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Technology Submission Modifications

Submission Name: Aegis Molecular Shielding
Link to Submission: Aegis Molecular Shielding
Summary of Modification: Remove SSC from affiliation, add Open Market.
Reason for Modification: Firemane wishes to expand its markets, and has cut ties with SSC.
Modification:
Affiliation: Open Market

Submission Name: Colossus Reactor
Link to Submission: Colossus Reactor
Summary of Modification: Remove SSC from affiliation.
Reason for Modification: Firemane wishes to expand its markets, and has cut ties with SSC.
Modification:
Affiliation: Open Market

Submission Name: Vortex Macro Cannon
Link to Submission: Vortex Cannon
Summary of Modification: Remove SSC from affiliation.
Reason for Modification: Firemane wishes to expand its markets, and has cut ties with SSC.
Modification:
(Change prefix to ‘Approved’)
Affiliation: Open Market
 

Jsc

Disney's Princess
Sub Name: - Gem's Coat
Link: - Gem's Coat

Summary: - Delete old image & add this new one
Reason: - New Art

Mod: - http://i214.photobucket.com/albums/cc72/obsidiantrigger/Factory%20Stuff/BurSuitSm02_zpsvvo2ftck.png

BurSuitSm02_zpsvvo2ftck.png
 
Submission Name: Grip of Enlightenment
Link to Submission: http://starwarsrp.net/topic/77618-grip-of-enlightenment/
Summary of Modification: Adding Mara to Manufacturer; adding one paragraph to explain.
Reason for Modification: Mara got much better at crystal-related crafting, and got experience with the Grip of Enlightenment
Modification:
  • Add Mara D'Lessio Merrill to the Manufacturer line.
  • Add the following paragraph to the end of the Description: When Rave used a Grip of Enlightenment on [member="Kaili Talith"] to treat PTSD, her niece Mara became fascinated with it. After Rave's death, Mara continued to grow as a specialist in crystal-related Force crafting. Eventually the creation of a Grip of Enlightenment was within her reach. Suffering from PTSD herself, Mara became interested in making the Grip of Enlightenment available to others.
 
Submission Name: Boo Chiyo's Personal Lightsaber
Link to Submission: http://starwarsrp.net/topic/53705-boo-chiyos-personal-lightsaber/
Summary of Modification: Archive Topic
Reason for Modification: No longer an item associated with this character.
Modification: Archive topic/submission

Submission Name: Primeval Inspired Light Combat Armor
Link to Submission: http://starwarsrp.net/topic/95004-primeval-inspired-light-armor/
Summary of Modification: Archive Topic
Reason for Modification: No longer an item associated with this character.
Modification: Archive topic/submission
 

Matreya

Well-Known Member
Submission Name: Zerstören Droids
Link to Submission: http://starwarsrp.net/topic/96056-zerstören-droid/
Summary of Modification: Change of metals
Reason for Modification: Wrong metal was tagged and named for some reason. MerrTitan is the incredibly lightweight one.
Modification:
Code:
[URL=http://starwarsrp.net/topic/94863-merrsteel/]MerrSteel[/URL]
swapped for the MerrTitan link
 
Ali Hadrix said:
Submission Name: Verpine Assault Rifle
Link to Submission: http://starwarsrp.net/topic/53414-verpine-assault-rifle/
Summary of Modification: Production Level Change
Reason for Modification: Increase in Production
Modification: Increase Production from "Unique" to "Limited"
Affiliation: Ali Hadrix (Family hierloom)
Manufacturer: Myra Hadrix.
There is nothing which justifies an increased production in the submission, it's made by a single person, and you haven't provided any other changes or development which justify this request.

Your modification request is denied.
 

Sasha Santhe

Majority Share Holder, Santhe Corporation
Submission Name: OmniTech System
Link to Submission: OmniTech System
Summary of Modification: changing up how configurations work for Solar Ionization Cannons.
Reason for Modification: Nerfing it a bit in line with what was discussed in this newer tech entry. The addition include increased space for Solar Ionization cannons.
Modification:

Old:
Light Solar Ionization Cannon (1 OmniSlots)
Solar Ionization Cannon (2 OmniSlots)
Heavy Solar Ionization Cannon (3.5 OmniSlots)

New:
Light Solar Ionization Cannon (2 OmniSlots)
Solar Ionization Cannon (3 OmniSlots)
Heavy Solar Ionization Cannon (4.5 OmniSlots)
(Requires Solar Ionization Reactor to work)
 
Submission Name: Verpine Assault Rifle
Link to Submission: http://starwarsrp.net/topic/53414-verpine-assault-rifle/
Summary of Modification: Production Level Change & Change of Affiliation
Reason for Modification: Increase in Production
Modification: 1) Increase Production from "Unique" to "Limited." 2) Change "Affiliation" from "Ali Hadrix (Family Heirloom)" to "Improvised Designs/CSAF."


Myra Hadrix, the currently labeled "manufacturer," owns "Improvised Designs." With the change in production from "Unique" to "Limited," I need to show that the manufacturer is no longer "Myra Hadrix" herself, but her company, "Improvised Designs."
 

Haytham Kaze

Judge, Judgury, Judgecutioner
Submission Name: Sith Aspis
Link to Submission: http://starwarsrp.net/topic/88430-sith-aspis/?hl=aspis
Reason for Modification: Orcus died after the Invasion of Ruusan. His apprentice, has taken the belongings of the now dead Herglic Sith Lord and has resized them to fit a human user, rather than a Herglic.
Modification:

Manufacturer: Draco Vereen
Model: Sith Aspis
Affiliation: Darth Orcus Darth Athyssius
Modularity: No
Production: Unique
Material: Impevium, Sith Alchemy, Devaronian Edge
Classification: Shield
Weight: 13kg 7.5kg
Quality: 10
 
Grand Admiral, First Order Central Command
Submission Name: Mk 26 'HARM' Guided Missile Weapon System
Link to Submission: [x]
Reason for Modification: Updating my former OS tech to the FO.
Modification:
  • Change Affiliation to: 'The First Order'
  • Change Manufacturer to: 'The First Order'

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Submission Name: 'Bastion' Advanced Fighter/Missile Defense System
Link to Submission: [x]
Reason for Modification: Updating my former OS tech to the FO.
Modification:
  • Change Affiliation to: 'The First Order'
  • Change Manufacturer to: 'The First Order'

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Submission Name: 240mm/83 Mark 74 Hypervelocity Cannon
Link to Submission: [x]
Reason for Modification: Updating my former OS tech to the FO.
Modification:
  • Change Affiliation to: 'The First Order'
  • Change Manufacturer to: 'The First Order'

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Submission Name: Mk 50 Mod 1 'Mauler' Turbolaser Turret
Link to Submission: [x]
Reason for Modification: Updating my former OS tech to the FO.
Modification:
  • Change Affiliation to: 'The First Order'
  • Change Manufacturer to: 'The First Order'
 
Ali Hadrix said:
Submission Name: Verpine Assault Rifle
Link to Submission: http://starwarsrp.net/topic/53414-verpine-assault-rifle/
Summary of Modification: Production Level Change & Change of Affiliation
Reason for Modification: Increase in Production
Modification: 1) Increase Production from "Unique" to "Limited." 2) Change "Affiliation" from "Ali Hadrix (Family Heirloom)" to "Improvised Designs/CSAF."


Myra Hadrix, the currently labeled "manufacturer," owns "Improvised Designs." With the change in production from "Unique" to "Limited," I need to show that the manufacturer is no longer "Myra Hadrix" herself, but her company, "Improvised Designs."
I need a link to the manufacturer so I can hyperlink Improvised Designs to its submission, please.
 

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