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Approved Lore The Unified Coruscant Party

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[SIZE=9pt]OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION[/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=9pt]Intent:[/SIZE][SIZE=9pt] To create a Political Party present on Coruscant to challenge the present Administration[/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=9pt]​Image Credit: [/SIZE]https://www.deviantart.com/brendand19/favourites/71465052/Flag
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  • [SIZE=9pt]​Links:[/SIZE][SIZE=9pt] N/A[/SIZE]

  • Company Submission: N/A
[SIZE=9pt]GENERAL INFORMATION[/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=9pt]Organization Name: The Unified Coruscant Party[/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=9pt]Classification: Political Party[/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=9pt]Loyalties: The People of Coruscant; Business-Owners; Family Values; The Family[/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=9pt]Organization Symbol: (See Above)[/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=9pt]Description:
    The Unified Coruscant Party (UCP) is an active Political Party on the planet Coruscant. Compared to the present Administration, known as "Coruscant First" (a highly Xenophobic & tyrannical regime), they lean somewhat to the left; believing in liberty and peace amongst all races and improving the quality of Coruscant’s relations with the Galaxy and with a large majority of business-owners and groups throughout the region. They have begun campaigning for change on Coruscant, placing themselves in opposition to the Xenophobic Ideals of “Coruscant First” and have begun to climb in the Polls. [/SIZE]

    [SIZE=9pt]The Party’s Executive Officer & Front-Runner, Devlyn Kane, is a highly successful businessman & banker in his own right, and has gone on-record speaking up for the rights of all sentient creatures as well as espousing a belief in the value of a Free & Open Market. [/SIZE]

[SIZE=9pt]GEOGRAPHICAL INFORMATION[/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=9pt]Headquarters: Coruscant[/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=9pt]Realm: Coruscant[/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=9pt]Domain: The Planet Coruscant, with some influence extending into the surrounding system. They are not the only Political Party active on Coruscant, but they are one of the largest. [/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=9pt]Notable Assets: A relatively large PAC network to provide financial support[/SIZE]

[SIZE=9pt]SOCIAL INFORMATION[/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=9pt]Hierarchy: [/SIZE]
    [SIZE=9pt]President/Nominated Candidate[/SIZE]
    [SIZE=9pt]Vice President [/SIZE]
    [SIZE=9pt]General Secretary [/SIZE]
    [SIZE=9pt]Secretaries of various functions (Communications, Security, Treasury )[/SIZE]
    [SIZE=9pt]Coordinators[/SIZE]
    [SIZE=9pt]Full- and Part-time Employees.[/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=9pt]Membership: ~37% of the population, registered voters; party contains 11,700 staff members city-wide; easy to register, easy to volunteer for local offices, but most hired positions require a political science degree of some sort or appropriate work experience. Running for public office requires the individual providing some amount of their own platform funding, and then the party provides the rest. Gender and race diversity may make qualified applicants more attractive to employers. Low-level staff and all volunteers don’t need to be Coruscanti citizens, but those who run for office do. However, they may have dual citizenship.[/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=9pt]Influence: Some influence over economy and planetary public opinion (i.e. of immigration, galactic globalization, foreign policy); UCP also can utilize The Family to pressure political competition to step down[/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=9pt]Climate: Friendly, inclusive, dedicated, focused. Members of all races are welcome and the sharing of ideas is promoted & encouraged. Xenophobia is heavily discouraged. [/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=9pt]Reputation: Beloved by many races for their views on equality and personal freedom, and respected by business-owners for their stance on Free Market Enterprise and Corporate Rights. Their approval ratings are particularly high amongst non-human Sentient Races for their directly oppositional stance to the current Administration’s xenophobic and often discriminatory practices. [/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=9pt]Rules: “Never take more than you’re willing to give”, “Give a man a blaster, and he’ll take what he wants - Give a man a stylus, and he’ll give it all back.”, “Love, and Coffee, are the two most powerful things in The Galaxy.”, “Integrity & Courage will take you further than than any starship.” [/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=9pt]Doctrines: [/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]“CorUScant: Moving Forward Together.” - Gubernatorial Hopeful Kane's campaign slogan;[/SIZE]
    [SIZE=9pt]Platform Values/Promises: [/SIZE]
    [SIZE=9pt]Laissez Faire market conditions; lower import/export taxes for small - medium sized businesses planetwide; maintain Coruscanti Independence from Galactic Politics yet invite free & open dialogue; change laws to allow for all beings with Coruscanti Citizenship to hold office; expansion of welfare programs for the poor & destitute & increase funding for nonprofit groups who work to improve conditions in the Underdark; lessen The CSF’s focus on punishing non-violent crime, so their efforts may be redirected toward improving public relations; Improve rehabilitation options for incarcerated inmates; [/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=9pt]Goals: To bring freedom & liberty to The Common Being; to improve relations with all businesses on Coruscant, regardless of affiliation; to expand their reach into all aspects of the Coruscanti Government; [/SIZE]

[SIZE=9pt]MEMBERS[/SIZE]
[SIZE=9pt]Devlyn Kane -- President and Gubernatorial Hopeful[/SIZE]

[SIZE=9pt]Malcoma Hesse (via her hold over him; not formally part of the UCP) -- Kane's mistress and handler from The Family[/SIZE]

[SIZE=9pt]HISTORICAL INFORMATION[/SIZE]
[SIZE=9pt]Formed in opposition to the Coruscant First party. [/SIZE]
[SIZE=9pt]Recently rose up to prominence in the public eye because of Mant’s step down; CF became less and less organized in the wake of their departing leader and the UCP has capitalized on this, campaigning non-stop to spread their message of peace and prosperity for all. Before Zeriadis Mant's announcement, the UCP worked tirelessly behind the scenes to improve relations amongst the poor & under-privileged, which is why they have not taken the spotlight until now. [/SIZE]

[SIZE=9pt]The Family has secretly become involved through Devlyn's connections with one of their associates; Malcoma Hesse, a Madame who owns one of Coruscant's highest-rated Escort Services, maintains a close relationship with Mr. Kane, and is available to him for matters one might consider outside the purvue of typical Government Affairs - the exact nature of their relationship is unknown. [/SIZE]
 
[member="Devlyn Kane"] This looks overall good, just a few comments before we can get this approved:



Devlyn Kane said:
Pinsdaddy is not a legit source for images. The image details claim that the image is originally located somewhere on deviantart, I would recommend trying to find it there and then linking to it in this section.



Devlyn Kane said:
Links: [Provide links to any relevant threads, characters, companies, locations, equipment, etc, without other appropriate categories, here.] Company Submission: [If this organization is a company submitted through the Factory, provide the link to the Factory-approved submission here. If this company is to be a manufacturer in the Factory, a Factory-approved company submission is required.]
These need to be filled out. If there is no company submission or any links, please write "n/a".



Devlyn Kane said:
Description: The Unified Coruscant Party (UCP) is an active Political Party on the planet Coruscant. Compared to the present Administration, they lean somewhat to the left; believing in liberty and peace amongst all races and improving the quality of Coruscant’s relations with the Galaxy and with a large majority of business-owners and groups throughout the region. They have begun campaigning for change on Coruscant, placing themselves in opposition to the Xenophobic Ideals of “Coruscant First” and have begun to climb in the Polls.
This comment is slightly nitpicky on my part and is only a recommendation (so you don't have to make this edit), but I would suggest writing who the specific administration is instead of "Compared to the present Administration". The sub should be easy to read and understand even for people who aren't involved in Cosucant politics. But as I've said, this is merely a recommendation, and not a required edit.
 
[member="Scherezade deWinter"]

Ohh myyy, I apologize! I only just saw there were edits to be made! Thank you so much for your patience with me, Lady Antares. I have corrected the submission as directed, as well as changing the description to better inform the reader. Again, I apologize for not seeing this sooner!
 
[member="Devlyn Kane"]

Hello there,

Devlyn Kane said:
The Unified Coruscant Party (UCP) is an active Political Party on the planet Coruscant. Compared to the present Administration, known as "Coruscant First" (a highly Xenophobic & tyrannical regime)
Please link to the CF faction page for reference, which is here.

Devlyn Kane said:
Membership: ~37 billion, or 37% of the population, registered voters;
Coruscant actually has a population of a trillion, so you'll want to tweak these values. Just using a percentage is fine here.

[member="Devlyn Kane"]
 
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