Approved Starship Striker class light cruiser

[Varloc]

OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION

• Intent: A small ship fight for the Order
• Image Source: none
• Canon Link: none
• Permissions: none
• Primary Source: none

PRODUCTION INFORMATION

• Manufacturer: Order of the Force Production Company
• Affiliation: The Order of the Force
• Model: light battle cruiser
• Production: limited
• Material: Durasteel and Alusteel Alloy

TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS

• Classification: Assault ship
• Length: 420 meters
• Width: 120 meters
• Height: 80 meters
• Armament: High, 6 light turbo lasers
• Defenses: High
• Hangar Space: none
• Hangar Allocations:
  • Starfighters: 0
  • Support Craft: 0
• Maneuverability Rating: high
• Speed Rating: high
• Hyperdrive Class: 2

STANDARD FEATURES

• All standard systems

ADVANCED SYSTEMS

• None

STRENGTHS

• Is fast and can penetrate blockades.
• Can land on surface

WEAKNESSES

• Dosnt have very many troops on board, if the ship is boarded it wont be able to defended for long.

DESCRIPTION
This ship specializes in supporting their fleets bigger ships, taking on smaller blockade runners.

• Crew: 34
• Troopers: 30
• Cargo: 5 tonnes

 

[Listib Hibin]

Hey Varloc. Reviewing another submission of yours and got some problems.

• Hangar Space: 4 fighters, and one shuttle can be docked to outside.
• Hangar Allocations:
  • Starfighters: 4
  • Support Craft: 1

• Hangar Space: (Please provide the amount of fighters/support craft this submission can hold in it's hangar by count of Squadrons, which hold 12 average Starfighters. The higher your squadron count, the lower your Armament and number of advanced systems should be. )

200m [Base: 0 | Very Low: 0 | Low: 0 | Average: 1 | High: 2 | Very High: 3 | Extreme: 4 ]
500m [Base: 0 | Very Low: 1 | Low: 2 | Average: 3 | High: 4 | Very High: 5 | Extreme: 6 ]

You are at the 200 meter range as you cannot round up at 420 to 500. Please repair this and on the Hanger Space, give it a rating so I understand where you are at.

STRENGTHS

• Is small and can sneak past bigger ships.

I am not sure how it can do that. Not a valid strength which is strange to say. Maybe say it is faster than most frigates or a blockade runner?

WEAKNESSES

• Cant pack apunch like bigger ships

Not a good weakness as you are at a High armament. Therofore please make another weakness. Things like Exposed Bridge, Exposed Rear, ect.


Also a few spelling errors. Optional but it makes it look nicer.


Till then, I cannot accurately rate this submission till this is done. Please let me know when you done the necessary changes.
Varloc

 

[Varloc]

Fixed
Listib Hibin

 

[Listib Hibin]

Varloc

You are over three ratings. Please reduce some.

 

[Varloc]

I do believe it's fixed
Listib Hibin

 

[Listib Hibin]

Varloc

WEAKNESSES

• Evan though it has good firepower, it isnt great at fighting off larger ships.

Not a valid weakness. Try a different one. Also please make sure you are checking your spelling.

 

[Varloc]

Fixed
Listib Hibin

 

[Listib Hibin]

Approved, awaiting Mentor Approval.

Varloc
John Locke

 

[John Locke]

Varloc | Listib Hibin

APPROVED