Pirate Prince
December 15 marks the one year anniversary of my joining Chaos. Today is actually December 12, but I'm impatient.
I started off with two characters, Val and Alyosha Drutin. Now I have many more characters and have tried to write my own personal storyline spanning several threads, in addition to participating in wider faction plotlines. I’ve survived retcons, drama, character deaths, and my own dumb decisions and rookie mistakes. But I had a lot of fun doing it.
I’ve seen other people ask for critiques and opinions of their characters and writing at around this time (and I've jumped the gun a few times asking for critiques too early... kind of like how I'm doing now, heheh), so without further ado, I’m going to link what I consider to be some of my best threads (excluding giant faction threads, I'm not gonna make you wade through hundreds of posts to find mine) down below and ask you, dear reader, to read them and tell me what you think. You could also just tell me that you like one of my characters a lot. Or that you think they all suck. Say whatever you wanna say. Just don't ban me from the site, plz. I like it here.
Starlin Rand : Apprentice to Flame
Jacen Nimdok : Chasing a Rumor On Samovar, Spirit of Adoption (this is a solo thread that I infamously rewrote months after finishing it; in some ways I feel like the original version reads better, but eh)
Inanna Harth : Wondering About Wonders, The Silver Tower
Val Drutin : The Stardust, A Visit to the Madhouse, A Night At the Opera
Alyosha Drutin : The Dancer and the Assassin, Dragons of Atrisia (which isn’t quite done, but is very close to finishing)
I may also post a self-reflection post later on, idk.
I started off with two characters, Val and Alyosha Drutin. Now I have many more characters and have tried to write my own personal storyline spanning several threads, in addition to participating in wider faction plotlines. I’ve survived retcons, drama, character deaths, and my own dumb decisions and rookie mistakes. But I had a lot of fun doing it.
I’ve seen other people ask for critiques and opinions of their characters and writing at around this time (and I've jumped the gun a few times asking for critiques too early... kind of like how I'm doing now, heheh), so without further ado, I’m going to link what I consider to be some of my best threads (excluding giant faction threads, I'm not gonna make you wade through hundreds of posts to find mine) down below and ask you, dear reader, to read them and tell me what you think. You could also just tell me that you like one of my characters a lot. Or that you think they all suck. Say whatever you wanna say. Just don't ban me from the site, plz. I like it here.
Starlin Rand : Apprentice to Flame
Jacen Nimdok : Chasing a Rumor On Samovar, Spirit of Adoption (this is a solo thread that I infamously rewrote months after finishing it; in some ways I feel like the original version reads better, but eh)
Inanna Harth : Wondering About Wonders, The Silver Tower
Val Drutin : The Stardust, A Visit to the Madhouse, A Night At the Opera
Alyosha Drutin : The Dancer and the Assassin, Dragons of Atrisia (which isn’t quite done, but is very close to finishing)
I may also post a self-reflection post later on, idk.