Approved Tech The Rings of the Cold Sun

[Drakin K'latus Xolim]

OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION

• Intent: To create a personal and hidden weapon for the Crimelord Drakin K'latus Xolim and other people
• Image Source: Source
• Canon Link: N/A
• Permissions: N/A

PRODUCTION INFORMATION

• Manufacturer: BlastTech Industries
• Affiliation: Drakin K'latus Xolim , (Other individuals granted permission)
• Market Status: Closed-Market
• Model: KRA-23 "Sun" Rings (Prototype)
• Modularity: Yes.
• Production: Semi-Unique
• Material: Ultrachrome

TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS (RANGED)

• Classification: Blaster, EMP
• Size: Extremely Small
• Weight: Very Light
• Ammunition Type: Power cell, Rockets, Electromagnetic pulse
• Ammunition Capacity: Small
• Effective Range: Personal
• Rate of Fire: Very Low
• Damage Output: Low
• Recoil: None

TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS (MELEE)

• Classification: Dagger
• Size: Small
• Weight: Light

SPECIAL FEATURES

• EMP Pulse
• Fires blaster bolts (Through small holes)
• Small repulsers able to propel rings towards an enemy
• Activate-able razor sharp edges
• Rockets
• Modifications can be made

STRENGTHS

• Concealed
• Multiple use

WEAKNESSES

• Low damage
• Prototype

DESCRIPTION
The Rings of the Cold Sun, nicknamed this by Drakin K'latus Xolim were a gift from a crimelord he had done business with, to ensure the support of Drakins family. It comes with many different functions, notably the ability to propel towards the users enemy using rockets, razor sharp edges activating before impact. This function is able to silently kill enemies in an instant. Another notable function is that it can fire blaster bolts through small holes in each ring.

The idea for this item/items are that they can perform almost any function as long as the items are modified. You can think of them as the rings featured in the marvel movie, except they are proper rings, one for each finger. It's easily concealed especially for a Crime Boss. There are little to no limitations as to what they can be used for, as long as it is appropriate for the size. All 10 together can also serve as a very powerful energy source due to massive stores of energies in all of the rings combined incase of emergencies.

 

[MANIAC]

Drakin K'latus Xolim

This is a very interesting peice of thechology.

• Do you mentioned this is a blaster and EMP weapon. However in the special features do you mentioned the small rockets as well. Please specify the Classification more.
• Ammunition Type: Power cell; if it is able to launch small rockets too, this is not enough, because the power cell is good for the blaster only. And you forget to add the "electromagnetic pulse" as ammunition type.
• Your ratings are underpowered (-1), if you want, you can fix this.
• Activate-able razor sharp edges; if this can be used as a melee weapon, please add the melee weapon template to this one too.
  

  TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS
  

  • Classification: (Dagger, Sword, Whip, etc.)
  • Size: (Please choose a size between Extremely Large, Very Large, Large, Average, Small, Very Small, Extremely Small)
  • Weight: (Please choose a weight between Extremely Heavy, Very Heavy, Heavy, Average, Light, Very Light, Extremely Light.)

That's all, please let me know if you edited them, or if you have a question, you can ask them here.

 

[Drakin K'latus Xolim]

Thanks for the input, I'll make sure to fix it. When you say add the weapons template, do you mean only parts of it?

 

[MANIAC]

Drakin K'latus Xolim

Yes, you need to keep the part of the ranged weapon that is already in the submission, and yes you also need to add the little part that I showed in my previous post.

 

[Drakin K'latus Xolim]

Well I believe I am finished, bumped up the ratings a bit, if its to high feel free to tell me.

 

[MANIAC]

Drakin K'latus Xolim

• You forget to specify the Classification, please fix it.
• Now your ratings are overpowered (+4), please fix it.
  • If you're not sure how this working you can find the Technology Spreadsheet here. You need to copy to your drive first, and after this you're able to use it.
• And the melee weapons ratings also overpowered (+1). Please fix this too.

 

[Drakin K'latus Xolim]

Copy that, slightly confused on the melee bit. If I understood that right changes are made.

 

[MANIAC]

Drakin K'latus Xolim

Please next time if you made edits tag me, I'm not following the thread, so without a tag it is possible I'll not notice that you wrote here.
One problem remained, the ranged part is still overpowered (+1), please fix this.

 

[Drakin K'latus Xolim]

Got it, done.

MANIAC

 

[MANIAC]

Drakin K'latus Xolim

Thank you for your cooperation! Enjoy your new rings!

Approved.