH][CENTER]Height[/CENTER][/TH]
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[TD][CENTER](Via Metric System. [B]Max[/B]: 2,000 meters. Examples: [URL='http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Venator-class_Star_Destroyer'][U]Venator-class Star Destroyer[/U][/URL]: 268 meters, [URL='http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Imperial_II-class_Star_Destroyer'][U]Imperial-class Star Destroyer[/U][/URL]: 400 meters)[/CENTER][/TD]
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[SLIDE_HEADER][SIZE=18px] [B]Armament[/B][/SIZE][/SLIDE_HEADER]
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[TH][CENTER][SIZE=18px]Armament:[/SIZE][/CENTER][/TH]
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[TD][CENTER][FONT=Arial](In this format, you [I]should[/I] provide your armament in list format in the tables below[B] and you must [/B]provide your vessel an Armament Rating. (Choose from: [COLOR=rgb(54, 245, 40)]None[/COLOR], [COLOR=rgb(111, 245, 101)]Very Low[/COLOR], [COLOR=rgb(204, 255, 153)]Low[/COLOR], [COLOR=rgb(255, 255, 0)]Average[/COLOR], [COLOR=rgb(255, 140, 0)]High[/COLOR], [COLOR=rgb(255, 0, 0)]Very High[/COLOR], [COLOR=rgb(255, 0, 255)]Extreme[/COLOR]. Armament Ratings are scaled in relation to the [URL='http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Anaxes_War_College_System'][U]class[/U][/URL] of ship, meaning a Starfighter will not equate to a Destroyer. Armament Ratings provide only basic weaponry (ex. turbolasers, ion cannons, concussion missiles. laser cannons, etc) unless the ship also has a description of weapons. Please link to all Factory subs used. Links: [URL='http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Category:Starship_weaponry'][U]Starship Weapons[/U][/URL], [URL='https://www.starwarsrp.net/forums/approved-technology.30/'][U]Approved Technology[/U][/URL])[/FONT][/CENTER][/TD]
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[TD][U]Gunnery weapons[/U][/TD]
[TD][U]Guided Weapons[/U][/TD]
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[*]list unguided weapon types such as turbolasers, lasers, ION canons, rails guns, etc. If none, then put N/A
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[*]List guided weapons such as missiles, torpedoes, suicide drones, etc. If none, then put N/A
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[TD][U]Immobilizing Weapons [/U][/TD]
[TD][U]Exotic Armaments[/U][/TD]
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[*]list restricting-type weapons such as tractor beams, harpoon & towcables, gravity well generators, predator interdiction drives, etc. If none, then put N/A
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[*]List unusual weapons such as ramming heads, cyber warfare suites, cutting lasers, etc. If none, then put N/A
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[SLIDE_HEADER][SIZE=18px][B]Defenses[/B][/SIZE][/SLIDE_HEADER]
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[TH][CENTER][SIZE=18px]Defenses:[/SIZE][/CENTER][/TH]
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[TD][CENTER](In this format, you[FONT=Arial] [I]should [/I]provide your shield and armor systems in list format in the tables below and must provide your vessel a Defense Rating. (Choose from: [COLOR=rgb(54, 245, 40)]None[/COLOR], [COLOR=rgb(111, 245, 101)]Very Low[/COLOR], [COLOR=rgb(204, 255, 153)]Low[/COLOR], [COLOR=rgb(255, 255, 0)]Average[/COLOR], [COLOR=rgb(255, 140, 0)]High[/COLOR],[COLOR=rgb(255, 0, 0)] Very High[/COLOR], [COLOR=rgb(255, 0, 255)]Extreme[/COLOR]. Where None is a man in a space suit hanging on to an engine, Average is typical defense, and Extreme is heaviest defense with heavy armor plating and multiple layers of powerful shields. Defensive Ratings are scaled in relation to the type of ship, meaning a Starfighter will not equate to a Destroyer. You should list particular systems under advanced systems. Please link to all Factory Submissions used. Links: [U][URL='https://www.starwarsrp.net/forums/approved-technology.30/']Approved Technology[/URL][/U])[/FONT][/CENTER][/TD]
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[TD][U]Barrier Defenses[/U][/TD]
[TD][U]Countermeasure Defenses[/U][/TD]
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[*]List barrier-type defenses such as shields and armor here. If none, then put N/A
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[*]List countermeasure defenses such as point defense turrets and chaff here. If none, then put N/A
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[TD][U]Electronic Defenses[/U][/TD]
[TD][U]Anti-Boarding Defenses[/U][/TD]
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[*]List electronic defenses such as ECM, de-ionizers, Missile deactivation transmitters and anti-malware defenses here. If none, then put N/A
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[TD][LIST]
[*]List anti-boarding systems here such as troops and security measures. If none, then put N/A. [I](note: many PvP fleeting threads end up in boarding actions so this section can be particularly helpful.)[/I]
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[SLIDE_HEADER][SIZE=18px][B]Hangar Compliment[/B][/SIZE][/SLIDE_HEADER]
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[TH][CENTER][SIZE=18px]Hangar Space:[/SIZE][/CENTER][/TH]
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[TD]([FONT=Arial]Please provide the amount of fighters/support craft that this submission can hold in its hangar by count of Squadrons, which hold 12 average Starfighters. The higher your squadron count, the lower your Armament and number of advanced systems should be. )[/FONT]
[CENTER][FONT=Arial] 50m
[[COLOR=rgb(54, 245, 40)]Base[/COLOR]: 0 | [COLOR=rgb(111, 245, 101)]Very Low[/COLOR]: 0 | [COLOR=rgb(204, 255, 153)]Low[/COLOR]: 0 | [COLOR=rgb(255, 255, 0)]Average[/COLOR]: 0 | [COLOR=rgb(255, 140, 0)]High[/COLOR]: 0 | [COLOR=rgb(255, 0, 0)]Very High[/COLOR]: 0 | [COLOR=rgb(255, 0, 255)]Extreme[/COLOR]: 0 ]
 
 100m
[[COLOR=rgb(54, 245, 40)]Base[/COLOR]: 0 | [COLOR=rgb(111, 245, 101)]Very Low[/COLOR]: 0 | [COLOR=rgb(204, 255, 153)]Low[/COLOR]: 0 | [COLOR=rgb(255, 255, 0)]Average[/COLOR]: 0 | [COLOR=rgb(255, 140, 0)]High[/COLOR]: 0 | [COLOR=rgb(255, 0, 0)]Very High[/COLOR]: 1 | [COLOR=rgb(255, 0, 255)]Extreme[/COLOR]: 2 ]
 
 200m
[[COLOR=rgb(54, 245, 40)]Base[/COLOR]: 0 | [COLOR=rgb(111, 245, 101)]Very Low[/COLOR]: 0 | [COLOR=rgb(204, 255, 153)]Low[/COLOR]: 0 | [COLOR=rgb(255, 255, 0)]Average[/COLOR]: 1 | [COLOR=rgb(255, 140, 0)]High[/COLOR]: 2 | [COLOR=rgb(255, 0, 0)]Very High[/COLOR]: 3 | [COLOR=rgb(255, 0, 255)]Extreme[/COLOR]: 4 ]
 
 350m
[[COLOR=rgb(54, 245, 40)]Base[/COLOR]: 0 | [COLOR=rgb(111, 245, 101)]Very Low[/COLOR]: 0 | [COLOR=rgb(204, 255, 153)]Low[/COLOR]: 1 | [COLOR=rgb(255, 255, 0)]Average[/COLOR]: 2 | [COLOR=rgb(255, 140, 0)]High[/COLOR]: 3 | [COLOR=rgb(255, 0, 0)]Very High[/COLOR]: 4 | [COLOR=rgb(255, 0, 255)]Extreme[/COLOR]: 5 ]
 
 500m
[[COLOR=rgb(54, 245, 40)]Base[/COLOR]: 0 | [COLOR=rgb(111, 245, 101)]Very Low[/COLOR]: 1 | [COLOR=rgb(204, 255, 153)]Low[/COLOR]: 2 | [COLOR=rgb(255, 255, 0)]Average[/COLOR]: 3 | [COLOR=rgb(255, 140, 0)]High[/COLOR]: 4 | [COLOR=rgb(255, 0, 0)]Very High[/COLOR]: 1 | [COLOR=rgb(255, 0, 255)]Extreme[/COLOR]: 2 ]
 
 750m
[[COLOR=rgb(54, 245, 40)]Base[/COLOR]: 2 | [COLOR=rgb(111, 245, 101)]Very Low[/COLOR]: 4 | [COLOR=rgb(204, 255, 153)]Low[/COLOR]: 3 | [COLOR=rgb(255, 255, 0)]Average[/COLOR]: 4 | [COLOR=rgb(255, 140, 0)]High[/COLOR]: 5 | [COLOR=rgb(255, 0, 0)]Very High[/COLOR]: 7 | [COLOR=rgb(255, 0, 255)]Extreme[/COLOR]: 9]
 
 1000m
[[COLOR=rgb(54, 245, 40)]Base[/COLOR]: 1 | [COLOR=rgb(111, 245, 101)]Very Low[/COLOR]: 3 | [COLOR=rgb(204, 255, 153)]Low[/COLOR]: 4 | [COLOR=rgb(255, 255, 0)]Average[/COLOR]: 5 | [COLOR=rgb(255, 140, 0)]High[/COLOR]: 7 | [COLOR=rgb(255, 0, 0)]Very High[/COLOR]: 9 | [COLOR=rgb(255, 0, 255)]Extreme[/COLOR]: 11]
 
 1500m
[[COLOR=rgb(54, 245, 40)]Base[/COLOR]: 2 | [COLOR=rgb(111, 245, 101)]Very Low[/COLOR]: 4 | [COLOR=rgb(204, 255, 153)]Low[/COLOR]: 6 | [COLOR=rgb(255, 255, 0)]Average[/COLOR]: 8 | [COLOR=rgb(255, 140, 0)]High[/COLOR]: 10 | [COLOR=rgb(255, 0, 0)]Very High[/COLOR]: 12 | [COLOR=rgb(255, 0, 255)]Extreme[/COLOR]: 15]
 
 2000m
[[COLOR=rgb(54, 245, 40)]Base[/COLOR]: 2 | [COLOR=rgb(111, 245, 101)]Very Low[/COLOR]: 5 | [COLOR=rgb(204, 255, 153)]Low[/COLOR]: 8 | [COLOR=rgb(255, 255, 0)]Average[/COLOR]: 11 | [COLOR=rgb(255, 140, 0)]High[/COLOR]: 14 | [COLOR=rgb(255, 0, 0)]Very High[/COLOR]: 22 | [COLOR=rgb(255, 0, 255)]Extreme[/COLOR]: 25]
 
 2500m
[[COLOR=rgb(54, 245, 40)]Base[/COLOR]: 3 | [COLOR=rgb(111, 245, 101)]Very Low[/COLOR]: 6 | [COLOR=rgb(204, 255, 153)]Low[/COLOR]: 10 | [COLOR=rgb(255, 255, 0)]Average[/COLOR]: 14 | [COLOR=rgb(255, 140, 0)]High[/COLOR]: 18 | [COLOR=rgb(255, 0, 0)]Very High[/COLOR]: 22 | [COLOR=rgb(255, 0, 255)]Extreme[/COLOR]: 25]
 
 3000m
[[COLOR=rgb(54, 245, 40)]Base[/COLOR]: 3 | [COLOR=rgb(111, 245, 101)]Very Low[/COLOR]: 7 | [COLOR=rgb(204, 255, 153)]Low[/COLOR]: 12 | [COLOR=rgb(255, 255, 0)]Average[/COLOR]: 16 | [COLOR=rgb(255, 140, 0)]High[/COLOR]: 21 | [COLOR=rgb(255, 0, 0)]Very High[/COLOR]: 25 | [COLOR=rgb(255, 0, 255)]Extreme[/COLOR]: 30]
 
 3500m
[[COLOR=rgb(54, 245, 40)]Base[/COLOR]: 4 | [COLOR=rgb(111, 245, 101)]Very Low[/COLOR]: 9 | [COLOR=rgb(204, 255, 153)]Low[/COLOR]: 14 | [COLOR=rgb(255, 255, 0)]Average[/COLOR]: 19 | [COLOR=rgb(255, 140, 0)]High[/COLOR]: 24 | [COLOR=rgb(255, 0, 0)]Very High[/COLOR]: 29 | [COLOR=rgb(255, 0, 255)]Extreme[/COLOR]: 35]
 
 4000m
[[COLOR=rgb(54, 245, 40)]Base[/COLOR]: 4 | [COLOR=rgb(111, 245, 101)]Very Low[/COLOR]: 10 | [COLOR=rgb(204, 255, 153)]Low[/COLOR]: 16 | [COLOR=rgb(255, 255, 0)]Average[/COLOR]: 22 | [COLOR=rgb(255, 140, 0)]High[/COLOR]: 28 | [COLOR=rgb(255, 0, 0)]Very High[/COLOR]: 34 | [COLOR=rgb(255, 0, 255)]Extreme[/COLOR]: 40]
 
 4500m
[[COLOR=rgb(54, 245, 40)]Base[/COLOR]: 5 | [COLOR=rgb(111, 245, 101)]Very Low[/COLOR]: 11 | [COLOR=rgb(204, 255, 153)]Low[/COLOR]: 18 | [COLOR=rgb(255, 255, 0)]Average[/COLOR]: 25 | [COLOR=rgb(255, 140, 0)]High[/COLOR]: 32 | [COLOR=rgb(255, 0, 0)]Very High[/COLOR]: 39 | [COLOR=rgb(255, 0, 255)]Extreme[/COLOR]: 45]
 
 5000m
[[COLOR=rgb(54, 245, 40)]Base[/COLOR]: 5 | [COLOR=rgb(111, 245, 101)]Very Low[/COLOR]: 12 | [COLOR=rgb(204, 255, 153)]Low[/COLOR]: 20 | [COLOR=rgb(255, 255, 0)]Average[/COLOR]: 28 | [COLOR=rgb(255, 140, 0)]High[/COLOR]: 35 | [COLOR=rgb(255, 0, 0)]Very High[/COLOR]: 42 | [COLOR=rgb(255, 0, 255)]Extreme[/COLOR]: 50]
 
 6km
[[COLOR=rgb(54, 245, 40)]Base[/COLOR]: 6 | [COLOR=rgb(111, 245, 101)]Very Low[/COLOR]: 15 | [COLOR=rgb(204, 255, 153)]Low[/COLOR]: 24 | [COLOR=rgb(255, 255, 0)]Average[/COLOR]: 32 | [COLOR=rgb(255, 140, 0)]High[/COLOR]: 40 | [COLOR=rgb(255, 0, 0)]Very High[/COLOR]: 49 | [COLOR=rgb(255, 0, 255)]Extreme[/COLOR]: 57]
 
 7km
[[COLOR=rgb(54, 245, 40)]Base[/COLOR]: 7 | [COLOR=rgb(111, 245, 101)]Very Low[/COLOR]: 18 | [COLOR=rgb(204, 255, 153)]Low[/COLOR]: 28 | [COLOR=rgb(255, 255, 0)]Average[/COLOR]: 38 | [COLOR=rgb(255, 140, 0)]High[/COLOR]: 48 | [COLOR=rgb(255, 0, 0)]Very High[/COLOR]: 57 | [COLOR=rgb(255, 0, 255)]Extreme[/COLOR]: 66]
 
 8km
[[COLOR=rgb(54, 245, 40)]Base[/COLOR]: 8 | [COLOR=rgb(111, 245, 101)]Very Low[/COLOR]: 20 | [COLOR=rgb(204, 255, 153)]Low[/COLOR]: 32 | [COLOR=rgb(255, 255, 0)]Average[/COLOR]: 44 | [COLOR=rgb(255, 140, 0)]High[/COLOR]: 54 | [COLOR=rgb(255, 0, 0)]Very High[/COLOR]: 66 | [COLOR=rgb(255, 0, 255)]Extreme[/COLOR]: 78]
 
 9km
[[COLOR=rgb(54, 245, 40)]Base[/COLOR]: 9 | [COLOR=rgb(111, 245, 101)]Very Low[/COLOR]: 24 | [COLOR=rgb(204, 255, 153)]Low[/COLOR]: 36 | [COLOR=rgb(255, 255, 0)]Average[/COLOR]: 50 | [COLOR=rgb(255, 140, 0)]High[/COLOR]: 64 | [COLOR=rgb(255, 0, 0)]Very High[/COLOR]: 78 | [COLOR=rgb(255, 0, 255)]Extreme[/COLOR]: 90]
 
 10km
[[COLOR=rgb(54, 245, 40)]Base[/COLOR]: 10 | [COLOR=rgb(111, 245, 101)]Very Low[/COLOR]: 25 | [COLOR=rgb(204, 255, 153)]Low[/COLOR]: 42 | [COLOR=rgb(255, 255, 0)]Average[/COLOR]: 56 | [COLOR=rgb(255, 140, 0)]High[/COLOR]: 72 | [COLOR=rgb(255, 0, 0)]Very High[/COLOR]: 90 | [COLOR=rgb(255, 0, 255)]Extreme[/COLOR]: 104] [/FONT][/CENTER]
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[TH][CENTER][SIZE=18px]Hangar Allocations:[/SIZE][/CENTER][/TH]
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(This is the allocated amounts of starfighters and support craft (dropships, shuttles,gunships,etc) this submission can hold in its hangar based on the maximum hangar space capacity listed above. )
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[TD][U]Starfighters: [/U][I][U](# of squadrons)[/U][/I][/TD]
[TD][U]Support Craft: [/U][I][U](# of squadrons)[/U][/I][/TD]
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[TD][LIST]
[*]List the types of fighters this ship carries, and perhaps describe special details of this part of the hangar if you wish to do so
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[*]List the types of support craft this ship carries, and perhaps describe special details of this part of the hangar if you wish to do so.
[*][I](Note: this is usually where players will first come when visiting this ship in a social thread, so a detailed description of this hangar could be beneficial in future RP.)[/I]
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[TD][U]Capital Ships: [I](Meters worth of capital ships that this ship can hold. If none, put 0)[/I][/U][/TD]
[TD][U]Vehicle garage: [I](Put [/I][/U][COLOR=rgb(214, 48, 49)][I][U]Yes[/U][/I][/COLOR][I][U] or [/U][/I][COLOR=rgb(97, 189, 109)][I][U]No[/U][/I][/COLOR][U][I])[/I][/U][/TD]
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[TD][LIST]
[*]Some capital ships can carry smaller capital ships, much like how the ISD can carry a corellian corvette. According to the rules of chaos, 100 meters worth of capital ship carrying space (always rounding down) can be gained for every 1 squadron's worth of hangar space sacrificed. List the types of capital ships that this ship carries and perhaps describe special details of this part of the hangar if you wish to do so
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[TD][LIST]
[*]List the types of ground vehicles that this ship carries and perhaps describe special details of this part of the hangar if you wish to do so.
[*]Note: this section does [B]not[/B] count towards your hangar space rating, but the judges will ask the writer to make appropriate changes if they feel like this section is being abused.
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[SLIDE_HEADER][SIZE=18px][B]Mobility Information[/B][/SIZE][/SLIDE_HEADER]
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[TH][CENTER][SIZE=18px]Mobility Information[/SIZE][/CENTER][/TH]
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[TH][CENTER][SIZE=18px]Maneuverability Rating:[/SIZE][/CENTER][/TH]
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[TD](Choose from: [COLOR=rgb(54, 245, 40)]None[/COLOR], [COLOR=rgb(111, 245, 101)]Very Low[/COLOR], [COLOR=rgb(204, 255, 153)]Low[/COLOR], [COLOR=rgb(255, 255, 0)]Average[/COLOR], [COLOR=rgb(255, 140, 0)]High[/COLOR], [COLOR=rgb(255, 0, 0)]Very High[/COLOR], [COLOR=rgb(255, 0, 255)]Extreme[/COLOR]. How agile is your ship? Can it take tight turns? This is relative to the size of the vessel (e.g. a Corvette with Low Maneuverability will be more agile than a Star Destroyer with a Low rating.)[/TD]
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[TD][LIST]
[*][SIZE=15px]Here, list maneuverability systems such as maneuvering thrusters, etheric rudders, thrust vectoring engines, etc[/SIZE]
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[TH][CENTER][SIZE=18px]Speed Rating:[/SIZE][/CENTER][/TH]
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[TD](Choose from: [COLOR=rgb(54, 245, 40)]None[/COLOR], [COLOR=rgb(111, 245, 101)]Very Low[/COLOR], [COLOR=rgb(204, 255, 153)]Low[/COLOR], [COLOR=rgb(255, 255, 0)]Average[/COLOR], [COLOR=rgb(255, 140, 0)]High[/COLOR], [COLOR=rgb(255, 0, 0)]Very High[/COLOR], [COLOR=rgb(255, 0, 255)]Extreme[/COLOR]. How fast is your ship in normal space? How fast can it take off, how fast can it speed through a planet's atmosphere? This is relative to the size of the vessel (e.g. a Corvette with Low Speed will be quicker than a Star Destroyer with a Low Speed.)[/TD]
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[TD][LIST]
[*][SIZE=15px]Here, list propulsion systems such as ion engines, repulsors, solar sales, dovin basals, etc.[/SIZE]
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[TH][CENTER][SIZE=18px]Hyperdrive:[/SIZE][/CENTER][/TH]
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[TD](Does this ship have a hyperdrive? If this ship has a hyperdrive how fast is it? The lower the number, the faster the ship is, you may choose decimals. Any speed below 1.0 requires the hyperdrive to be added to the ship's strengths and accordingly balanced with weaknesses. Links: [URL='http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Hyperdrive'][U]Hyperdrive[/U][/URL], [URL='http://img2.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20120526163546/starwars/images/2/21/HDChartPart2-NEGVV.jpg'][U]Hyperdrive Comparisons[/U][/URL])[/TD]
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[TD][LIST]
[*][LEFT]Here, list specific hyperdrive links, indicate hyperdrive class, any applicable hyperdrive related systems, including navigation computer, if you wish.[/LEFT]
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[SLIDE_HEADER][B][SIZE=18px][COLOR=rgb(147, 101, 184)]Standard Features[/COLOR][/SIZE][/B][/SLIDE_HEADER]
[SLIDE]
[CENTER][I][SIZE=12px](Feel free to add-to or remove from these categories as you see fit)[/SIZE][/I]

Communications Systems[/CENTER]
[LIST]
[*][LEFT](List communication systems such as holonet transmitters, hyperwave comms, radios, laser comms, smoke signals, etc. as you see fit. If not applicable, remove this section or put N/A)[/LEFT]
[/LIST]
[CENTER]
Life Support Systems[/CENTER]
[LIST]
[*][LEFT](List life support systems such as algae cylinders, artificial gravity, radiation shields, etc. as you see fit. If not applicable, simply remove this section or put N/A)[/LEFT]
[/LIST]
[CENTER]
Navigational Systems[/CENTER]
[LIST]
[*][LEFT](List navigational systems such as crew divisions, computers, software, maps, droids, etc. as you see fit. If not applicable, sinply remove this section or put N/A)[/LEFT]
[/LIST]
[CENTER]
Sensor Systems[/CENTER]
[LIST]
[*][LEFT](List sensor systems such as radar, LiDAR, sonar, a dude with a telescope, a chamber full of force-sensing slaves, etc. as you see fit If not applicable, simply remove this section or put N/A)[/LEFT]
[/LIST]
[CENTER]
Targeting Systems[/CENTER]
[LIST]
[*][LEFT](List targeting systems such as computers, targeting lasers, specific sensors, software, a set of "iron sights", etc. as you see fit. If not applicable, simply remove this section or put N/A)[/LEFT]
[/LIST]
[CENTER]
Landing Systems[/CENTER]
[LIST]
[*][LEFT](List specific landing systems such as landing gear, special navigation components, emergency snow skids, etc. as you see fit. If not applicable, simply remove this section or put N/A)[/LEFT]
[/LIST]
[CENTER]
Emergency Abort Systems[/CENTER]
[LIST]
[*](List abort systems such as escape pods, ejection seats, emergency airlocks, emergency spacesuit lockers, etc. as you see fit. If not applicable, simply remove this section or put N/A)
[/LIST]

[/SLIDE]
[/ACCORDION][ACCORDION width=2000]
[SLIDE_HEADER][B][COLOR=rgb(147, 101, 184)][SIZE=18px]Advanced Systems[/SIZE][/COLOR][/B][/SLIDE_HEADER]
[SLIDE]
[FONT=Arial](Provide all of your submission's advanced systems, including non-combat items and special weapons, here in a list. Please link to all Factory Submissions used. Stealth technology and other advanced systems may require other weaknesses or reduced ratings for balance. Ensure significant capabilities from systems are included in the [COLOR=rgb(97, 189, 109)]Strengths [/COLOR]and [COLOR=rgb(209, 72, 65)]Weaknesses[/COLOR] lists.[COLOR=rgb(250, 197, 28)] Examples include:[/COLOR] Stealth systems, Advanced ECM systems, Crystal gravfield traps, HIMS, Molecular shields. Links: [URL='http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Category:Starship_weaponry'][U]Starship Weapons[/U][/URL], [U][URL='https://www.starwarsrp.net/forums/approved-technology.30/']Approved Technology[/URL][/U], [URL='http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Category:Shields'][U]Shields[/U][/URL], [URL='http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Category:Engines'][U]Engines[/U][/URL])[/FONT]

[CENTER][I](Additional note: Feel free to add-to or remove-from these categories as you see fit)[/I]


Communications Systems[/CENTER]
[LIST]
[*](List communication systems such as holonet transmitters, hyperwave comms, radios, laser comms, smoke signals, etc. as you see fit. If not applicable, remove this section or put N/A)
[/LIST]
[CENTER]

Life Support Systems[/CENTER]
[LIST]
[*](List life support systems such as algae cylinders, artificial gravity, radiation shields, etc. as you see fit. If not applicable, simply remove this section or put N/A)
[/LIST]
[CENTER]

Navigational Systems[/CENTER]
[LIST]
[*](List navigational systems such as crew divisions, computers, software, maps, droids, etc. as you see fit. If not applicable, simply remove this section or put N/A)
[/LIST]
[CENTER]

Sensor Systems[/CENTER]
[LIST]
[*](List sensor systems such as radar, LiDAR, sonar, a dude with a telescope, a chamber full of force-sensing slaves, etc. as you see fit If not applicable, simply remove this section or put N/A)
[/LIST]
[CENTER]

Targeting Systems[/CENTER]
[LIST]
[*](List targeting systems such as computers, targeting lasers, specific sensors, software, a set of "iron sights", etc. as you see fit. If not applicable, simply remove this section or put N/A)
[/LIST]
[CENTER]

Landing Systems[/CENTER]
[LIST]
[*](List specific landing systems such as landing gear, special navigation components, emergency snow skids, etc. as you see fit. If not applicable, simply remove this section or put N/A)
[/LIST]
[CENTER]

Emergency Abort Systems[/CENTER]
[LIST]
[*](List abort systems such as escape pods, ejection seats, emergency airlocks, emergency spacesuit lockers, etc. as you see fit. If not applicable, simply remove this section or put N/A)
[/LIST]
[/SLIDE]
[/ACCORDION][ACCORDION width=2000]
[SLIDE_HEADER][SIZE=18px][B][COLOR=rgb(97, 189, 109)]Strengths[/COLOR] & [COLOR=rgb(214, 48, 49)]Weaknesses[/COLOR][/B][/SIZE][/SLIDE_HEADER]
[SLIDE]
[TABLE]
[TR]
[TD][LIST]
[*][LEFT][FONT=Arial](Provide, in list format, a minimum of [COLOR=rgb(97, 189, 109)]1 [/COLOR]strength of this submission.)[/FONT][/LEFT]
[/LIST][/TD]

[TD][COLOR=rgb(0, 0, 0)]___[/COLOR][/TD]

[TD][LIST]
[*][LEFT]([FONT=Arial]Provide, in list format, a minimum of [COLOR=rgb(209, 72, 65)]1[/COLOR] weaknesses of this submission.)[/FONT][/LEFT]
[/LIST][/TD]
[/TR]
[TR]
[TD][COLOR=rgb(0, 0, 0)]_____________________________[/COLOR][/TD]
[TD][/TD]

[TD][COLOR=rgb(0, 0, 0)]_____________________________[/COLOR][/TD]
[/TR]
[/TABLE]
[/SLIDE]
[/ACCORDION][ACCORDION width=2000][SLIDE_HEADER][B][COLOR=rgb(147, 101, 184)][SIZE=18px]Description[/SIZE][/COLOR][/B][/SLIDE_HEADER]
[SLIDE]
(Describe some of the history behind the submission. Please provide a detailed account or link of each special feature that is listed in this submission. Give us some idea of how it might perform its function, what it excels against and what some limitations of it are. This is where you talk about your idea, flesh it out over at least a good-sized paragraph, and address some of the ways it might be used or abused. All miscellaneous descriptive elements go here, such as Cargo Capacity, Passengers, Consumables, Crew, etc. For especially powerful or ambitious submissions, a very thorough description is recommended.)
[/SLIDE]
[/ACCORDION]

And this is what it looks like…
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Out of Character Information

  • Intent: (Example: 'To create a medical ship to support the growing crisis in the Outer Rim.')
  • Image Source: (Please link to where you found the image, or to the original artist if possible. TinEye or Google Image Search can help.)
  • Canon Link: (Please link the canon link if applicable canon item.)
  • Permissions: (Please link any Marketplace purchase approvals or other permissions to use other Writers' submissions as part of the submission)
  • Primary Source: (Please link and cite the sources which you are modifying for your use in your submission.)
Production Information

  • Manufacturer: (Kuat Drive Yards, BlasTech Industries, [Character Name], etc. Please ensure you link these accordingly. For Manufacturing limitations on who can make what, please see For more details see the Star Ship rules)
  • Affiliation: (Individual Character Name (an individual PC/NPC who is permitted to use this item), Company Name(s) (Companies authorised to use this submission), Faction Name(s) (Factions authorised to use this submission), other potential options include a submitted NPC unit, or another general organisation/group. For Affiliation limitations on who can field what, please see For more details see the Star Ship rules.)
  • Market Status: (Closed-Market (Any character can use this if they have explicit permission through, for example, a marketplace purchase), Open-Market (May be used by any character without permission from the Manufacturer))
  • Model: (Example: TIE (Twin Ion Engine). For submissions where a model wouldn't be appropriate, such as a custom walking stick, put 'N/A' for 'Not Applicable'.)
  • Production: The scale is Unique (Only One Character), Semi-Unique (A single small unit, squad, or squadron), Limited (Only one small group of characters. IE: A Single Minor Faction, Company, or Group within a faction.), Minor (Large groups of characters. (IE: A Single Major Faction, a few companies, or groups.), Mass-Produced. (Anyone.) Characters refer to NPCs & PCs.)
  • Material: (What is it made out of? Certain materials are more resistant, or vulnerable to certain weapons. Example: 'Durasteel, blaster components.' If this submission uses materials not found on wookieepedia, please link. You may also be asked to link materials that are obscure or difficult to find, e.g. exist as a byline in wikia entry)
Technical Specifications

Size Information Armament Defenses Hangar Compliment Mobility Information

  • Size:​
    Classification​
    (Cruiser, Assault, Anti-Starfighter, Escort, Exploration, Heavy Cruiser, Medical, Patrol, Transport)​
    Length​
    (Via Metric System. Max: 2,000 meters. Examples: Venator-class Star Destroyer: 1,137 meters, Imperial-class Star Destroyer: 1,600 meters)​
    Width​
    (Via Metric System. Max: 2,000 meters. Examples: Venator-class Star Destroyer: 548 meters meters, Imperial-class Star Destroyer: 900 meters)​
    Height​
    (Via Metric System. Max: 2,000 meters. Examples: Venator-class Star Destroyer: 268 meters, Imperial-class Star Destroyer: 400 meters)​


  • Armament:​
    (In this format, you should provide your armament in list format in the tables below and you must provide your vessel an Armament Rating. (Choose from: None, Very Low, Low, Average, High, Very High, Extreme. Armament Ratings are scaled in relation to the class of ship, meaning a Starfighter will not equate to a Destroyer. Armament Ratings provide only basic weaponry (ex. turbolasers, ion cannons, concussion missiles. laser cannons, etc) unless the ship also has a description of weapons. Please link to all Factory subs used. Links: Starship Weapons, Approved Technology)​
    Gunnery weaponsGuided Weapons
    • list unguided weapon types such as turbolasers, lasers, ION canons, rails guns, etc. If none, then put N/A
    • List guided weapons such as missiles, torpedoes, suicide drones, etc. If none, then put N/A
    Immobilizing Weapons Exotic Armaments
    • list restricting-type weapons such as tractor beams, harpoon & towcables, gravity well generators, predator interdiction drives, etc. If none, then put N/A
    • List unusual weapons such as ramming heads, cyber warfare suites, cutting lasers, etc. If none, then put N/A

  • Defenses:​
    (In this format, you should provide your shield and armor systems in list format in the tables below and must provide your vessel a Defense Rating. (Choose from: None, Very Low, Low, Average, High, Very High, Extreme. Where None is a man in a space suit hanging on to an engine, Average is typical defense, and Extreme is heaviest defense with heavy armor plating and multiple layers of powerful shields. Defensive Ratings are scaled in relation to the type of ship, meaning a Starfighter will not equate to a Destroyer. You should list particular systems under advanced systems. Please link to all Factory Submissions used. Links: Approved Technology)​
    Barrier DefensesCountermeasure Defenses
    • List barrier-type defenses such as shields and armor here. If none, then put N/A
    • List countermeasure defenses such as point defense turrets and chaff here. If none, then put N/A
    Electronic DefensesAnti-Boarding Defenses
    • List electronic defenses such as ECM, de-ionizers, Missile deactivation transmitters and anti-malware defenses here. If none, then put N/A
    • List anti-boarding systems here such as troops and security measures. If none, then put N/A. (note: many PvP fleeting threads end up in boarding actions so this section can be particularly helpful.)

  • Hangar Space:​
    (Please provide the amount of fighters/support craft that this submission can hold in its hangar by count of Squadrons, which hold 12 average Starfighters. The higher your squadron count, the lower your Armament and number of advanced systems should be. )
    50m
    [Base: 0 | Very Low: 0 | Low: 0 | Average: 0 | High: 0 | Very High: 0 | Extreme: 0 ]

    100m
    [Base: 0 | Very Low: 0 | Low: 0 | Average: 0 | High: 0 | Very High: 1 | Extreme: 2 ]

    200m
    [Base: 0 | Very Low: 0 | Low: 0 | Average: 1 | High: 2 | Very High: 3 | Extreme: 4 ]

    350m
    [Base: 0 | Very Low: 0 | Low: 1 | Average: 2 | High: 3 | Very High: 4 | Extreme: 5 ]

    500m
    [Base: 0 | Very Low: 1 | Low: 2 | Average: 3 | High: 4 | Very High: 1 | Extreme: 2 ]

    750m
    [Base: 2 | Very Low: 4 | Low: 3 | Average: 4 | High: 5 | Very High: 7 | Extreme: 9]

    1000m
    [Base: 1 | Very Low: 3 | Low: 4 | Average: 5 | High: 7 | Very High: 9 | Extreme: 11]

    1500m
    [Base: 2 | Very Low: 4 | Low: 6 | Average: 8 | High: 10 | Very High: 12 | Extreme: 15]

    2000m
    [Base: 2 | Very Low: 5 | Low: 8 | Average: 11 | High: 14 | Very High: 22 | Extreme: 25]

    2500m
    [Base: 3 | Very Low: 6 | Low: 10 | Average: 14 | High: 18 | Very High: 22 | Extreme: 25]

    3000m
    [Base: 3 | Very Low: 7 | Low: 12 | Average: 16 | High: 21 | Very High: 25 | Extreme: 30]

    3500m
    [Base: 4 | Very Low: 9 | Low: 14 | Average: 19 | High: 24 | Very High: 29 | Extreme: 35]

    4000m
    [Base: 4 | Very Low: 10 | Low: 16 | Average: 22 | High: 28 | Very High: 34 | Extreme: 40]

    4500m
    [Base: 5 | Very Low: 11 | Low: 18 | Average: 25 | High: 32 | Very High: 39 | Extreme: 45]

    5000m
    [Base: 5 | Very Low: 12 | Low: 20 | Average: 28 | High: 35 | Very High: 42 | Extreme: 50]

    6km
    [Base: 6 | Very Low: 15 | Low: 24 | Average: 32 | High: 40 | Very High: 49 | Extreme: 57]

    7km
    [Base: 7 | Very Low: 18 | Low: 28 | Average: 38 | High: 48 | Very High: 57 | Extreme: 66]

    8km
    [Base: 8 | Very Low: 20 | Low: 32 | Average: 44 | High: 54 | Very High: 66 | Extreme: 78]

    9km
    [Base: 9 | Very Low: 24 | Low: 36 | Average: 50 | High: 64 | Very High: 78 | Extreme: 90]

    10km
    [Base: 10 | Very Low: 25 | Low: 42 | Average: 56 | High: 72 | Very High: 90 | Extreme: 104]     ​
    ​
    Hangar Allocations:​
    (This is the allocated amounts of starfighters and support craft (dropships, shuttles,gunships,etc) this submission can hold in its hangar based on the maximum hangar space capacity listed above. )
    Starfighters: (# of squadrons)Support Craft: (# of squadrons)
    • List the types of fighters this ship carries, and perhaps describe special details of this part of the hangar if you wish to do so
    • List the types of support craft this ship carries, and perhaps describe special details of this part of the hangar if you wish to do so.
    • (Note: this is usually where players will first come when visiting this ship in a social thread, so a detailed description of this hangar could be beneficial in future RP.)
    Capital Ships: (Meters worth of capital ships that this ship can hold. If none, put 0)Vehicle garage: (Put Yes or No)
    • Some capital ships can carry smaller capital ships, much like how the ISD can carry a corellian corvette. According to the rules of chaos, 100 meters worth of capital ship carrying space (always rounding down) can be gained for every 1 squadron's worth of hangar space sacrificed. List the types of capital ships that this ship carries and perhaps describe special details of this part of the hangar if you wish to do so
    • List the types of ground vehicles that this ship carries and perhaps describe special details of this part of the hangar if you wish to do so.
    • Note: this section does not count towards your hangar space rating, but the judges will ask the writer to make appropriate changes if they feel like this section is being abused.

  • Mobility Information​
    Maneuverability Rating:​
    (Choose from: None, Very Low, Low, Average, High, Very High, Extreme. How agile is your ship? Can it take tight turns? This is relative to the size of the vessel (e.g. a Corvette with Low Maneuverability will be more agile than a Star Destroyer with a Low rating.)
    • Here, list maneuverability systems such as maneuvering thrusters, etheric rudders, thrust vectoring engines, etc
    Speed Rating:​
    (Choose from: None, Very Low, Low, Average, High, Very High, Extreme. How fast is your ship in normal space? How fast can it take off, how fast can it speed through a planet's atmosphere? This is relative to the size of the vessel (e.g. a Corvette with Low Speed will be quicker than a Star Destroyer with a Low Speed.)
    • Here, list propulsion systems such as ion engines, repulsors, solar sales, dovin basals, etc.
    Hyperdrive:​
    (Does this ship have a hyperdrive? If this ship has a hyperdrive how fast is it? The lower the number, the faster the ship is, you may choose decimals. Any speed below 1.0 requires the hyperdrive to be added to the ship's strengths and accordingly balanced with weaknesses. Links: Hyperdrive, Hyperdrive Comparisons)
    • Here, list specific hyperdrive links, indicate hyperdrive class, any applicable hyperdrive related systems, including navigation computer, if you wish.​

Standard Features

(Feel free to add-to or remove from these categories as you see fit)

Communications Systems​
  • (List communication systems such as holonet transmitters, hyperwave comms, radios, laser comms, smoke signals, etc. as you see fit. If not applicable, remove this section or put N/A)​

Life Support Systems​
  • (List life support systems such as algae cylinders, artificial gravity, radiation shields, etc. as you see fit. If not applicable, simply remove this section or put N/A)​

Navigational Systems​
  • (List navigational systems such as crew divisions, computers, software, maps, droids, etc. as you see fit. If not applicable, sinply remove this section or put N/A)​

Sensor Systems​
  • (List sensor systems such as radar, LiDAR, sonar, a dude with a telescope, a chamber full of force-sensing slaves, etc. as you see fit If not applicable, simply remove this section or put N/A)​

Targeting Systems​
  • (List targeting systems such as computers, targeting lasers, specific sensors, software, a set of "iron sights", etc. as you see fit. If not applicable, simply remove this section or put N/A)​

Landing Systems​
  • (List specific landing systems such as landing gear, special navigation components, emergency snow skids, etc. as you see fit. If not applicable, simply remove this section or put N/A)​

Emergency Abort Systems​
  • (List abort systems such as escape pods, ejection seats, emergency airlocks, emergency spacesuit lockers, etc. as you see fit. If not applicable, simply remove this section or put N/A)

Advanced Systems

(Provide all of your submission's advanced systems, including non-combat items and special weapons, here in a list. Please link to all Factory Submissions used. Stealth technology and other advanced systems may require other weaknesses or reduced ratings for balance. Ensure significant capabilities from systems are included in the Strengths and Weaknesses lists. Examples include: Stealth systems, Advanced ECM systems, Crystal gravfield traps, HIMS, Molecular shields. Links: Starship Weapons, Approved Technology, Shields, Engines)

(Additional note: Feel free to add-to or remove-from these categories as you see fit)


Communications Systems​
  • (List communication systems such as holonet transmitters, hyperwave comms, radios, laser comms, smoke signals, etc. as you see fit. If not applicable, remove this section or put N/A)


Life Support Systems​
  • (List life support systems such as algae cylinders, artificial gravity, radiation shields, etc. as you see fit. If not applicable, simply remove this section or put N/A)


Navigational Systems​
  • (List navigational systems such as crew divisions, computers, software, maps, droids, etc. as you see fit. If not applicable, simply remove this section or put N/A)


Sensor Systems​
  • (List sensor systems such as radar, LiDAR, sonar, a dude with a telescope, a chamber full of force-sensing slaves, etc. as you see fit If not applicable, simply remove this section or put N/A)


Targeting Systems​
  • (List targeting systems such as computers, targeting lasers, specific sensors, software, a set of "iron sights", etc. as you see fit. If not applicable, simply remove this section or put N/A)


Landing Systems​
  • (List specific landing systems such as landing gear, special navigation components, emergency snow skids, etc. as you see fit. If not applicable, simply remove this section or put N/A)


Emergency Abort Systems​
  • (List abort systems such as escape pods, ejection seats, emergency airlocks, emergency spacesuit lockers, etc. as you see fit. If not applicable, simply remove this section or put N/A)
Strengths & Weaknesses

  • (Provide, in list format, a minimum of 1 strength of this submission.)​
___
  • (Provide, in list format, a minimum of 1 weaknesses of this submission.)​
__________________________________________________________
Description

(Describe some of the history behind the submission. Please provide a detailed account or link of each special feature that is listed in this submission. Give us some idea of how it might perform its function, what it excels against and what some limitations of it are. This is where you talk about your idea, flesh it out over at least a good-sized paragraph, and address some of the ways it might be used or abused. All miscellaneous descriptive elements go here, such as Cargo Capacity, Passengers, Consumables, Crew, etc. For especially powerful or ambitious submissions, a very thorough description is recommended.)

So I've been working on this starship submission template passively for about 2 years now. I'm not the best BB coder on the site, but these things take time and effort to refine, so I thought once I finally had something worth sharing that I'd make it available to be shared with the community.

This is just a new template for making starships. Specifically, it's for guys like me who like to build super detailed ships with dozens of hyperlinked tech components, and "long-form paragraph" feature descriptions. This isn't for everyone, I get that, and it is not my intention to disparage the works of other builders in the factory. Everyone has their own style, and I don't condone perceived elitism or gatekeeping in any capacity. This is simply a tool to help people with a detailed vision of their creations sort their work into more digestible segments for ease of reader consumption.

How to use it?​

Simple. It's no different from the original template, in that you copy-paste the BB code into your workspace, and then fill-out the data entry fields. This format is passable in its current state, as I have tested it out to the extreme, and it seems to work.

But there are 3 caveats.

Caveat 1​

This will not make your submissions any stronger or weaker in PVP.

This is a common talking point that is commonly preached by experience players in the community, but I will reiterate this for the sake of redundancy. Your PVP performance is defined by 3 things:
  1. your knowledge of the subject matter that you write,
  2. your level of inspiration, and
  3. your ability conduct yourself as a mature adult in the OOC.
So, your submission strength will be determined by the same criteria. A fancy format is nothing more than aesthetics, and a well-organized format simply makes it easier for readers to consume your content. But the absolute best subs on the board are written by the guys and girls that know their crap, have strong inspiration, and are able to treat the judges with respect. I still learn lots from the guys that use very basic formatting, and this new format does not give me any sort of edge in PVP.

In fact, some of you might have noticed that there are some subs out there that are extremely tech-spammy and use almost no formatting whatsoever. The inspiration and level of homework that is exhibited in these subs is indeed, impressive. It can even be argued that their lack of formatting is perceived as a PVP advantage opposed to a deficit, since sorting out their secrets is harder to do as an opponent. Shrugs. Art comes in many forms.

In short, this template is a gift to make your more... wordy subs look pretty and easy to read. Nothing more.

Caveat 2​

Modify this template at your own peril.

To be clear, if you have the BB coding skills to add to this template, or improve it, please be my guest!!! Selfishly, I'd love to see what other, more talented coders can do with this, and I'd even appreciate it if you sent me a link to your work so I can admire what you have done! I'm a big fan of patient workmanship and attention to detail, so please feel free to take this and build on it.

But please keep 2 things in mind:
  1. This code in it's current state is already approvable, in light of the January 2023 Staff Announcement.
  2. Your intentions are critical in how you approach this!!!
How you approach this is the key. If your intention is to make your submission easier to read, the judges will notice and their critique will be angled towards helping you achieve this.

But...

If your goal is to make your submission harder to read, deceive readers and judges, or blindside opponents with hidden content, the judges will catch you, and ask you to make changes. If you respond with sass, lip, or defensiveness, they will likely deny your submission, and then consider banning this format entirely to avoid future abuse. The rule change mentioned in the January 2023 announcement is experimental at best, and the staff is putting a lot of trust in us. Therefore, I am putting a fair bit of trust in you by giving this to you.

Sidebar; as a very general rule of thumb, it is always best for a player to put their pride aside when they are receiving feedback from the judges. Try not to think of a live review as "passing" or "failing", but more like "peer review". It is not the judges goal to deny your work, but to help you fit your vision into the rules of the board before approval. The better you are at humbling yourself in the presence of constructive feedback, the more the judges will typically let you experiment with things.

Be respectful. Please don't get my template banned.

Caveat 3​

Just stick to original staff-made template if…

Honestly, the original template is still better for most submissions that are out there, particularly with technology subs. I personally still prefer to use it for basic technology subs. For a shorter submission with very straightforward features and a brief description, it's better if the reader doesn't have to click or tap on any tabs to read the contents. This new template is more for ship-builders who have accumulated hoards of tech hyperlinks and who like to write-out paragraph-long feature descriptions, for multiple features. For some, after about two or more years of "factory-ing", the desire to incorporate previous work, or the work of friends tends to stretch starship submissions to longer and longer lengths. Their starship subs can sometimes start to look a little spammy and daunting to the reader.

The idea behind this template is to sort those features and links into categories that are separated into bite-sized chunks. When the reader is looking for specifics on something like strengths/weaknesses, or armaments, the ability to just look at one section at a time in a neatly sorted format is nicer than scrolling and scanning. It's also a nice way to present a project that you put a lot of time and effort into making, like a "fancy picture frame", or a "glass case". If you like to make a good impression on a piece that you're proud of, this template is right for you. But if you are the kind of player that has more inspiration and ideas than time, or if you're just trying to learn how the system works, the original template is honestly probably a better fit for you.

In summary​

This is a gift. It's not the best BB code out there, but it's something that I put a lot of work into and I figure that it is worth sharing with the community. Please use it responsibly, and I look forward to seeing what you all can do with it.

And if you would like to see an example of what this code looks like when used, HERE is an example of my most ambitious project to date for your reference.

And may the force be with you.

TLDR:
  1. This template is not a PVP advantage.
  2. If you try to use this template to trick or fool the judges, you will get it banned and make Burtch a sad panda.
  3. The original template is better for less complicated subs.
  4. This template is ideal for highly detailed starship submissions.
 
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