Feedback Six Month Retrospective: Calix of Thyrsus

[Calix of Thyrsus]

So it's been 6 months since I created this character. He's been in and out of a few threads, been in an invasion, and interacted with many writers that I hadn't previously written with (which is always a good thing, I think).

What am I doing with the character that you like?

What do you not like about the character?

Am I writing a Thyrsian worth a damn or have I managed to offend the galactic sensibilities from Eshan to Thyrsus? To be clear, he probably wouldn't mind offending Echani sensibilities, but I digress

For those unfamiliar with the character, here are a few highlights:

Socorro: Stray Julius Strut
NJO 101 Intercultural Relations
Shaka, When The Walls Fell​

 

[Jasper Kai'el]

Calix is a wholesome lad and I would kill someone for him. Aside from that, I've loved seeing the dude grow. The consistency of his personality while keeping to the themes of youth and development are all great. Maybe some more of the berserker rage could be cool. It may be worth dedicating some time to that.