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THE LION'S BANE

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OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION
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PRODUCTION INFORMATION
TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS
  • Classification: Longsword
  • Size: Large
  • Weight: Average
SPECIAL FEATURES
  • Alchemy & Rune Improvements:
    • Physical Properties:
      • Lightsaber resistant
      • Deflecting blaster bolts
      • Can cut through the same materials as a lightsaber
    • Force Enhancements:
      • Upon wielding, it increases the wielders resistance to Force Light
      • Can conduct Sith lightning and greatly amplify it
      • When tasting blood, the wielder might get a glimpse of the true feelings of the one being wounded
STRENGTHS
  • Dark Razor - The blade aside from being extremely well balanced, is also greatly enhanced in its common capabilities such as endurance and cutting power.
  • Baneblade - A weapon designed from and for the twisted nature of the Dark side, it can unleash devastating carnage through the magnification of lightning.
  • We Keep In Touch - By wounding its target, the wielder might gain a glimpse of the truth behind the enemies facade.
WEAKNESSES
  • Just a blade - Despite its extensive enhancements, it just remains a weapon which can be destroyed with enough force and blocked by lightsaber resistant metals like cortosis and phrik.
  • Fight in the shadow - Exposed to extreme concentrations of Light side power, the Alchemy will lose its properties.
  • aVoid - In the presence of Force nullifying powers, the Alchemy will temporarily lose its properties.
DESCRIPTION
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From the forges of Urienz Tyrael Urienz Tyrael comes His personal weapon, eagerly called The Lion's Bane. It is a longsword of intricate design with usage, not display in mind. With its long two-edged blade, engraved with glowing Sith runes and wrapped in an aura of power, the weapon is made to bring down the enemies of the Fallen Order and of Urienz Himself.

Balanced with a ring-pommel and a narrow blade, plenty of space on the hilt for two hands and a light but effective cross-guard design define the working end of the sword. Its blade is long and shimmers blue when light breaks on it, sharpened through extensive processes and the molecular bonding of the metal through Alchemy, the runes engraved are written in ur-Kittât are glowing in sulphuric yellow, a nebulous mist around them when gazing directly onto them. Near the hilt the blade is hollowed for weight savings and perfect the balance which was directly crafted to fit into the Lion's hand.

Forged in the armouries of The Eternal Valor, Urienz is reported to have spent a full month on the process though preparations most likely took far longer. It has cost the lives of at least a dozen serfs in Honourable Donation, lives voluntarily given to their Masters will and advancement. The songsteel was folded several hundred times, hammered by hand into shape with dreadful incantations and rituals spoken, quenched in the blood offered by the serfs and again sharpened through wet-stones and words of power from the Force.

 
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HPI AI; Terraris Command
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Nice sword! However, these two parts have problems with wording. The pvp system works on the site in such a way that always the opponent decides how successful your attack (any kind) is. So you can't say that you see/feel your opponent's true feelings if they don't want to. That's why I'd like to ask you to rephrase this something like "there is a chance that the character can feel it", "might feel it", etc.
When tasting blood, the wielder gets a glimpse of the true feelings of the one being wounded
We Keep In Touch - By wounding its target, the wielder gains a glimpse of the truth behind the enemies facade.
 
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