Zambrano the Starweird
The Black Prophet of Balagoth
Zambrano the Hutt is Fatty's latest character, and he is enjoying him very much so far. I hope to utilize the advice I have been given in my last critique thread on myself as a writer, and although it appears I have pretty good reception so far, I want to make it even better!
So I direct you to this ongoing thread: http://starwarsrp.net/topic/49297-the-rising-blood-falling-flesh-and-enduring-soul-open/
I have only posted three times in it so far, but I am requesting feedback on the overall feel of the thread so far, and the characterization of Zambrano the Hutt. What you enjoy from the opening, parts that seem unnecessary, and any minor flaws you would like to be point out are welcomed and appreciated!
Also, how do you like the format? I kinda borrowed it from [member="Krest"] because I thought it would look imposing due to its distinction mixed with Zambrano's malice
So I direct you to this ongoing thread: http://starwarsrp.net/topic/49297-the-rising-blood-falling-flesh-and-enduring-soul-open/
I have only posted three times in it so far, but I am requesting feedback on the overall feel of the thread so far, and the characterization of Zambrano the Hutt. What you enjoy from the opening, parts that seem unnecessary, and any minor flaws you would like to be point out are welcomed and appreciated!
Also, how do you like the format? I kinda borrowed it from [member="Krest"] because I thought it would look imposing due to its distinction mixed with Zambrano's malice