Approved Starship The Eternal Fury

[grammaticus]

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OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION

• Intent: To create the personal Battlecruiser for Darth Animus for his ascension to the Dark Council.
• Image Source: Source
• Canon Link: N/A
• Primary Source: N/A

PRODUCTION INFORMATION

• Manufacturer: The Imperial Foundry
• Affiliation: Character-Darth Animus
• Model: N/A
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  Production: Unique
  
• Material: Alusteel primary hull with durasteel secondary hull.

TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS

• Classification: Command Ship
• Length: 4500 Meters
• Width: 3225 Meters
• Height: 700 Meters
• Armament: Extreme
• Defenses: High
• Hangar: Average-17
• Maneuverability Rating: Very Low
• Speed Rating: Very Low
• Hyperdrive Class: Average-2

STANDARD FEATURES

• Secondary Bridge
• Escape Pods
• Linked Targeting Computers
• Redundant Power Generators
• Council Chambers: The Eternal Fury comes equipped with a massive chamber built within for members of the Dark Council to hold meetings in the field.
• Emperors Sanctum: Situated just above the Dark Council Chamber and able to see down below is the Emperors Sanctum, the private quarters of the Emperor should he ever travel aboard the Eternal Fury.

ADVANCED SYSTEMS

• HIMS
• Molecular Shielding
• Harbinger Class Assault Cannon

Strengths:

• Pile Driver: The Eternal Fury is designed to destroy anything in its path, with very little regard for moving out of the way.
• Safe Haven: The Eternal Fury has taken inspiration from Mon Calamari vessels, and has numerous redundant shield generators placed around the vessel.
• Harbinger: The Harbinger Class Assault Cannon provides the Eternal Fury with an immensely powerful weapon to be used in a fight, able to cripple smaller vessels with relative ease and prove dangerous to larger vessels.

Weaknesses:

• Slow: The Eternal Fury is not meant to be used in any other tactical capacity than to simply charge enemy fleets head on. As such it has minimal maneuverability, and must rely on support vessels to protect its flanks.
• Swarm?: The Eternal Fury focuses heavily on capital ship engagements, and as such it lacks heavy point defense systems.
• Harbinger: The Harbinger Class Assault Cannon, when fired lowers the shielding around that area of the Eternal Fury, briefly leaving it exposed. Extra armor has been added to this section, though it is still largely vulnerable.

Description: The Eternal Fury serves as the flagship of Darth Animus, and the mobile seat of the Dark Council while in the field. It has extensive weaponry and defenses as per its role as a warship, as well as on board Council Chambers and private offices for any member of the Dark Council or important dignitary that happens to be on board. With an equipped HIMS system and enhanced Molecular Shielding, the Eternal Fury stands as one of the most advanced ships of the Jen'ari Empire Armada.

Equipped with a meeting chamber for the Dark Council as well as private quarters for the Emperor, the Eternal Fury serves as a forward flagship for the Jen'ari Empire in any potential field it finds itself in.

 

[Ravenfire]

Under Review.

 

[Ravenfire]

[member="Darth Animus"]

an interesting ship with a big old gun. Just some suggestions you might want to add a strength and weakness from your gun sub that would apply to this sub just so people don't have to back track subs to find out why it can do what it does. Makes it easier to go, ahh so that's what it's doing.

It has an average hanger bay so I myself don't get the swarm weakness. Like yeah some have a extreme hanger bay on ships like this but if your average then it's normal for the class of ship as a whole. As a suggestion instead you could keep swarm just make it about minimal like point defences.

As for the Armament rating of very high, I would push it to extreme as this needs a bit more of a bump up in stats to get it level but also because that gun you got in it's present form I would consider to be high to very high all on it's own. After all it's an ionite gun that's pretty powerful. Just some suggestions.

 

[grammaticus]

Edited.

[member="Tom Taff"]

 

[Ravenfire]

Awesome. Pending Factory Mentor Review.

[member="Gir Quee"].

 

[Adron Malvern]

Approved.