Approved Tech The Cane of Hrafnar

[Darth Vaildra]

[member="Lily Kirsche Kuhn"]

Thank you!

 

[Cira]

under review

 

[Cira]

RESEARCH REVIEW

Star Wars Canon

• Pending initial review
  http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Sith_sword
• http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Magic_wand
• http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Lignan_crystal
• http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Dark_side_tendrils
• http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Summon_fear

Starwars Chaos

• http://starwarsrp.net/topic/64555-offering-crystals/

WITHOUT DEV THREADS

• Pending initial review

WITH DEV THREADS

• Pending Initial review

SUGGESTIONS

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  The Crystals give it stronger resistance and can now deflect blaster shots

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  The cane is made of alcamized wood to be able to withstand combat with a lightsaber, but is not strong enough to deflect or stop blaster shots.

  These are contradictory statements. Please clarify.
  
  

he beauty of this cane is in the eyes of the Snake which are Lignan gems that are infused with Devaronian Blood Poison. They are infused with alchemy to make them only able to do two things.

Are the ligen crystals infused with alchemy only? How are they infused with a different crystal's attributes? Can you please elaborate the process.

The offering crystals lining the cane wood give it stronger force impediment

Impediment means "A hindrance or obstruction of doing something"
Is this what you are intending?

 

[Darth Vaildra]

[member="Cira"]

Changes have been made.

 

[Cira]

- Increases the power of illusions and shadow shaping (Lignan)

The gems do not enhance the power of illusions of shadow shaping, just the effectiveness and control over them. If the target has no fear it will merely make them feel a lot of pain, but the lightside stronger than Sebastian's ability or a will power stronger than the pain can overcome the hallucinations

Could you please edit the "Special Feature" to match that in the description.

Staring into the eye gems causes it's victims to hallucinate and be dominated by their greatest fear.

If a person looks into the gem eyes when they are glowing they will be overtaken by Summon Fear which will cause them to experience their worst fears to the point of hysteria. The power of Summon Fear is powerful, but the duration is based on many variables like rank, NPC or PC, willpower, ability to resist mental attacks and so forth.

Since you said in the description that this is dependent on many variables, could you please edit the "special features" to say "Staring into the eye gems may ..."

- The offering crystals lining the cane wood give it stronger force resistance. More in last paragraph

I am unsure on how the offering crystals give the can a stronger force resistance. A stronger Force resistance of what?

The current details on the crystals give the following characteristics:

 

[Darth Vaildra]

[member="Cira"]

Done

To answer your question yes they enhance the Force power, but he has them lining the wood to make them act like a lightning rod. So if he uses a force barrier through the cane it will enhance the power and resist the Force more. More than anything it is for show to make him when he can block something, look cooler. Basically due to the offering crystals the cane it an extension of his arm.

 

[Cira]

[member="Cira"]

Done

To answer your question yes they enhance the Force power, but he has them lining the wood to make them act like a lightning rod. So if he uses a force barrier through the cane it will enhance the power and resist the Force more. More than anything it is for show to make him when he can block something, look cooler. Basically due to the offering crystals the cane it an extension of his arm.

So, you are saying that the offering crystal is merely:

The crystals passively enhance the quality of the Force for such defensive powers like a Force Barrier. This does not make the wielder capable of calling on more than they would be capable originally, but does somewhat amplify the output of power to a modest degree of a Force Barrier.

This is based on the verbiage of offering's crystals benefit:

• Passive Force Enhancement: Due to the presence of the force imbued within the crystals they resonate with the force itself, and carry no alignment to light or dark. Each of these crystals passively enhance the quality of the force, which could be compared to an unrefined edge on a blade to a now-refined, sharp, bladed edge - the former being without the crystal, the latter being with its presence. This does not make the wielder capable of calling on more than they would be capable originally, but does somewhat amplify the output of power to a modest degree. (See Below for disclaimer)

If this is correct, please utilize that phrase so it is clear.

 

[Darth Vaildra]

[member="Cira"]

Can you make that change on my behalf? I no longer have a computer and copy and paste is finicky on this Kindle.

 

[Cira]

[member="Lord Sebastian"]

Sure no problem. Give me a sec

 

[Cira]

Okay, over all. Thank you for your patience.

Approved.

 

[Cira]

Approved.