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Approved Starship Tie Assassin

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High Marshal of the Mara Armada
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OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION

PRODUCTION INFORMATION
  • Manufacturer: The First Order
  • Affiliation: Forces under CT-375
  • Model: TIE Assassin
  • Production: Limited
  • Material: Durasteel hull
TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS
  • Classification: Elite Starfighter
  • Length: 6.5 meters
  • Width: 18.75 meters
  • Height: 3 meters
  • Armament: Moderate
    4 Laser Cannons
  • 2 Laser Cannons
  • 2 Concussion Missile Launchers (4 missiles each)

[*]Defenses: Average
[*]Squadron Count: Low: 8
[*]Maneuverability Rating: Moderate
[*]Speed Rating: Moderate
[*]Hyperdrive Class: Average: 2
STANDARD FEATURES
  • Standard Communications Array
  • Standard Deflector Shield Generator
  • Standard Hyperdrive
  • Standard Ion Engines
  • Standard Life Support Systems
  • Standard Navigational Systems
  • Standard Repulsorlift Engines
  • Standard Sensor Array
  • Standard Starfighter Weapons: Laser Cannons, Ion Cannons, Concussion Missile Launchers
  • Standard Targeting Systems
  • Can Enter Atmosphere and Land

ADVANCED SYSTEMS
  • Wing-mounted maneuvering jets (Allow Tie Assassin to execute complex maneuvers)
Strengths:​


Highly maneuverable in combat situations​


Weaknesses:​
  • Has a tendency to get overheated in a battle if engaged for too long
Description: ​Following its arrival at the First Order, CT realized that if he was to be effective in his role of hunting Jedi and suspected force adepts, it would require a ship to get around. CT's first few requests for a ship were initially denied. When asked who CT expected to design its ship, the droid took it upon itself to design a ship that was lightweight, fast, well armed as well as capable of taking a considerable amount of damage. Impressed by the initiative, the First Order granted the droid's request for a ship following the provided specifications.
 
[member="CT-375"], this solid conceptually and looks nicely thought out. Two minor things:



CT-375 said:
Manufacturer: Kuat Drive Factories
If you'll link to the approved company submission for this please. As I understand it, the in-universe KDY is NOT currently working with the First Order right now. As an alternative, you may want to consider just using the "First Order" as the manufacturer for this.

The other thing is that this appears to be missing the description field. From the template:
Description: (Describing your submission's history is optional. Please provide a detailed account or link of each special feature that is listed in this submission. All miscellaneous descriptive elements go here, such as Cargo Capacity, Passengers, Consumables, Crew, etc.. There is no requirement for amount of words here so long as you meet the minimum requirements for your advanced systems.)
This doesn't have to be anything crazy. A few sentences here about its capabilities and/or role, and you should be good to go.
 
CT-375 said:
Affiliation: First Order Model: TIE Assassin Production: Limited
"Limited" is limited to a small group within a major faction (like a specific fleet, task force, fighter group, etc). I would mention a specific unit within the First Order that your character plans to work in. If you don't have a solid idea of what's that going to be yet, As a suggestion, you could something like "forces under the command of CT-375".
 
Sorry, perhaps I could have been more clear:


CT-375 said:
Affiliation: First Order Model: TIE Assassin Production: Forces under CT-375
The affiliation should be something like "Forces under CT-375" instead of the First Order, but the production should still be "Limited".
 
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