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Korriban
Direct: Aiden Porte Aiden Porte
Indirect: Alina Grayson Alina Grayson (Just FYI)
Korriban waited beneath a sky the color of old bruises.

The world was barren in a way that felt deliberate, as though life itself had recoiled from it ages ago and never found the courage to return. Red sand stretched in wind carved sheets across blackened stone, and every gust that crossed the desert seemed to carry the memory of something dead. The Valley of the Dark Lords loomed ahead like a scar cut into the skin of the planet, lined with ancient tombs that rose in cruel angles from the earth. Their silhouettes broke the horizon in jagged teeth, half buried by time, yet still imposing, still hungry. Nothing about the place felt abandoned. It felt watchful.

The wind moved through the valley with a hollow voice, slipping between ruined facades and crumbling statues as though the dead still whispered to one another in the dark. Dust curled over the ground in slow spirals, gathering at the mouths of tombs and winding around broken obelisks etched with symbols worn thin by centuries of hate. The air itself seemed heavy, burdened by the weight of all that had happened there. War. Betrayal. Sacrifice. Desecration. Korriban did not simply remember darkness. It preserved it.

Then, against that ancient stillness, a single shuttle descended.

Its engines cut through the silence with a mechanical roar that sounded strangely fragile in such a place. For a brief moment, reflected light from the vessel flashed across the weathered stone and crimson sand, a bright intrusion into a land that had long ago surrendered itself to shadow. The shuttle settled near the edge of the valley in a hiss of displaced dust, and the red earth rose around it in thick clouds before slowly drifting away again.

When the ramp lowered, the figure who emerged seemed almost unreal against the backdrop of Korriban's ruin.

He stood alone.

There was something visibly out of place about him, and not merely because he was a Jedi on a world built to break them. It was the contrast. The way the faint impression of light seemed to cling to him, subtle but undeniable, as though hope itself had taken shape and stepped willingly into the graveyard of the Sith. Yet that light was not untouched. Even at a distance, there was the sense of something marred beneath it, a thin fracture in the radiance, a scar that shadow had once managed to leave behind. It did not consume the light. It only made its presence more haunting, more human, more hard won.

Beyond him, the Valley of the Dark Lords stood silent, patient, and immense.

This was no place for invitations. Korriban did not welcome. It lured. It threatened. It devoured. And yet someone had called him here. Someone hidden deeper in the folds of the valley, among the tombs and secrets and death, had reached out from the darkness and drawn a lone Jedi to their doorstep. They were the same unseen hands that had once moved against his daughter, the same unseen malice that had sought to cage her or kill her for reasons still buried beneath layers of shadow. Whatever purpose lay behind this summons remained concealed, swallowed by the planet as completely as the light.

The valley seemed to hold its breath.

The tombs stood like witnesses. The wind quieted for a fleeting instant. Even the dust, still settling from the shuttle's arrival, seemed reluctant to move. Korriban had seen countless warriors come and die beneath its skies. Sith Lords. Acolytes. Slaves. Rivals. Pretenders. But this felt different. Not because darkness had called, but because something bright had answered.

And far within the ancient red silence, the shadows waited to see what would happen next.


 




The darkside of the force, lashed out at him. It recognized not his own particular force signature, but the one that was apparent to all Jedi.

The Light...

There were whisphers all around him as he descended into the valley of shadow and death. The jewel around his neck reinforcing his own force signature, reinforcing his light. A light that would not be consumed, no matter what happened, or whatever they did.

Two they came, from shadows like a plague, they had the look as if they were going to strike from afar.

"Where are the rest of you. Why don't you cowards come out where I can see you?"

Aiden, let out the most cockiest of chuckles followed with a smirk.

"Or does the light....frighten you....?" Aiden whisphered, sending the message with the wind, a gamble, test, and a means to provoke as well.


 

There was a cackle of laughter that echoed across the valley. From every corner, there was no hiding from it. It was enough to make anyone's blood run cold.

"You come here, so brazenly into our domain. You are either brave or incredibly stupid to have done so." They were hooded, cloaked, and utilizing a voice modulator.

"We've done our work on you. We know about you. Too much if we are being honest. A boy raised on hope, finds love and loses thats. A boy who has family, and loses that as well. Does it depress you, does it make you feel angry, alone, hopeless. To be so....dead inside?"

The tide shifted quickly as they approached the Jedi Knight.

"Why are you protecting the girl. She has no one, she is no one, shes all alone in this world, much like you. Why not do the easiest thing, and let her go. Give her to use, she's nothing to you." He main speaker moved forward, as he circled Aiden.

"Think about it, claiming her spirit, her soul will fulfill the prophecy of Intention. Such a person, or even group of individuals can enjoy this gift. It's one life, childs life."

A laughter escaped his mouth. "Ahhh, or have your thoughts betrayed you? Have you figured things out, and you plan to kill her yourself? Oh Aiden, that's awful, especially for you." The Sith chuckled lightly. "And I thought I was the evil one, that's terrible, mascarading as her protector until you are finally brave enough to do the deed. How will you do it? Will you wait till shes sleeping, or will you look her in the eyes when you decide to kill her."

"Well, I don't blame you, its eternal life after all. I can feel that darkness, that restless energy in your mind. The one you keep trying to combat over and over. I almost feel bad for her, you are supposed to be looking out for her, and yet you seek to kill her too."


A maniacal laughter escape his mouth, grins and smiles from the others that were gathered. "I should apologize, I shouldn't be so hard on you. You are simply human after all. No jedi is perfect in this world. They all harbor their own evil inside them. And yours is something unique, I have to say I'm a bit jealous. Why not do the easy thing, give her to us. Or even better, give her to us, and then join us. We could use someone of your talents. Jedi do not have long for this world. They masquerade that they are fighting for peace and hope, yet they can't do the simplest things. They debate about war, politics and what to do when the going gets tough. They still sit and talk. They call that strategy, its just simply, stupidity."

The Sith placed his hands on Aidens shoulders, whisphereing his his ear. "Think about it, you could reach your full potential. Put aside the Jedi, and embrace the darkness. Embrace it truly, and without fear, and you will become stronger than you have ever known."

He removed his hands from Aiden's shoulders and cackled again. "It's a tough decision, I know." His hand raised to his chin, in the most curious and most mocking of expressions.

"What say you....Jedi?" His voice turned serious, without tease and simply truth, deadly, precision like truth.



 




Aiden Porte didn't answer immediately.

The valley pressed in around him with its ancient silence and its older hatred, but he stood unmoving beneath it. The laughter faded, and the circling figures waited. They expected hesitation. They expected doubt. They expected the fracture inside him to open wide enough for them to step through.

Instead, Aiden breathed once. The Force moved through him like a steady current beneath ice.

They spoke of loss as though it had hollowed him. They spoke of darkness as though it owned him. They spoke of Lira as though she were something small enough to surrender.

They understood nothing, they were fools and nothing more. Servants of a higher power that they still knew nothing about. If this were under different circumstances, Aiden would almost feel bad for them. For someone that was always trying to see the good in others. That courtesy did not extend to them, which made this so much easier.

His gaze lifted to the speaker beneath the hood. There was no anger in his face. There was no fear. There was only something colder than either.

"She is not alone." His voice was quiet, but it carried across the valley with the weight of certainty. "She has me, she has Alina."

The words were simple. They were not spoken as a promise. They were spoken as truth. The Force gathered closer to him without being summoned. It answered him because it knew him and because he had suffered and still chosen to stand.

"You speak about prophecy," Aiden continued, calm and steady. "You speak about intention. You speak about what she is worth. You are wrong."

The air itself seemed to tighten around them. "She is not your path to power. She is not your offering. She is not your sacrifice. She is my daughter." Then something darker settled behind his voice. It was not rage and it was not hatred. It was something sharper and something more laced with a silent vengance.

"I respond to you simply with this, if you come after her." he said, "All of you, will die."

There was no emphasis and there was no drama. There was only certainty and truth. The truth of a father protecting his daughter. She was not his blood, but she carried his name, and that was worth more than anything he could've asked for.

"If you come for her, I will seek you out, hunt you all down. Wherever you are, where ever you try to go. I will find you and I will kill you. The shadows will not hide you from me. Justice won't come for you, only death."

The Force moved around him like distant thunder waiting beyond the horizon. "And none of you will be safe from me." Aiden's hand moved out to his side, in an almost uneasy calm. His lightsaber, slowing moving from his side and gently reached his hand. "Which brings me to me next question....."

"Why wait....."
The Jedi Knight's blue blade coming to life.

Hope and despair began to clash in the Valley of the Dark Lords.


 

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Theme
Valley of the Dark Lords
Aiden Porte Aiden Porte
Indirect: Alina Grayson Alina Grayson


The blue blade ignited with a sharp and living sound that carried across the Valley of the Dark Lords like a challenge spoken into the bones of the world itself.

For a single moment, nothing moved.

Then the Sith answered.

Crimson light erupted from the shadows as the cloaked figures advanced together, their hatred rising quickly and without restraint. The valley welcomed them. It had been shaped by their kind. It remembered their victories and their cruelty. It remembered the empires they had built and the lives they had broken. The darkness there did not merely surround them. It strengthened them.

And yet the Jedi stepped forward.

They attacked as one.

The first Sith struck from the flank with speed meant to overwhelm and confuse, but the blue blade met the strike with calm precision. Steel met light, and in the next breath the attacker fell. The movement was clean and final. There was no hesitation in what followed.

Another rushed him directly, shouting through the Force with reckless fury. The attack carried strength but little discipline. The Jedi turned the strike aside and answered in a single controlled motion. The red blade vanished as its wielder collapsed against the ancient stone.

The valley seemed to resist the blue light.

Still it burned.

More Sith closed in, circling him again, though something in their confidence had begun to shift. Their hatred remained strong, but certainty had begun to thin. They pressed forward regardless, trusting anger to carry them where skill could not.

The Jedi moved among them with steady purpose.

A figure leapt down from the ridge above him, driving forward with a strike meant to crush him where he stood. The attack failed before it could land. The Jedi stepped aside and answered with a rising arc of blue light that ended the fight instantly.

Another attempted to strike from behind. The ambush failed before it began. The Jedi turned, intercepted the blow, and answered with a motion so swift that the outcome was decided before the attacker understood the danger.

One by one, the Sith began to fall.

Their reckless hatred fed their strength, but it also betrayed them. Their movements grew louder in the Force. Their strikes grew heavier and less controlled. They fought like a storm without direction.

The Jedi answered like something steadier.

Like something that endured.

The valley pressed its ancient darkness against him, as though the weight of forgotten empires itself leaned into the conflict. It should have swallowed the light. It should have weakened him.

Instead, the blue blade continued to shine.

Another Sith rushed forward with a roar that echoed across the tomb-scarred valley. Their blades met once, then again, and then the red light vanished as the attacker fell backward against the stone.

Only a few remained now. For the first time since the battle had begun, hesitation touched them.

They could feel it, This was their ground. This was their power, this was their valley.

And still the Jedi stood.

The blue blade burned brightly in the shadow of the ancient tombs, cutting through darkness that had endured for centuries. Hope and despair clashed beneath the silent watch of the dead, and one by one, the Sith continued to fall.


 


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Indirect: Alina Grayson Alina Grayson


Darkness swallowed the valley.

The clash of blue and crimson light vanished into silence beneath the ancient tombs. The echoes of battle faded. The wind moved again through the stone corridors of the dead. Whatever had followed in the wake of that confrontation remained buried there among the shadows and the fallen.

Then there was only black. And then there was Naboo.

The ramp of the transport lowered slowly into the warm evening air. The light there was gentle and alive, soft against the polished stone of the landing platform. The distant sound of water carried across the palace grounds. Birds moved through the trees. The world felt untouched by the violence that had unfolded far beyond its skies.

Aiden Porte sat on the edge of the ramp as it settled into place.

He did not stand immediately.

Dust and dried blood marked his robes. Several cuts had found their way through the fabric and into his skin. One sleeve had been torn nearly to the shoulder. His breathing remained steady, but there was weight behind it. The fight had followed him home in the quiet stiffness of his posture and in the silence he carried with him.

Still, he had returned. Across the homestead, a small figure appeared at the far end of the path.

Lira had already seen the ship. She ran without hesitation.

Her steps slowed as she drew closer, as though something in her could already feel what he carried back with him. The distance between them shrank quickly, but she stopped a few paces away from where he sat on the ramp.

She looked at him carefully.

Her voice came softer than her running had been.

"Dad…are you okay?"


 


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Indirect: Alina Grayson Alina Grayson


"Dad…are you okay?"


Aiden looked to Lira, losing the pain and thoughts in his mind, just seeing his daughter was enough to push past the pain and focusing on her right now. "Oh, sweetheart. I'm fine, I'm just tired right now. It was a long, rough day." Aiden held his hand out towards her with a smile.

Lira smiled and approached him, taking his hand and sitting next to him. She giggled and wraped her arms around his leg. She knew something was wrong, she just didn't know what. Perhaps it was something she could talk to Alina about.

"I drew a picture while you were gone. It's probably my best one yet, of Alina, you and myself. Do you want to see it?!" She spoke, rather excitedly, with a pure and innocent smile.

"Of course!" Aiden said with a laugh.

"Come on!" She said as she let go of his leg and pulled on his hand. "You go get it sweetheart, I'm gonna wait here for a moment. I'll be right here when you get back. Do you know if Alina is home?"

"I haven't seen her today. Shall I go find her?!" Lira said, her tone rising a bit, showing her need to be of some assistance, however way it was.

"No, no that's okay. Just go get that drawing, I would love to see it. "

"Okay Dad! I'll be right back." She turned and sprinted off back towards the house.

Aiden smiled as he laid back, agaisnt the cold steel of the landing ramp. He wondered, why he was hearing their voices once more, and why now? He had hoped, it was to get him through the pain.

"I will die in battle. And I assure it will be by my choice, and my choice alone. At the end of the day my conscious will be clear, and I can look at my reflection and say that I wasn't swayed by no one. Mind, heart and soul are mine and mine alone." "I saw you. Standing over a fallen Jedi. You were kicking their lightsaber away. You turned towards me...your eyes...your eyes were red...and you raised your blade to strike me down." "You carry so much,""And you refuse to set any of it down, even for a breath. I just…""…I didn't want to watch you break under the weight you won't acknowledge."




 



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Lira burst back through the homestead doors with all the energy she had left, her footsteps quick and uneven on the polished floor as she clutched the drawing in both hands. "I found it!" she called out, voice bright and breathless, already turning back toward the ramp without waiting for an answer.

Alina stepped into view just behind her, drawn not by the excitement in Lira's voice, but by something quieter that had settled over the homestead long before the ship had even touched down. She had felt it the moment he returned. Not the battle itself, not the details, but the weight of it lingering in the Force like a bruise beneath the surface.

Her gaze found Aiden immediately.

She took in the torn fabric, the dried blood, the stillness in the way he held himself. No alarm crossed her features, no sharp reaction, but something in her eyes steadied, focused.

"Looks like I missed quite a bit," Alina said softly as she approached, her tone light enough for Lira to hold onto.

Lira hurried past her, climbing up beside Aiden and presenting the drawing with careful excitement. Alina let that moment breathe, watching the tension ease, even if only slightly, as something simple and good filled the space between them. She stepped up onto the ramp a moment later, close enough that her presence settled beside him naturally. "Let me see," she added gently, reaching to steady the edge of the drawing without taking it away. Her eyes moved over it, and a faint, genuine smile touched her lips. "This is beautiful, Lira."

As she spoke, her free hand came to rest lightly against Aiden's side, just beneath the line of his ribs. The touch was casual, almost absentminded in appearance, but the moment her fingers made contact, the Force moved.

It was quiet.

Just a steady warmth, flowing from her into him, easing where the strain lingered, softening the sharp edges of pain without erasing it. Enough to take the weight off and to let him breathe a little easier.

Her expression didn't change as she did it.

"You're terrible at hiding it," she said quietly, her tone still soft, still carrying that same gentle humor as her gaze lifted to meet his. "But we'll let you pretend for a few more minutes."

Her thumb shifted slightly where it rested against him, the healing continuing in small, careful waves, subtle enough that Lira would never notice, controlled enough that it never became the focus of the moment.

To anyone watching, it was nothing more than a hand resting at his side.

To him, it was steadiness.

TAG: Aiden Porte Aiden Porte

 




Her voice came bursting through the homestead like sunlight through an open doorway, bright and unstoppable, and the sound of it pulled a quiet laugh out of him before he could stop it. The movement tugged at ribs that had not fully forgiven him yet, and the ache answered immediately, sharp enough to remind him where he had been and what he had carried back with him. Even so, he let the laugh stay. It was worth the pain. By the time Alina stepped into view, his attention had already shifted toward her presence in the Force, something steady and familiar that had reached him long before his eyes followed.

A small smile formed at her words, softer than the one he had worn a moment earlier.

"I was half expecting a lecture from you." he said quietly, the warmth in his voice unmistakable despite the fatigue still resting underneath it. "Or is that to come later? And if it does come later, does it come with anything else?" He said with a half tease and half seriousness. While, he new he was in trouble. He was reckless, renegage, but also did what he had to do. The breath that followed left him slower than he intended, but as her hand settled against his side, the strain that had been sitting in his body since Korriban seemed to ease, not gone, not truly healed, but carried more lightly than before. The wounds were still there. They always would be. Yet in that moment, they no longer demanded his attention.

Lira beamed when Alina praised the drawing, her excitement practically glowing around her. "Thank you! I was super inspired!"

Aiden's expression softened as he studied the picture again, then reached out to give her hand a gentle squeeze before returning it to her. "This is lovely, sweetheart. You have a natural talent for this." His voice warmed further as he added, with quiet affection that never felt forced, "It might be also that your cuteness wins my heart every time."

Lira's cheeks flushed immediately, her laughter bright and unguarded as she leaned forward to press a quick kiss to his cheek. "Dad… you're so silly." She hugged the drawing close, then crossed the small distance to Alina, wrapping her arms around her in the same easy certainty before placing a quick kiss against her cheek as well. A moment later she was already turning, energy returning to her steps as she ran back toward the house.

Aiden watched her go, the corners of his mouth still lifted.

"She's something else," he said quietly, his voice carrying a softness that only appeared when he spoke about her, and sat beside Alina with the weight of the galaxy finally somewhere else for a little while.


 



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Alina's smile followed Lira as she disappeared back into the house, the warmth of the moment lingering just long enough to keep everything feeling light. She leaned slightly into the quick hug and kiss, returning it with a softness that came easily now, as though it had always belonged there. Only when Lira was out of earshot did her attention shift fully back to Aiden.

Her hand had never left him.

What looked like a simple, familiar touch at his side remained steady, but beneath it the Force moved in quiet, careful currents. She didn't rush it, didn't try to erase what he had been through. Instead, she eased it, softening the strain, taking the edge off the pain, letting his body settle without drawing attention to what she was doing. Her expression stayed calm, composed, nothing in it that would suggest anything more than closeness.

At his words, the faintest hint of amusement touched her lips.

"Oh, the lecture is definitely coming," Alina said quietly, her tone light enough to keep the edge from it, though her eyes told a slightly different story. "I just haven't decided how much trouble you're in yet."

Her gaze lingered on him for a moment longer, taking in what he wasn't saying as much as what he was. The slower breath. The way he carried himself was just a little too carefully. Her thumb shifted slightly against his side, the warmth of the Force continuing to flow, steady and controlled.

"And no," she added softly, a subtle note of warmth threading through her voice, "it doesn't come alone."

She let that settle for a beat before her attention drifted briefly toward the direction Lira had run, the sound of her movement still faintly echoing through the homestead. A small smile returned, gentler now.

"She is at that," Alina agreed, her voice quiet but certain. "And she's very good for you. And me too."

Her gaze returned to him, softer now, though no less perceptive.

"She keeps you here," she continued, her hand still resting against him, still easing what she could without making it obvious. "Even when everything else tries to pull you somewhere else."

Her hand remained where it was for another moment longer before she finally let it rest more naturally against his side, the healing tapering off into something subtle enough to leave no trace.

"Next time," she added gently, the faintest hint of that earlier firmness returning beneath the warmth, "take me with you, or work on soresu." A mischievous smile touched her lips as her azure eyes looked over at him once more.

TAG: Aiden Porte Aiden Porte

 




"Hopefully not too much trouble. I can't be pinned down for too long." Aiden teased softly as he looked at her, his eyes settling into hers.

He could have lost himself in those azure eyes forever, but the lingering pain in his body kept him grounded. Even so, the steady comfort of Alina's touch moved through him in gentle waves, easing the tension buried beneath bruises and exhaustion. He closed his eyes and drew in a slow, measured breath, finding the center of himself again. Calm settled over him like still water. The light within the Force burned brightly through him, blinding to the wicked and cruel, yet warm enough to guide those who had lost their way.

"And she's very good for you. And me too."

When his eyes opened once more, they found hers immediately.

There were moments when words were unnecessary between them. He never doubted what she felt, not truly. Still, hearing it spoken aloud filled him with a quiet pride and a strength he could not properly explain. It rested somewhere deeper than language, something he could only express through the way he looked at her, the way he stayed close.

"Next time," she added gently, the faintest hint of that earlier firmness returning beneath the warmth, "take me with you, or work on soresu."

Her words struck him in more ways than one. There was truth in them, but humor too.

"I know." he admitted with a faint smile. "I know, I'll need you there with me." His voice lowered slightly, quieter now beneath the teasing warmth. "I sent them a message. A strong one, but they won't stop until they are dead. I couldn't reach them all, but I bought us time."

The weight of that lingered between them only briefly before he leaned forward, brushing the tip of his nose gently against hers.

"And hey," he murmured, a grin pulling at the corner of his mouth, "My Soresu is pretty on point. Not saying there isn't room for improvement."

Aiden let out a soft laugh, shaking his head as amusement brightened his features.

"I feel like you're saying you want to go a few rounds with me." His tone carried more than one meaning, playful and warm as he held her gaze.




 

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