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The Chinvat Monolith

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OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION
  • Intent: To create the ultimate force focused power source.
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SETTING INFORMATION
  • Nexus Name: The Chinvat Monolith
  • Nexus Alignment: Dark
  • Location: Aza'Zoth
  • Affiliation: The Slave
  • Size: Small
  • Accessibility:
    ​While the planet, itself is already well hidden within the Eye of Flames Nebula, a massive collection of space dust and dark side energies that makes normal travel near impossible, there is an additional security measure in being buried deep beneath the Ashen Mountains of the far north.

[*]Security: N/A
[*]Description:
  • Although the exterior of the tomb is shrouded in mountains and rocky outcroppings, the actual place where it is kept ​behind nearly a thousand meters of twisting and winding caverns to its eventual hiding spot, a place where it was put to hide it from deep within the dark energies of the entire planet.

TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS
NEXUS EFFECTS

The Chinvat Monolith is a synthetic nexus, made to hold the souls of the force sensitive and turn their prowess in the force into fuel for those who subject themselves to be its champions. A stream of energy is then sent to be used in whatever fashion sought fit by whichever sorcerer needs them at that time. Simply put, the artifact contains no knowledge, no great understanding of the universe. It is nothing more than an almighty power source for those who wish to pay the price for its power. To put one’s immortal soul up for grabs, and to become fuel for its arcane reactors upon death is to truly sacrifice all that is true in the galaxy for the meager prospect of power.
With each subsequent sacrifice, the stone becomes stronger; but by a degree that is entirely dependent on the person who is brought into its eldritch folds. For a master, a large boon in power equivalent their own is given, but for a large amount of sacrifices made of a naturally force sensitive species there would be little gain in comparison to the energy spent to put them inside of it. While it is massive for the spirits inside of it, there is still the need to spend time to insert each of the would be spiritual fuel cells into it.

Once done however, it can be sent to them directly through the force. Calling upon its energy, those who bring it forth bring about the power of its collected masses; but none of their knowledge. Only the blind energy of a thousand screaming Jedi and Sith brought to heel to magnify its user’s attack or defense. Truly, a weapon beyond compare.

As more people are connected to the metaphysical fission reactor, the power is equally spread to each of them. In a sense, while the reactor is always working, unused energy is wasted; and so each of the members is only allocated a specific amount of its current output. In no way can one steal from the total more than they are allowed, as it simply can not be done.

Should too many people be connected at once, the power spread to each is almost completely negligible. Although the ritual itself is hard to commit to in itself, there is therefore a realistic limit to how many people can be connected at any given point, and should one ever go over that then the benefits of each are slimmed down serious factor with each concurrent avatar.

For those who sold their soul for the benefit of power, comes the punishment of endless cries of suffering in their dreams and waking nightmares. Breaking the sanctity of life, using enslaved souls for a grand purpose, all come with a heavy cost that is often one's sanity. To wake every night from the out crying of their hearts and minds, and to hear their speech in the darkness of one's own mind, that is to truly know insanity.

With its size and weight comes it's equally unruly need for a single location. The monuments weight is extreme, and anything short of an absolutely massive cruiser will be unable to lift it from its place, and move it anywhere else; and because of this it is entirely subject to whoever finds it.

Should it be found, destroying it as easy as blowing the base with explosives. When destroyed the souls of those taken within it are spread throughout the metaphysical realm, subject to the whims of the force in earnest. That being said, those who become one with the force do so, and those who are bound for the netherworld do so as well.

In addition to its weight, should the monument be left in a single position far too long; then it will slowly corrupt the area it is in. With it, it runs 'roots' deeper and deeper into the world it is on until it begins to even corrupt the mantle underneath it, all until the entirety of the area is completely subject to deplorable conditions. As darkness corrupts the land it sits on, the area around it becomes nearly unlivable; and can almost never be hidden.

If the signal is ever blocked, then those who are connected become weaker by the second. With their ability to draw on the force hindered after being so used to the amplification offered, to be blocked from its power can cause one to become almost pacified in the ways of the force.

Worse yet, should the dark tower ever be destroyed, those who were its avatars will be forever hindered in the way of the force. With pieces of their very being cut from who they are, they are now longer able to work as they once had; and become not only sickly, but unable to use the force in nearly any capacity. Only the few capable are able to use it after, and even still it is meager at best.


DESCRIPTION
Chinvat Caverns │
Hundreds of meters of caverns that were heavily altered using The Darkstaff to allow the monolith to be taken underground, before being returned to a chagrin maze of twisting and confusing tunnels that most often end in dead ends. With untold number of sith spawn inhabiting its corridors, and the demeaning trails one must follow to get where they are meant to be, it in itself is all the defenses the man made nexus needs.

The Monolith │
Hidden deep within the corrupted earth, lies the mausoleum that houses the Monolith in its entirety. With massively high walls, columns that are each etched in their own beauty, there is but a single room with an unnatural lighting that peers from the domed ceiling that lies centered above its beautiful and abysmal form.

DESCRIPTION

-- Overview --
The Chinvat Monolith; a weapon so destructive that few could comprehend just what sort of apocalyptic catalyst that it truly is. When fueled, it allows it people to become walking avatars of the synthetic nexus; a walking soul avatar focused on nothing more than its ruler's bidding. In this, it finds its most prevalent strengths, ones so forward in nature that few could compare should it ever reach its magnum opus.


-- Design --
After the dedication of a good number of souls, sacrificed to begin the arcane reaction deep in its metaphysically molten core, the creation of the Chinvat Monolith became founded in reality. While its main designer and curator was The Slave, it would not have been possible to create without the needed assistance and resources offered by a number of those around him.

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While he had the idea long before he had access to it, the Darkstaff played a very major role in his ability to manufacture the would be tomb. With its ability to amplify the user's ability to create and destroy, it became the brush in the massively complicated project that was the Monolith. The fact it could help control the lesser willed helped too, but even still it alone would not be enough to craft the reactor.

In turn, the great Darkforge of Aza’zoth became the anvil to the Darkstaff’s hammer. Together, they helped to create this unholy abomination that now graces our galaxy; and in turn benefits those who became its surrogate parents. Once more, the unholy children of the Darkforge would become pertinent, and perhaps the greatest creation to ever come off its

-- Function --
The Monolith enhances the power of those connected to it, but only if it is continually fed souls. If deprived of souls, the Monolith will cease functioning. That meaning that the power output it is able to create is only equivalent to the people that are producing said energy inside of it.

In addition, those who are brought into its folds leave a piece of their soul inside of it. That meaning that not only if they die they become apart of the metaphorical reactors, but should the obelisk be destroyed than they will forever lose a piece of their soul. Forever lost the void, forever hindering their ability to contact the force.

Yet the purpose of the piece left behind is not only as a failsafe to stop betrayal, but also one that allows the energy itself to be transported directly to them through the force. It does not travel through the air, there is no delay, it simply appears. In line with the dark side of the force, the energy itself is transported through the folds of reality, breaching nature and giving its gift to its avatars in short order.

-- Conditions --
Inside the Knock off Netherworld things become far more gruesome it would seem. Behind black walls of obsidian, and force sensitive stone corrupted far past its boundaries, lies the arcane home of all who reside within the monument of torture. Souls forever milked dry of their essence, forced to become what they never meant to be; practical farm animals for the goods they keep in the work they can commit.


It is horrifying, and the process is hardly painless. Those subjected to it would experience millions of lashings, stonings, and crushing pressures far beyond anything physically possible all in the matter of seconds, all to keep their soul forced into a position of accelerated production of energy. Over time, this can cause the soul’s to corrupt, become darker and more paranoid version of themselves than they were, slowly reducing their effectiveness over hundreds of years.

-- Summary --
In short, The Chinvat Monolith is beyond comprehension for the majority of the galaxy’s scholars. Something so rudimentarily disgusting in its actions, that only the dark and depraved mind of someone like The Slave would begin to realize its existence; forever staining the galaxy with yet another besmirchment to the living entity that is the force and all that is good within her.
 
The Slave said:
The singular function of the entire Monolith is simply to provide endless amounts of force potency to those connected to it. However, endless is only as much as the amount of people put in its depths through sacrificial ritual. That meaning that the power output it is able to create is only equivalent to the people that are producing said energy inside of it.
How close to this obelisk does someone need to be in order to receive whatever benefits this grants? Can its increased power stuff be obtained from extreme distances, or off-world?

If the person drawing power from it is nearby, like a force nexus, this is okay - if it can be accessed remotely, off-world, and so on, that will need to be changed.
 
Irina Volkov said:
How close to this obelisk does someone need to be in order to receive whatever benefits this grants? Can its increased power stuff be obtained from extreme distances, or off-world?
The energy is teleported through the force to the person by connecting a piece of their soul to where the rest of it resides. I believe it mentions it in there a few times, including one of the major weaknesses about how that should that signal ever be interrupted that it'd be significantly detrimental.

But to answer your question, it has a galaxy wide range. The trade off being it is not a standard type of nexus, in the sense that it is far weaker than a normal one, and entirely dependent on who is sacrificed to it.



The Slave said:
Bad Signal │ If the signal is ever blocked, then those who are connected become weaker by the second. With their ability to draw on the force hindered after being so used to the amplification offered, to be blocked from its power can cause one to become almost pacified in the ways of the force. Worse yet, should the dark tower ever be destroyed, those who were its avatars will be forever hindered in the way of the force. With pieces of their very being cut from who they are, they are now longer able to work as they once had; and become not only sickly, but unable to use the force in nearly any capacity. Only the few capable are able to use it after, and even still it is meager at best.



The Slave said:
Yet the purpose of the piece left behind is not only as a failsafe to stop betrayal, but also one that allows the energy itself to be transported directly to them through the force. It does not travel through the air, there is no delay, it simply appears. In line with the dark side of the force, the energy itself is transported through the folds of reality, breaching nature and giving its gift to its avatars in short order.

[member="Irina Volkov"]
 
The Slave said:
Should too many people be connected at once, the power spread to each is almost completely negligible. Although the ritual itself is hard to commit to in itself, there is therefore a realistic limit to how many people can be connected at any given point, and should one ever go over that then the benefits of each are slimmed down serious factor with each concurrent avatar.
As this is an equal spread, percentage-wise, what is the realistic limitations on how many people can be connected with this?


The Slave said:
For a master, a large boon in power equivalent their own is given, but for a large amount of sacrifices made of a naturally force sensitive species there would be little gain in comparison to the energy spent to put them inside of it.
I can't approve of something that grants potentially, essentially, a doubled source of power with an effectively infinite range from the stone. Either the range of this thing needs to be drastically reduced, or this needs to provide far less potential benefits for the person connected to it.


The Slave said:
If the signal is ever blocked
What kind of "signal" does this use? Is it a connection between the stone and a person via force bond, or is there something more technical at work here? How would this be theoretically blocked?
 
Irina Volkov said:
As this is an equal spread, percentage-wise, what is the realistic limitations on how many people can be connected with this?
Technically, infinite. Realistically? Maybe 3 or 4 at most without the improvement being completely negligible.



Irina Volkov said:
I can't approve of something that grants potentially, essentially, a doubled source of power with an effectively infinite range from the stone. Either the range of this thing needs to be drastically reduced, or this needs to provide far less potential benefits for the person connected to it.
I'm willing to work with you on what can be done to get it approved, but the range isn't something I can really cede on. Its a matter of keeping another character alive, and general usability. If you have some ideas on how to make the trade offs balance with the submission, I'm all ears.



Irina Volkov said:
What kind of "signal" does this use? Is it a connection between the stone and a person via force bond, or is there something more technical at work here? How would this be theoretically blocked?
Its less of a force bond, and more relying on a theoretical way the force works in relation to this. By using the piece of the soul that is inside the monument, it pushes what energy it would be providing through that, and that piece of the soul then 'teleports' the energy back to the main portion of the soul. Think quantum entanglement, but in a force fictional way.

That being said, it can be blocked by either A) Enough Effort , or B) someone putting either the person or the stone in an area where the force simply isn't able to be connected. Think void stones and such, or creating a force dead zone like the yslimir do. Things like that can force someone to not only be unable to use the force, but to completely fall victim to a debilitating nature since they no longer have a connection to the piece of their soul; effectively creating a massive weakness when faced with one of the numerous anti force weapons made on the site.

[member="Irina Volkov"]
 
[member="The Slave"] [member="Irina Volkov"]

Upon review, this is more a location submission than an actual technology item.

I am going to move this to Pre-Codex so that you may edit the submission accordingly and work with the Codex to provide your location.
 
[member="The Slave"]



The Slave said:
The singular function of the entire Monolith is simply to provide endless amounts of force potency to those connected to it. However, endless is only as much as the amount of people put in its depths through sacrificial ritual. That meaning that the power output it is able to create is only equivalent to the people that are producing said energy inside of it.
This is a tad unclear and the use of the word "endless" is going to raise eyebrows. Knock this down to something along the lines of "The Monolith enhances the power of those connected to it, but only if it is continually fed souls. If deprived of souls, the Monolith will cease functioning."



The Slave said:
With its almost endless ability to amplify the user's ability to create and destroy,
Again, you don't want to use the word "endless." The Force is endless, the ability of us wee mortals to manipulate it is not. Simply change this to "amplify the user's ability to manipulate the Force."

Honestly, anywhere in this submission, if you're using the word "endless" to describe the effects, powers, or abilities of the Monolith, just remove the word.
 
It's an interesting idea, but there need to be some major changes before this can be approved.

1. I will not ever approve a Force Nexus artifact or location that can empower people across the galaxy in any location. I don't care how they are connected to it, it's not happening. Change the effect of the nexus to localized. This is non-negotiable.

2. The Dark Forge is not located on Aza'Zoth, it was moved years ago by Rave Merrill and is under the purview of Darth Cerbera. I understand Cerbera "owns" the Slave, and she has acknowledged that the Forge could potentially be used to help craft the nexus, but the location of the Forge does not line up with the location of the Nexus. An expansion on its creation will be required if you wish to incorporate the Forge for its creation.

3. The Dark Staff was destroyed. In speaking to the last known owner/user of the Darkstaff I understand that there were a few minor pieces left of the original, one of which was used to create this new version. This would render the new version of it at far less capacity and capability than the original. Given Slave's rank, his low volume of experience in Alchemy-related things, it is my opinion that this entire project is well out of his scope and ability to create, even with the Darkstaff and Dark Forge (items of which the uninitiated and lower-ranked practitioners really would not be capable of utilizing to the full potential). Master Alchemists that have successfully crafted heinous items of this nature would likely still struggle to pull it off. Due to these circumstances, you will be required to heavily tone back the usage of this item unless you can provide hard proof via IC threads that other experienced, Master Alchemists have helped him in its creation.

To recap:
- Expand on the creation of the nexus where the use of the Dark Forge is concerned and explain how it was done when the Forge is not located where the Nexus now stands.
- This item may only be linked directly to and empower the Slave as proof of his continuing education and experimentation on creating Alchemized items.
- This location's effects must be localized to the area in which it resides on Aza'Zoth.
- The nexus must maintain a fixed location. If you want it mobile then I suggest you drastically pair it down to a handheld totem or amulet and resubmit it to the Factory as tech artifact.

Once the edits have been made I will take another look.

If you cannot agree to these required edits then this submission will be denied.

[member="The Slave"]
 
Mahet said:
1. I will not ever approve a Force Nexus artifact or location that can empower people across the galaxy in any location. I don't care how they are connected to it, it's not happening. Change the effect of the nexus to localized. This is non-negotiable.
While this may be for balancing purposes, the offset was that it is no where near even the most basic of nexii in potency. Although you say you wouldn't accept one, that doesn't stop writers from doing the exact same thing in a manner that is completely seperate from what is already being done. I've actually seen a number of characters become a dark side nexus themselves, if not simply become far too powerful to ever require one.

This was just mere rationalization and a narrative point for a different character. The Slave was never meant to be connected to it.



Mahet said:
2. The Dark Forge is not located on Aza'Zoth, it was moved years ago by Rave Merrill and is under the purview of Darth Cerbera. I understand Cerbera "owns" the Slave, and she has acknowledged that the Forge could potentially be used to help craft the nexus, but the location of the Forge does not line up with the location of the Nexus. An expansion on its creation will be required if you wish to incorporate the Forge for its creation.
I am a bit confused on this one. While the Obelisk was meant to be put on Aza'zoth, anything past the creation of it has nothing to do with the Darkforge. As I said originally, this wasn't meant to be a location, it was meant to be something that could be moved in dire situations. Although it was moved to codex by the hot word 'nexus', it was mentioned to be a stationary force artifact. At the current compromise offered, it would make something decently balanced (subjective, I know) into something useless for its intended purpose.



Mahet said:
- This item may only be linked directly to and empower the Slave as proof of his continuing education and experimentation on creating Alchemized items.
Once more, it wasn't meant for The Slave. It was actually meant to be a lifeline for another character, Antherion.



Mahet said:
- This location's effects must be localized to the area in which it resides on Aza'Zoth.
This would turn what would be an original idea for an item into the conventional nexus submission, and even then the more people hear the term 'nexus' the more I fear they get the wrong impression of what it actually does or is.

You are free to deny it. As it stands, the required changes would decimate what originality I had put into the device, and make it something I would neither use, nor have any interest in seeing ever put to use. It would force the characters tied to it to be subjected to a singular area, and while you may say that the 'nexus' itself needs to be stationary, The Darkforge's submission mentions that it too is a dark side nexus that is movable despite its size. Understandably, the submission may seem to be broken or what have you; but I can not abide by the requests made upon me.

Thanks for the effort, at the very least.

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