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Approved Location Starlight Ranch

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OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION
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SETTING INFORMATION
  • Structure Name: Starlight Ranch
  • Classification: Ranch
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  • Affiliation: Dracken Pryce
  • Accessibility: The Starlight Ranch is private land owned by Dracken Pryce. At the time of its operation, he was both Diktat of Corellia and a retired Vice-Chancellor of the Galactic Alliance. As such it was heavily monitored by the SIA and Corellian Defense Force intelligence. There was a rotation of Corellian Darksaber guards on duty at all times and a local Coronet Frontier garrison of CorSec Army Troopers were nearby to aid in the evacuation of the Pryce family and all staff should danger be reported to the planet or the area. Outside of the standard protections offered to a former Alliance Vice-Chancellor and a current Corellian Diktat, the land was periodically patrolled by ranch hands and nerf herders who run the ranch's daily operations on the back of Orbaks or Steelees. The land was fenced in according to Corellian agricultural code and could be accessed from the air or a long dirt road that led out to one of the new main highways for landspeeders.
  • Description: Starlight Ranch was a 3,500-acre ranch dedicated to the raising of Nerf, Bantha, Pamarthen Sheepo, Dray, and Po'ackster. It ranged in habitat, though mostly consisted of grazing lands. A long river cut through the property at various points and there were large portions of woodland dotted throughout the property. The ranch was about an hour flight out of Coronet or a five hour drive. Though it produced a variety of different animal products, it was mostly known for its Nerf products and its Po'ackster pink milk. The ranch also made use of Mandalorian Vornskr and Corellian Hounds
POINTS OF INTEREST
  • Starlight Ranch - The ranch house where the Pryce family could live and entertain guests. It was mostly made out of wood and durasteel combining a Coronet city barrack with a rustic Corellian ranch. There was a decently large pond out front and a garage large enough to hold several speeders. There was a short runway and two starfighter hangar. Behind the house was a landing pad for a large CEC-style transport.
  • The Hills - Rolling hills behind one of the forests. It was the main pasture for the bantha.
  • The Farm - Where they kept the smaller farm animals such as Pamarthen Sheepo, Po'ackster, Dray, and other small livestock. It was fairly close to the main house
  • Pastures - The Nerf pastures. There were several sectors that were rotated as the season and years went on.

SECURITY - High
The home of a Corellian head of state and ex-Vice-Chancellor, Starlight Ranch was attended by and monitored by the Corellian Defense Force and the SIA to watch for the safety of Dracken Pryce and his family. The main building and its surrounding area is protected by a modest shield generator. Outside of the generator, much of the monitoring and security is done secretively so as to impede on the family's life as little as possible.

HISTORICAL INFORMATION
Purchased after he first retired from politics during Chancellor Auteme Auteme 's first term, Starlight Ranch was at first meant to be a retreat for Dracken where he could finally slow down to be with his family. However, the last few years of the Second Great Hyperspace War made it difficult for him to spend time with his son and the years of "Clean up" afterwards even more so. In the mean time he spent time with Ava Cartwright-Pryce Ava Cartwright-Pryce and built up a large presence in the agricultural revolution of Corellia. His ranch also provided veteran services using rescued Fathier to aid in the healing process of PTSD after the decades of constant war that had taken its toll on the Galaxy. The ranch was a place of healing and reflection for both Dracken and the soldiers he invited onto his land.

 
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Breaker of Chains
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Dracken Pryce Dracken Pryce

Nice submission you have here! Love the idea and concept behind it. Before I can stamp approval on it though there is one thing that I will ask for some additional information on.

In the Security section your rating for it is High but the actual description under it is a bit vague. It seems as though you go more into the details of the Security in the Accessibility section. Just moving some stuff around and making sure to link specific assets in the Security description to give it a bit more detail and maybe demonstrate how the Security itself functions there would be good!
 
Breaker of Chains
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Dracken Pryce Dracken Pryce

Just more detail on the defenses or defensive measures in general. In Accessibility for instance you mention patrols and a few organizations that keep an eye on the ranch. Those sorts of details, as well as links to said organizations if they have them, would be helpful in fully visualizing the defense of the location.
 
Breaker of Chains
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Dracken Pryce Dracken Pryce

Hard numbers are rarely applicable anyway! The extra detail you've added is enough, there is however one little link missing. The SIA, which I've grabbed the link to here for ease of access, still needs to be linked given the integral inclusion and mentions of it. Just do that for me and you'll be good to go! And I do apologize for the inconvenience!
 
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