Approved Tech Taim & Bak PIR-955 Ultra Heavy Turbolaser Batteries

[Darth Iraath]

Out Of Character Information

Intent: To inflict heavy damage on massive starships and dreadnoughts
Image Source: Based on the Dual 70TT Heavy Turblaser Turret- https://www.artstation.com/artwork/A9JgK5
Permissions: N/A
Primary Source: N/A
Canon Link: N/A

Production Information

Manufacturer: Taim and Bak(https://www.starwarsrp.net/threads/taim-bak.97142/)
Affiltration: First Order( https://www.starwarsrp.net/group/first-order.30/info)

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Model: PIR-955 Ultra Heavy Turbolaser Battery
Modularity: No
Production: Minor Production
Materials: Durasteel(https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Durasteel), Reinforced Titanium(https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Titanium/Legends), Targeting Computer, Sensor Components, Barrel, Galven Coils, Ion Tubes, Shield Emitter, Reactor Components, Elevation Tracking

Technical Information

Classification: Repeating Ultra Heavy Turbolaser
Size: Exremely Large
Weight: Extremely Heavy
Ammunition Type: Power Cell
Ammunition Capacity: Large(20,000 Shots)
Effective Range: Average
Rate of Fire: Very Slowly( 2 Rounds Per Second)
Stopping Power: Average
Recoil: Average

Special Features

• 360 degree Rotation
• 90 degree Orientation
• has as a Personal Deflector Shield
• Fast Targeting Speed
• Maximum Range is 100,000M
• Is equipped with Dual Ion Cannon Mount
• Equipped with Personal Reactor

Strengths

• Fast Recharge Rate
• Enhanced Targeting Computer, to target enemy starships effectively and quickly
• Enhanced Sensors
• Enhanced Deflector Shields

Weaknesses

• Blind Spot at the back of the turret/ batteries
• Weak but strong Deflector Shield

Description

This weapon can only be placed on dreadnoughts due to there massive size and the power requirements. The weapon is like a short range planetary weapon that be used on small moons and small asteroids. Due to the weak armor, the PIR is fitted with an enhanced Deflector shield that can hold back heavy turbolaser fire for a few minutes before failing. The recharge rate of the PIR-955 is at least 4-5 seconds.

 

[Listib Hibin]

We have many problems with this.

• Canon Link: (Please link the canon link if applicable canon item.)

Please add that in.

Manufacturer: Taim and Bak
Affiliation: First Order

Link these please, First Order to the faction page.

Materials: Durasteel, Reinforced Titanium, Targeting Computer, Sensor Components, Barrel, Galven Coils, Ion Tubes, Shield Emitter, Reactor Components, Elevation Tracking

Please link the Durasteel and Titanium to their proper wookieepedia pages.


Now real quick, we have five massive problems.

This weapon can only be placed on dreadnoughts due to there massive size and the power requirements. The weapon is like a short range planetary weapon that be used on small moons and small asteroids. Due to the weak armor, the PIR is fitted with an enhanced Deflector shield that can hold back heavy turbolaser fire for a few months. the PIR-955 can be fitted on space stations such as the Death Stars and Starkiller Base. The recharge rate of the PIR-955 is at least 4-5 seconds.

First off, Super Weapons such as Death Stars, Starkiller Base is just not allowed period on this website without permission from administrators for events which sadly, probably won't happen in the near future. I would kindly ask to remove these references as they are not to be used...at all.

Second, you cannot hold back Heavy Turbolaser Fire for a few months. That is close to pure godmodding and is not allowed, tone that down to a few strikes or something of the like.

Finally, if it is for dreadnoughts and emplacements, we will need to make it lower in production as no one should be able to own it to strap to a frigate.

• Maximum Range is 1,500,000 M
• Kilometers: 1500
• Miles: 932

This is not acceptable. Reduce the kilometers to at least 80-100 as this is just not allowed. That range is more used for firing the death star at someone.

Rate of Fire: Average( 1600 Rounds Per Second)

No, just no. This is not only not allowed but so close to the case of just breaking the game, I do not want to think on it. A turbolaser like this should only be able to fire Very Slowly and at least a shot just like in your description, every couple of seconds.

Production: Mass Production

Since you mentioned dreadnoughts and emplacements for something large, I would recommend the rating Semi-Unique as it would allow it to be placed on several types of dreadnoughts and very important emplacements.

Size: Large
Weight: Heavy

I would recommend also that due to the phrasing of dreadnoughts and emplacements of asteroids, to use the following:

Size: Extremely Large
Weight: Extremely Heavy




That is all my notes for this. I recommend three possible actions.


This submission can be repaired here but in a few days, Factory will be closed and nothing will be worked on so time be more key.

I can push this into Pre-Factory to where it can be worked on and when ready, I can push it back into the Technology Forum. I will even assist if you wish and request it to get this submission up and running to your ideals.

I can deny this submission as this is made for something completely different from probably your ideas. This is a last resort measure and only recommend if this is just drastically not going to work.


Let me know what you wish to end up doing.
Darth Iraath

 

[Darth Iraath]

changed description and information

 

[Listib Hibin]

Production: Low Production

That is not a valid production. You have Mass Production, Minor, Limited, Semi-Unique and Unique.
Darth Iraath

 

[Darth Iraath]

how is that now

 

[Listib Hibin]

Approved!
Darth Iraath