Codex Denied Temple for The Paragons

[Jersan Acklhus]

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OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION

• Intent: More information on the temple from The Paragons religion
• ​Image Credit: guild wars 2
• Canon: N/A
• Links: The Paragons,

SETTING INFORMATION

• Structure Name: Temple of The Paragons
• Classification: School, Temple, Library , Training grounds
• Location: Kalidan
• Affiliation: Eternal Empire, The Paragons
• Accessibility:
  The temple is easy to find and is located tot he side of small community district, for the most part they are open to the public but there are some restricted areas only open to Paragons.
• Description:
  
  A large temple made from the local surrounding stone bricks. out the front it has segmented dueling grounds and a training area, there are two large blue doors with warrior statues to either side of it and indented into the walls are small open faced rooms with training weapons and protective equipment(see image)
  
  inside there are two floors, the upstairs is a sleeping quarter for the younglings and the paragons as well as a few class rooms, the main floor is a lot like a library where information is stored, there are side rooms dedicated to research as well as a mess area for food.
  
  Behind a stone door with the names of paragons carved on its surface is a meditation room and only Paragons and younglings may enter, seekers must first be found worthy
  
  

POINTS OF INTEREST
Training grounds: out the very front of the temple are a training grounds of sort where Paragons and younglings will learn the way of combat and train their physical body, there is not enough room for a running track but jogging around the community is encourage to build stamina,

library: open to all to come and submit research and discuss topics inopen debate, how ever not all the research is readily available and would require the seeker or Paragon to first complete a task for the temple.
Research area: a Very small area the mostly gets unused it is here that the temple can research topics of interest.
Classrooms: A place for younglings to learn
meditation room: A place for self reflection and quiet introspection
mess area: monks gotta eat, younglings are givin a small portion of the food form this hall but paragons and seekers must bring their own food to cook or donate.


SECURITY
Low this is a Civilian heavy area and for the most part peaceful , while the monks can fight and will do so if necessary the building itself has no encampments or defences of any kind

HISTORICAL INFORMATION:

A religious site for The Paragons

a more detailed history can be found in The paragons thread

 

[Kalic Daws]

[member="Jersan Acklhus"]

I like this. Sounds like a cool location. There is a..... You have two "Security" sections. I don't know where the one under accessibility came from, but this should be removed, leaving the main Security section. Also, I would say this has low security, as there are people who can and will fight.

One last thing, though it's not really required, would be to add to the history. This doesn't seem like a place that just appeared, so it'd be nice to see what's happened in the past.

 

[Jersan Acklhus]

[member="Kalic Daws"] hey took your advice upped the security to low and made a link under history to 'The paragons page which has the temples history and a short history of the order itself, also makes people read further into the paragons

 

[Kalic Daws]

[member="Jersan Acklhus"]
While it will work, it would help if you could add a little history to the temple app. Help people understand who built it and things like that better.

 

[Srina Talon]

[member="Kalic Daws"] | [member="Jersan Acklhus"]

Due to the Factory and Codex Annual Shut Down - This Submission is on Hold until after the Holidays and our doors re-open. We will tag you when the submission has been unlocked and judgement may resume.

 

[John Locke]

Jersan Acklhus Kalic Daws

The Codex is now open, thank you for your patience.

Please go ahead and continue your discussion about this review.

 

[Srina Talon]

Jersan Acklhus Any status on this?

 

[Srina Talon]

Jersan Acklhus This submission is being archived due to inactivity. If you would like it pulled to the Pre-Codex so it can be worked on please submit a request via the Submission Modification Forum.