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Approved Location The Dirty Dancer Cantina

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Name: The Dirty Dancer.

Intent: To add on to my Enterprising character, Rorshork.

Classification: Cantina/Dance house.

Location: In the lower, less respectable places of Coruscant. However, it is not so deep that only scum and criminals hang out there.

Affiliation: Currently owned by criminal, Rorshork.

Description: A medium-sized business, it is covered with dancer stages on the inside. It is relatively clean and ash trays are placed all along the bar area. The place is installed with modern lights and a unique feel, along with several tables around each stage. On the outside of the bar, a large yellow and bright neon sign hangs slightly lower than the first floor, with a logo of a Twi'lek dancer and the text "The Dirty Dancer." There is two floors of the building, the public level and then the ownership level.

The public level is where all the guests and customers stay, along with the dancers and the bartenders. The second floor holds three rooms, Rorshork's large office which is fitted with a Twi'lek girl toy(Basicly the Twi'lek dancer version of the Hula Girl.) There is a large desk in the office as well, along with a large clock behind it. Two filing cabinets are set alongside the desk, holding files of each dancer and/or employee. There is a small cabinet behind Rorshork's desk, which he uses to conceal his spice pipes. A coat hanger would be on the white door that leads into the office. A small lamp also rests on the desk.

The next room on the business level is the clothing room. Here dancers put on the required clothes and any other accessory before heading down to the public floor. Lockers line the walls in the clothing room, each with a name tag bolted into each one. The room is quite plain with only boring white walls and a small bench. Finally, the final room is the 'Blood Room' as Rorshork refers to it.


When customers down at the bar are causing trouble and posing a threat to one or more dancers, a bouncer will take the troublemaker up to this room and brutally beat them. This technique is illegal, yes, especially when the customer is not attacking anyone or attempting to attack the bouncer but it gets the job done. In the 'Blood Room' it is exactly that. Blood usually covers the walls due to the beatings and the only thing in the room is a crowbar which is tucked into the corner which is usually only used for increasing the pain on the victim.
 

J3C0

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[member="Rorshork"] Okay. This board is PG-13 that means Strip Clubs=No.

I can help you get this approved, but you need to take out any iteration of Pimp, Strip Club, Strippers, etc...

The way to get this passed is through implication. Strippers Turns into Dancers, Pimp turns into an enterprising criminal, and Strip Club turns into Cantina/Dance House. This is the -only- way this will pass.
 
Edited. Edited everything required and also once again, I apologize for the original version that violated the PG-13 rule.

[member="Darth Mierin"]
 

J3C0

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[member="Rorshork"] Alright, i see nothing big wrong with this submission anymore.

Remember with this character though, keep things to implication, fade to blacks, etc...

Breaking the PG-13 rule is a very fast way of getting into trouble. With that in mind, i'm approving this pending secondary. Don't mess it up!
 
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