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The Ring of Qyâsik Dabotin

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Name: The Ring of Qyâsik Dabotin
Intent: To create a unique Sith artifact that allows the wearer to moderately repel the Force much like a Ysalamir lizard
Development Thread: N/A
Manufacturer: Sage Bane
Model: N/A
Affiliation: The One Sith
Modularity: No
Production: Unique
Material: Alchemized silver, essence of Ysalamir

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The Ring of Qyâsik Dabotin was created in the Dark Forge of the Temple of Pain by Sage Bane, Sith Alchemist in order to help One Sith Non-force users better protect themselves from Force attacks. From alchemical experiments on Ysalamir lizards, Sage was able to chemically extract the Force-repelling powers the lizards contained. The steps of its construction were as follows: First the silver metals used for forging were cleansed of all impurities. Next, a Rune of Bonding was inscribed onto the metal, and then in a focusing chamber, it was imbued with the Ysalamir’s Force repelling powersl. Next, the ring was fused with a rune called The Ur Rune, which gives the artifact added protection. Lastly, as with most alchemized trinkets, a bit of Sage’s blood was fused into the artifact to seal its power.

This ring’s primary function is to boost the wearer’s defense against Force attacks. Unlike a Ysalamir lizard which has a wider containment field, the ring only affects a radius of 2 meters around the user. The ring only protects the wearer from Force attacks. The wearer can still be harmed by any other types of attacks by non-Force ranged and melee weapons. Like most canon alchemized artifacts, the ring is resistant to wear and tear, fire, and lightsaber attacks. Additionally, the artifact is not completely indestructible, and while resistant to lightsaber attacks, can be destroyed by slugthrowers, canon fire, shotguns, and other artillery.
 
[member="Sage Bane"] I regret to inform you after reviewing this myself I'm going to have to deny this on concept

1) Force negating isn't biological or a chemical component to the Ysalamir, its a force power.
2) Its insanely over powered because you're basically negating the force in a 2 meter range in all directions. Nothing can break through there and there are no weaknesses.
3) You created something at this level of power and there's no development thread or any work beyond creation of the submission entry.
 
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